Senninka (sage transformation)

Clan Name: Merakuro
Clan element/'s:None
Special characteristics/traits: Prone to emotional outburst normally rage. Jinchiruki chakra pool
Location:Scattered

Bloodline Name: Senninka - Sage Transformation
Bloodline Ability:

• passively absorb natural energy
  

  Spoiler:

• communicate with animals, not control (not insects and species of similar brain functions)
  
• Transform body fully or partially into weapons or a monster like form, general size is kept
  
• Boosting non sage transformation techniques by one rank. When using natural energy by paying the chakra cost of the techniques next rank.
  
• For those have trained at Ryuuchi Cave and overcome the berserk episodes they will increase their Sensory mastery by one capped at master
  
• Clan members will get Jinchuuriki Chakra Pool.
  

Drawback This ability comes with cost of berserk episodes.
Whether or not your character goes berserk be up to dice roll.  Every time you are hit or face something that affects emotions and you want to restrain yourself the dice is rolled (one per instance). Getting hit multiple times in the same post will count as once instance.  Every time the dice is rolled you need the next number higher and higher to succeed.  Success will be not transforming.

D-Rank , you must role a 8 or higher to succeed.
C-Rank you must role a 7 or higher to succeed.
B+Rank, you must role a 6 or higher to succeed.

After your in level one and still want to restrain the process repeats.


This problem can be managed by training 1000+ words at Ryuchi cave. Training must happen over the course of at least a week. You must role play your discovery of Ryuchi Cave this doesn't count towards training.  Training is meant to gain self control for situations where one doesn’t want to transform.
Berserk mode: This is not a jutsu but state of emotion where the individual's bloodlust rises and their personality changes to an extreme.  This change negatively impacts their judgment prior to training. During this state the untrained are reckless, will likely negatively impact, and the mission.  This is a symptom of natural energies effect on the body of clan members. However they are at their strongest at this point.  
Before training will cause perception to be lowered. Genin are a danger to all including allies. Chunin are a danger to allies they haven't role-played with. The exception would be if they are feeling negative emotions toward ally. Jonin+ are not a danger to allies.

After training: Perception is enhanced 4.5x average (those who don’t have basic are average). Genin are not a danger to allies, if they know of the other person. For example they have seen each other around the village... Chuunin and higher are capable of restraint.
At any given time members can choose to stop restraining themselves and transform to either level if they are of the required rank.


Secret Clan Jutsu:
Sennin transformation
Lvl 1 can be used be all ranks
Description User gather natural energy creating a dark pattern on their body that varies with user.  In this form user is able to apply natural energy to their techniques and their taijutsu is powered up what would be equal to a half mastery level. If they are trained they will gain a sensory level that is capped at master.
Lvl 2 Sp Jonin+ and trained Chunin
DescriptionThe user gathers more natural energy allowing them to change their body into a monster like form.  This ability can't allow the user to grow more than five inches.  Going into this state voluntarily before training will cause user to go berserk. User gains full mastery level of taijutsu. If they are trained they will gain a sensory level that is capped at master.
Partial Transformations: The body will gain the appearance of level one and access to 1 or 2 appendages from level 2.  The point is a higher degree of self-control while access to the appendages of level two and some of the jutsu.  This must be trained for 500 words


Canon Secret Clan Jutsu
Name:Rebirth Absorbtion
Rank:B
Type:Iryo, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Supplementary
Element:None
Range:12in
Duration: Varies with injury
Hand Seals/Charge up:None
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed a hollow needle-like protrusion will come from their palm.  It will then suck out the chakra along with flesh and or organs of it target healing the user of physical damage. This will also restore him if he uses Cellular Regeneration Ejection

Name:Cellular Regeneration Ejection
Rank:B
Type:Medical, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Supplementary
Element:None
Range:12in
Duration: Depends on injury
Hand Seals/Charge up:None
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed there palm will be take on the appearance of a mollusk's siphon It will then pump out chakra along with flesh and or organs of the user healing the target of physical damage. The user isn't damaged by this.
Weakness: The users body will shrink in size compensating for loss of flesh.

