Kajiya, Poncho(Custom Jutsu)

Name: Kemushi Amu(Caterpillars Arm)
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Range:0-10 meters
Duration:2 post
Cooldown:7 post
Description: (1st Post)Poncho performs a small string of handseals, then places both palms onto a source of earth. Then arms of earth 2 feet thick surface in front of Poncho and slowly pursue the target. While the arms are being controlled Poncho must keep both palms planted to their source of earth. (2nd post)If an arm successfully subdues the target it hardens, allowing the rest to catch up.  Upon all of the arms catching the target, they will be encased neck to toe in a solid block of stone.(Target will be subdued for 1 Post, or Targets above D-Rank can automatically break binds.)

Name: Taitanzu Ikari (Titans Wrath)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Range:Close- Mid (0-10m
Duration: 2 Post
Cooldown:6 Post
Description: After a quick set of handseals, Poncho uutilizes a source of Earth to create a fist. This fist is about 5feet thick, and is controlled by Poncho, but Poncho must keep his hands on his source of earth. It moves at roughly 35mph, so it does hurt upon collision. Since it is normal earth being used the arm can be broken by a considerable solid force. The arm may surface anywhere within a 10ft diameter of Poncho.

Name: Haji no Kabe(Wall of Shame)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Range: 0- 5 meters
Duration:3 Post
Cooldown: 6 Post
Description: After a small set of handseals Poncho places his hands onto the ground, then lifts them upward, creating a wall of earth. This wall is 10ft high, 10ft wide, and a couple inches thick. It also has Ponchos face with his tongue out on it. It can withstand 3 D-Rank attacks or 1 C-Rank.

Name: Daichi to Sora Konbo(Earth and Sky Combo)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu & Taijutsu
Element:Doton
Range:Contact
Duration:2 Post
Cooldown: 5 Post
Description:Using his Doton chakra nature Poncho buries underground for his attack.(May spend 1 post underground) He then surfaces from below the target with and uppercut followed by a pair of clasped fist aimed for the opponents head/face. Causes fractures and bruising.

Name: Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack)
Rank:C
Type: Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Range:Close(0-5m)
Duration:1 Post
Cooldown: 5 Post
Description: This technique is a starter, or base, for many deadly taijutsu. This technique is simply a kick that strikes at the bottom of the chin to send the opponent straight into the air, in a dazed state. It causes mild disoriented, due to a blow to the head region.

Name: Genteiban(Limited Edition)
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Range: Close (0-5m)
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown:Once Per Topic
Description: After performing Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack), Poncho strikes the targets chin or stomach, with a barrage of kicks(5 Kicks) while he is upside down. Each kick slowly, but steadily increases the pairs altitude. On the 5th and final kick, he focuses on pressing himself down towards the ground, thus pushing the target further up, but him down. This leaves the target with fractures and bruising in their jaw.

Name:Būsutāpakku(Booster Pack)
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close(5-10m)
Duration:Instantaneous
Cooldown: Once per Topic
Description:After performing Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack), Poncho leaps to appear in front of his airborne opponent. He then delivers a furry of fist into their torso, finishing with one to the face, sending them towards the ground. Strikes are blockable, but highly unlikely from disoriented state from Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack). Technique cause bruising, cracked, if not completely broken ribs, and mild internal damage.

Name:Īguru Shizuku(Eagle Drop)
Rank:B
Type:Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Range:Close(5-10m)
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: Once per Topic
Description:After performing Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack) or Genteiban(Limited Edition), Poncho jumps straight up to meet his opponent and clasp onto them. Ankles around the opponents arms in attempt to bind them, and arms around the legs keeping them clasped together, the gripping is hard to escape for opponents without Taijutsu specialization, from grappling not being a commonly trained martial art, and being in the air while doing it. If the grapple is successful, Poncho then shifts the pairs direction into a downward decent, aiming to slam the opponent head first into the surface below. This can be possibly fatal, and causes major neck injuries.
If followed by Genteiban(Limited Edition), the damage is greatly increased, from the increased elevation. The results of the attack if followed by Genteiban(Limited Edition), are self harming though and leave Poncho exhausted

Name: Bijuu Cloak
Rank: D
Type: Jinchuuriki
Element: N/A
Range:N/A
Duration: 5 Post
Cooldown: Once a Topic
Description: When greatly angered Poncho's bijuu takes advantage of this state, and imbues his body with its chakra. It heals minor cuts and scratches.(Scratches, not bruises missing limbs, gashes and shit, mostly for aesthetics.) This cloak is red and transparent, and boost Poncho's speed and power by a rank. ie: Genin on par with Chunin. Poncho loses all awareness, not able to tell friend from foe, and attacks on instinct. After 5 post the cloak dissipates and Poncho is extremely exhausted.