Name:Kusari (Chain)
Rank:D
Type:ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Offensive, Supplementary
Element:None
Range:12m
Duration: 1 post maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up:None
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed They can extended a limb or neck to attack an opponent or grab/reach something

b]Name:[/b]Piston Fist
Rank:C
Type: Senjutsu Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, bloodline
Used For:offense
Element:
Range:physical contact
Duration: Upkeep cost for each strikes that hits something.
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:The user will alter his arm into a piston to increase his attack power. Increase strike power half taijutsu mastery

Name:Multiple Lotus Nonself Connected Cannons
Rank:S
Type:ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Offensive
Element:None
Range:20m
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up: equivalent to a Master in ninjutsu doing 8 hand signs
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation large cone shaped appendages will grow from users back facing the direction in which they will fire.  Chakra will gather in small yellow balls resembling light around each cone appendage.  Once enough chakra is gathered it will fire a fast beam of chakra at target.  Traveling at taijutsu mastery speeds
Cool down 7of the users post. Maximum of twice per thread.
Weakness: Leaves the user heavily fatigued. No chakra discounts.

Name:Jet booster jump
Rank:B
Type:ninjutsu
Used For:Supplementary
Element:None
Range:N/a
Duration:Upkeep
Hand Seals/Charge up:1 second
Description:while in his partial or full transformed state, creates many jet-like appendages on his back to create a powerful blast pure chakra. He then jumps, giving him power to quickly manoeuvre through the air, as well as greatly enhance his speed on the ground. Enhances speed once mastery level.

Name:Piston Fist: Style One
Rank:A
Type:ninjutsu, taijutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Offensive
Element:None
Range:arm length
Duration: maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up:None
Description: A more powerful version of jet booster jump and piston fist.  The jet appendages are created on the arm in addition to the the piston from piston fist. Increasing the power of strikes made with the arm or fist.  This technique can send something flying a great distance or shatter bones.

Name: Destroying axe fist
Rank:C
Type: Senjutsu Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, bloodline
Used For:offense
Element:
Range:physical contact
Duration: until released
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Creates and axe on the users forearm large enough to curve over fist. This axe is durable to to stand up to real metal weapons.

Chakra transfer techniques: Allow one chakra user to give their chakra to another. This something normally limited to medical ninja. however members of this clan can as well.

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[b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rebirth_Absorption]Rebirth Absorbtion[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]B
[b]Type:[/b]Iryo, Senjutsu, Bloodline
[b]Used For:[/b]Supplementary
[b]Element:[/b]None
[b]Range:[/b]12in
[b]Duration:[/b] Varies with injury
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]None
[b]Description:[/b]While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed a hollow needle-like protrusion will come from their palm.  It will then suck out the chakra along with flesh and or organs of it target healing the user of physical damage. This will also restore him if he uses Cellular Regeneration Ejection

[b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cellular_Regeneration_Ejection]Cellular Regeneration Ejection[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]B
[b]Type:[/b]Medical, Senjutsu, Bloodline
[b]Used For:[/b]Supplementary
[b]Element:[/b]None
[b]Range:[/b]12in
[b]Duration:[/b] Depends on injury
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]None
[b]Description:[/b]While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed there palm will be take on the appearance of a mollusk's siphon It will then pump out chakra along with flesh and or organs of the user healing the target of physical damage. The user isn't healed damaged by this.
[b]Weakness:[/b] The users body will shrink in size compensating for loss of flesh.

[b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Chain]Kusari (Chain)[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]D
[b]Type:[/b]ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
[b]Used For:[/b]Offensive, Supplementary
[b]Element:[/b]None
[b]Range:[/b]12m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post maintainable
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]None
[b]Description:[/b]While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed They can extended a limb or neck to attack an opponent or grab/reach something

b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Piston_Fist]Piston Fist[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]C
[b]Type:[/b] Senjutsu Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, bloodline
[b]Used For:[/b]offense
[b]Element:[/b]
[b]Range:[/b]physical contact
[b]Duration:[/b] Upkeep cost for each strikes that hits something.
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]The user will alter his arm into a piston to increase his attack power. Increase strike power half taijutsu mastery

[b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Multiple_Lotus_Nonself_Connected_Cannons]Multiple Lotus Nonself Connected Cannons[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Type:[/b]ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
[b]Used For:[/b]Offensive
[b]Element:[/b]None
[b]Range:[/b]20m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]5 seconds
[b]Description:[/b]While the user is in lvl 2 transformation large cone shaped appendages will grow from users back facing the direction in which they will fire.  Chakra will gather in small yellow balls resembling light around each cone appendage.  Once enough chakra is gathered it will fire a fast beam of chakra at target.  Traveling at taijutsu mastery speeds
[b]Cool down [/b]7of the users post. Maximum of twice per thread.
[b]Weakness:[/b] Leaves the user heavily fatigued. No chakra discounts.

[b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Jet_Booster_Jump]Jet booster jump[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]B
[b]Type:[/b]ninjutsu
[b]Used For:[/b]Supplementary
[b]Element:[/b]None
[b]Range:[/b]N/a
[b]Duration:[/b]Upkeep
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]1 second
[b]Description:[/b]while in his partial or full transformed state, creates many jet-like appendages on his back to create a powerful blast pure chakra. He then jumps, giving him power to quickly manoeuvre through the air, as well as greatly enhance his speed on the ground. Enhances speed once mastery level.

[b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Piston_Fist:_Style_One]Piston Fist: Style One[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]A
[b]Type:[/b]ninjutsu, taijutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
[b]Used For:[/b]Offensive
[b]Element:[/b]None
[b]Range:[/b]arm length
[b]Duration:[/b] maintainable
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]None
[b]Description:[/b] A more powerful version of jet booster jump and piston fist.  The jet appendages are created on the arm in addition to the the piston from piston fist. Increasing the power of strikes made with the arm or fist.  This technique can send something flying a great distance or shatter bones.

[b]Name:[/b][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/destrying_axe_fist] Destroying axe fist[/url]
[b]Rank:[/b]C
[b]Type:[/b] Senjutsu Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, bloodline
[b]Used For:[/b]offense
[b]Element:[/b]
[b]Range:[/b]physical contact
[b]Duration:[/b] until released
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]Creates and axe on the users forearm large enough to curve over fist. This axe is durable to to stand up to real metal weapons.


Note the difference between levels is the difference between master and adept.

Clan History: This clans ability originates from Ryuuchi Cave. Before the ninja system the other clans of the times called them the Berserker clan. Originally the clan made there home near Ryuchi cave. The clan had no formal structure or hierarchy but this clan was prone to fighting. Many of the members would wonder around the region picking fights with other clans and animals. Sometime after the ninja system when Ninja stopped fighting amongst themselves they gathered together and started a war that caused many of this clans members to die and scatter. Later clan members would think that snakes or Ryuchi cave cursed them. And that their clan had received this cursed power by making a home on the Ryuchi cave grounds. Only the snakes and perhaps a hidden villages deepest archives hold the knowledge of this clans name.

Members: 0/3
Permission from Meko

It ready FYI

•Transform body fully or partially into weapons or a monster like form, general size is kept

General size is...?

Note that those who get Sage sensory mastery increases 2 stages

I feel like we talked about this but I forgot, this doesn't go past mastery right?

This ability comes with cost of berserk episodes. The more fighting, emotion, or dangerous the thread is the more likely the character will go berserk. Those who are not trained will go beserk Genin in C-rank+ mission will go berserk Chuunin can potentially berserk at C but will at B+ Same pattern with other ranks

This problem can be managed by training 1000+ words at Ryuchi cave. Training must happen over the course of at least a week. After training Genin will not go berserk for C ranked mission Chuunin for B Jonin for A. Sranked missions will eventually cause berserk state to Srank shinobi but they will able curtail it.

So I see that on mission topics you go berzerk but that ain't much of a drawback. Make it where if you are in a topic with one or more shinobi of higher rank you can also go berzerk mode.

1000 words for each rank or how does this work? Lemme explain what I told you on the cbox homie.
Genin- 1000 words to master berzerk mode (or however you're foing it)
Chuunin- 1.5k
Spec jounin- 2k
Jounin+- 3.5k

And you have to do this for each rank you go up but if you start at a higher rank you only have to do the WC equal to the rank you applied for.

Berserk mode: This is not a jutsu but state of emotion where the idividuals bloodlust rises negatively affect their judgement and lowering perception (the reason why they don't get the sensory boost Sages would get). During this state the untrained are reckless and will likely negatively impact and the mission. However they are at their strongest at this point.
Before training will cause perception to be lowered. Genin are a danger to all including allies. Chunin are a danger to allies they haven't rped. The exception would be if they are feeling negaitve emotions toward ally. Jonin+ are not a danger to allies.
After training: Perception is not lowered but enhanced. Genin are not a danger to allies, if they know of the other person. For example they have seen each other around the village... Chuunin and higher are capable of restraint.

At any given time members can choose to stop restraining the berserk mode and take the power up regardless of training. The training is meant to suppress.