I don't know if I'm qualified to create Bijuu jutsu or if they already exist, but here's my take.

In the future, you can just put your Jutsu on your app instead of applying for them separately. But this is fine.

Before I can review any of your jutsu thoroughly, Genin may only have 8 total techniques to begin with. One must be removed, although it can be learned at a later time.

I am aware I just made the extra to learn at Chunin Rank, I'm going to apply the ones I want now to my Char.

Please specify which one that is, then.

For starters, in the 'Type' section of the Jutsu, please put the kind of Jutsu it is (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, etc.) instead of the offensive/defensive/supplementary that you currently have.

• Kamui Amu: I think you mean C-Rank or higher for that last bit. Although I'm sure anyone over B-Rank could break through without using Taijutsu, of any kind.
  
• Sanpanchi: Boost it up to a C-Rank. It is too similar to the Fire Ball technique to be a D-Rank, even if the burn-damage is not on the same level.
  
• Haji no Kabe: This is basically Earth Style Wall, yes? There's no reason for it to really be custom, although it does seem weaker than a normal Earth Style Wall. Bump it up to a C-Rank technique if it can withstand multiple D-Rank techniques.
  
• Hamiwari Roa: I am not entirely sure how this technique would enhance Taijutsu. It doesn't necessarily make the user any faster/stronger. Everything else is fine, though.
  
• Gosutosuteppu: This seems like a Genjutsu, but it does not seem to be a C-Rank technique. This is, essentially, just the Clone Technique - in fact I'm not entirely sure why anyone would need Chunin level speed to use it. You can bump this down to a D-Rank, but you don't have to get this technique at all, since it is so similar the Clone Technique.
  
• Hamiwari Roa No.2: Might want to find a new name for this technique, to not confuse other people. Also, I think 'Mayacess' is supposed to be 'May access', right? This is pretty much okay, though.
  
• Daichi to Sora Konbo: There exists a technique like this already - The Headhunter technique. Although you follow up with a few basic moves, that doesn't really set this technique apart from the other, it's just used in a different way. Once again, you don't have to make this a custom if you don't want to.
  
• Bijuu Cloak doesn't have to be apped, I don't believe. It is an ability that all Jinchuuriki are expected to have, although I'd recommend leaving it there to see if another staff member says otherwise.
  

Made fixes. The reason I made the techniques custom though they are similar to already existing techniques, is because my char is a kind of an artist and adds tiny spins on pre-existing moves.
Ghost step is hard to explain, I made it Taijutsu, because it basically only relies on speed sorta... Here is were I got the idea from, this explains it better than I can.

Dragon Ball Wiki
Theoretically, the Afterimage Technique is a move that can be performed (to some degree) in the real world, since it merely requires moving faster than the eye can see. This is a similar phenomenon to that of one moving their hand back and forth very fast, and seeing a sort of afterimage of the hand. However, the speed at which the Z Fighters move their entire bodies is far too much for a normal human to perform.

Because Bijuu Cloak is an assumed ability, may I add another to make my total 8 disregarding Bijuu Cloak?

I had a feeling that Ghost Step was based off of the Afterimage technique. However, the technique you're describing is done utilizing hand-seals, which means that chakra is molded to preform the technique, which would make it a Genjutsu. I'm also pretty sure that there's an Afterimage Technique in the Naruto Universe, but I may be wrong.

Adding personal flares to a technique doesn't necessarily make it a new technique - I know what you mean, but when only the aesthetics change, it's not really a different technique.

For now, you may add in a separate technique and disregard the Bijuu Cloak, and leave it there - but if the other mod(s) request it to be removed or edited, be prepared to do so.

Tsugeki Genshi wrote:
Adding personal flares to a technique doesn't necessarily make it a new technique - I know what you mean, but when only the aesthetics change, it's not really a different technique.

I know what you mean, but it seems like a pain to have to describe all of the extra details about appearances every time I wanted to use EarthWall Jutsu, or what ever it may be. When I could just make it a "new"/modified jutsu. Sorry for the confusion.

Also I'm sorry I didn't mentoin that I revamped the description of Ghost Step, to make it more Taijutsu fitting. I would appreciate if you took a peek at it.

You -can- keep your customs, although they just seemed excessive to me.