[-]Even though it's not a jutsu could I get a template stating exactly the advantages and disadvantages of bloodlust mode?
[-]Jounin+ will still be a danger but make it where you can't kill an aly while in the state~
[-]How is perception enhanced?

Sennin transformation
Lvl 1 can be used be all ranks

Lvl 2 Jonin+ and trained Chunin
Partial Transformations

Cannon Secret Clan Jutsu

#Templates~

Name:Body Absorption
Rank:C
Type:ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Supplementary
Element:None
Range:12in
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up:None
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed a hollow needle-like protrusion will come from their palm. It will then suck out the flesh of it target healing the user of physical damage. This technique can also be used to heal others by offering their own body.
Weakness:The user doesn't recover from fatigue and even after healing will still need time to recuperate depending amount of damage taken. If used to heal others they will loose all power boost given to them by Sennika until they are healed and the remainder of the thread. They will also loose the ability to use lvl 2 for the rest of the thread

Make it B rank and a two post duration being able to restore any damage except from a certain killing blow.

Name:Kusari (Chain)
Rank:D
Type:ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Offensive, Supplementary
Element:None
Range:All
Duration: 1 post maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up:None
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed They can extended a limb or neck to attack an opponent or grab/reach something
Weakness:The user arm is vulnerable by being far away from the body, easier to hit.

How far can it reach and how fast will it go?

Name:Chakra Blast Cannon
Rank:S
Type:ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Offensive
Element:None
Range:20m
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up:5 seconds
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation large cone shaped appendages will grow from users back facing the direction in which they will fire. Chakra will gather in small yellow balls resembling light around each cone appendage. Once enough chakra is gathered it will fire a fast beam of chakra at target
Cool down 10 of the users post. Maximum of twice per thread.
Weakness: Leaves the user heavily fatigued. No chakra discounts.

Can lower cooldown to 7 posts. How fast?

Name:Jet booster Jump
Rank:B
Type:ninjutsu
Used For:Supplementary
Element:None
Range:N/a
Duration:Upkeep
Hand Seals/Charge up:1 second
Description:while in his partial or full transformed state, creates many jet-like appendages on his back to create a powerful blast pure chakra. He then jumps, giving him power to quickly manoeuvre through the air, as well as greatly enhance his speed on the ground. Enhances speed once mastery level.
Weakness: While using this technique the path once can take is linear meaning the path is predictable making them susceptible to countering.

Enhances speed once mastery level? Can you fix up everything so I can get a clear understanding please?

On top of what Joker added, Juugo does not posses the sage mode Naruto, Jiraiya and Kabuto are capable of. However, he can use natural energy to alter his body and strength. You wouldn't receive all the same benefits as Sage Mode. After extensive research of Juugo, it is clear that his transformation simply offers a boost in strength similar to that of Sage Mode. In other words Sage Mode =\= Sage Transformation

By general size I mean they user can't grow unreasonably in height
As the application says it is capped at master

They don't train more for every rank. They train once. Why would someone of higher rank take more training?

Templates for what there is no range rank chakra type hand signs. level one is litteraly changing part of the body to level two.

Senjutsu does more at lesser rank then normal techniques

Ill add more to Kusari and chakra Cannon

I don't remember what I was saying about jet booster but will get to that as well

I defined the benefits of sage mode as it relates to the application Boosting Ninjutsu Genjutsu. Natural energy can be added to non Senjutsu attacks for the cost of one rank higher) One level sensory boost as appose to sage mode which get two

I defined the benefits of sage mode as it relates to the application Boosting Ninjutsu Genjutsu. Natural energy can be added to non Senjutsu attacks for the cost of one rank higher) One level sensory boost as appose to sage mode which get two

That's the thing though. Your access of natural energy would only intensify taijutsu capabilities. Doesn't apply to a sage mode as all as it was just a loose translation due to lazy English editors. Sage mode =/= Sage transformation. The only thing they have in common is access to natural energy.

Right the do not equal. I can take out that reference to sage mode as not to mislead. But just like sage mode through this ability of passively using natural energy one would be able to to boost the other ninja arts. For example Jugo applied natural energy to Sasuke's Susasno

You should incorporate a better system for going berserk instead of certain rank missions try a dice roll that depends on the person rank they etc. Also the risk of going berserk is hardly a drawback when you can simply train your way around it.

(clans don't have to have drawbacks) I like the dice roll when I make my edits ill add that also

And plenty of clans have a general weakness when they are prone to body mutation.

Name:Chakra Blast Cannon
Rank:S
Type:ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Offensive
Element:None
Range:20m
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up:5 seconds
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation large cone shaped appendages will grow from users back facing the direction in which they will fire. Chakra will gather in small yellow balls resembling light around each cone appendage. Once enough chakra is gathered it will fire a fast beam of chakra at target
Cool down 10 of the users post. Maximum of twice per thread.
Weakness: Leaves the user heavily fatigued. No chakra discounts.

Needs more for weakness


Name:Body Absorption
Rank:C
Type:ninjutsu, Senjutsu, Bloodline
Used For:Supplementary
Element:None
Range:12in
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up:None
Description:While the user is in lvl 2 transformation or partially transformed a hollow needle-like protrusion will come from their palm. It will then suck out the flesh of it target healing the user of physical damage. This technique can also be used to heal others by offering their own body.
Weakness:The user doesn't recover from fatigue and even after healing will still need time to recuperate depending amount of damage taken. If used to heal others they will loose all power boost given to them by Sennika until they are healed and the remainder of the thread. They will also loose the ability to use lvl 2 for the rest of the thread

eats flesh to heal yourself? not sure how this applies to senjutsu and even so its would be a medical technique and you'll need some sort of iijutsu skill.

(Clan members can use chakra transfer techniques)

Explain this thoroughly please.

Cannon: Although its written above weakness Cool down, exhaustion (which hinders the ability fight), a cap on the number of times it can be used, and the lack of discounts you don't think four weaknesses is enough?
Body absorption:, a canon technique, was done by Jugo who has no medical training

hey bud, to solve this issue why not change the name to natural energy absorption/body manip clan instead of sage mode? They way things can be defined a little easier and there will be no arguing about the similarities and differences between Naruto and jugo. Jugo isnt a sage but he still uses natrual energy to boost his abilities and change his body. Make it so that when they are in this said berserk mode that they can only use non elemental nin/tai (chakra cannons is nin, regular fighting is tai, making an axe on the arm imo is nin and tai so yea) So basically when they are using clan techs they cant use any other type of elemental stuff or whatever. THAT would be a good weakness. Jugo did use the needle thing, but that is canon. Healing others is http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cellular_Regeneration_Ejection but that requires curse seals. your chakra blast cannon is http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Multiple_Lotus_Nonself_Connected_Cannons and your needle thing is http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rebirth_Absorption. You need to use the actual canon jutsu in this template, study jugo more, use his canon jutsu, then maybe add in a few customs yourself. Jugo's sage transformation was all natural not having to focus so he cant really control it until at higher ranks. Use the dice roll, and have a higher range of numbers a ninja can get if they are at a higher rank and vice versa. The senninka is sage transformation, not sage mode, specifically stated here http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sage_Transformation. do your research son, im sure you will make this work.

This is like my 4 attempt at response i keep closing it out so I will be short not nearly as sweet.

Thank you I didn't look at databook updates

Never called it Sage Mode and had removed references

The burden of no elements is to heavy of anchor. Jugo had three elements and I don't think this was something he could not use with while transformed. I do see the value or merit or what I can't describe of your proposed weakness

Dice roll still on the way as soon as i can think of system

the no using jutsu while in transformed state was just a suggestion for the weakness, maing it easier for you to work around it, so once you read the databook and edit ill come back and check.

you know what is also needed? How much nature energy one can hold before they berserk and such. I think that needs to be the same as the rank the user is, so when you use one of the transformation things it takes from the nature energy side, and when nature energy is added to techs to increase their strength it takes from both pools.

All I can say to that is that if someone makes else make it for Sage Mode I'll adapt. I want to keep it simple it a simple dice roll. No separate chakra pools, unless someone else makes the system. Like its so often stated its not sage mode, therefore he doesn't need gather certain amounts. So for its pull from regular chakra and im cool with that.  I wanted to give the clan Jinchiraki's to functions as the extra natural energyl chakra pool but figured that it would be asking to much. If Im not mistaken to add natural energy to other techniques it the user pays an additional rank of chakra

Come at me Bros

Everyone's input to no one?

bumps over 9000

"Clan members will get an increased base chakra pool and Jinchuuriki Chakra Pool while using natural energy. When they stop using natural energy there chakra pool will be equal to percent of chakra consumed in their transformed state. For example if while transformed you have 300 chakra you used 90% then upon transforming back you have 26 chakra."

Pick one pool not both

You do know that I mean their chakra increases while drawing natural energy right? Not that they have two pools.

Either way changed