The problem with your afterimage is that Chunin-Level speed isn't actually fast enough to make that after-image. Jounin-level speed, which would include Kakashi and Might Guy's speeds, couldn't create after-images of themselves either, without expending chakra. This is why I discourage converting powers from other series into the Naruto Universe, because they simply don't fit.

I'll leave it to whoever rates your app next to decide whether or not that applies here, though.

For now, 1/2 ~

Tsugeki Genshi wrote:
The problem with your afterimage is that Chunin-Level speed isn't actually fast enough to make that after-image. Jounin-level speed, which would include Kakashi and Might Guy's speeds, couldn't create after-images of themselves either, without expending chakra. This is why I discourage converting powers from other series into the Naruto Universe, because they simply don't fit.
For now, 1/2 ~

I understand, so I will delete the technique, I don't want to step on any feet hehe I just started.

Jutsu killed, and ready to be judged for my other 1/2

Approved 2/2

Dammit you checked it while I was editting. I thought I would be fast enough to not have to put WIP. I deleted techniques, since my chars chakra affinity, got locked and added more Taijutsu. In other words this needs to sadly be looked at again. Sorry guys, I know I'm a pain in the ass.

Poncho wrote:Name: Kemushi Amu(Caterpillars Arm)
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Range:0-10 meters
Duration:2 post
Cooldown:7 post
Description: (1st Post)Poncho performs a small string of handseals, then places both palms onto a source of earth. Then arms of earth 2 feet thick surface in front of Poncho and slowly pursue the target. While the arms are being controlled Poncho must keep both palms planted to their source of earth. (2nd post)If an arm successfully subdues the target it hardens, allowing the rest to catch up.  Upon all of the arms catching the target, they will be encased neck to toe in a solid block of stone.(Target will be subdued for 1 Post, or Targets above D-Rank can automatically break binds.)

Name: Taitanzu Ikari (Titans Wrath)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Range:Close- Mid (0-10m
Duration: 2 Post
Cooldown:6 Post
Description: After a quick set of handseals, Poncho uutilizes a source of Earth to create a fist. This fist is about 5feet thick, and is controlled by Poncho, but Poncho must keep his hands on his source of earth. It moves at roughly 35mph, so it does hurt upon collision. Since it is normal earth being used the arm can be broken by a considerable solid force. The arm may surface anywhere within a 10ft diameter of Poncho.

Name: Haji no Kabe(Wall of Shame)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Range: 0- 5 meters
Duration:3 Post
Cooldown: 6 Post
Description: After a small set of handseals Poncho places his hands onto the ground, then lifts them upward, creating a wall of earth. This wall is 10ft high, 10ft wide, and a couple inches thick. It also has Ponchos face with his tongue out on it. It can withstand 3 D-Rank attacks or 1 C-Rank.

Name: Daichi to Sora Konbo(Earth and Sky Combo)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu & Taijutsu
Element:Doton
Range:Contact
Duration:2 Post
Cooldown: 5 Post
Description:Using his Doton chakra nature Poncho buries underground for his attack.(May spend 1 post underground) He then surfaces from below the target with and uppercut followed by a pair of clasped fist aimed for the opponents head/face. Causes fractures and bruising.

Name: Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack)
Rank:C
Type: Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Range:Close(0-5m)
Duration:1 Post
Cooldown: 5 Post
Description: This technique is a starter, or base, for many deadly taijutsu. This technique is simply a kick that strikes at the bottom of the chin to send the opponent straight into the air, in a dazed state. It causes mild disoriented, due to a blow to the head region.

Name: Genteiban(Limited Edition)
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Range: Close (0-5m)
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown:Once Per Topic
Description: After performing Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack), Poncho strikes the targets chin or stomach, with a barrage of kicks(5 Kicks) while he is upside down. Each kick slowly, but steadily increases the pairs altitude. On the 5th and final kick, he focuses on pressing himself down towards the ground, thus pushing the target further up, but him down. This leaves the target with fractures and bruising in their jaw.

Name:Būsutāpakku(Booster Pack)
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close(5-10m)
Duration:Instantaneous
Cooldown: Once per Topic
Description:After performing Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack), Poncho leaps to appear in front of his airborne opponent. He then delivers a furry of fist into their torso, finishing with one to the face, sending them towards the ground. Strikes are blockable, but highly unlikely from disoriented state from Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack). Technique cause bruising, cracked, if not completely broken ribs, and mild internal damage.

Name:Īguru Shizuku(Eagle Drop)
Rank:B
Type:Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Range:Close(5-10m)
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: Once per Topic
Description:After performing Sutātāpakku(Starter Pack) or Genteiban(Limited Edition), Poncho jumps straight up to meet his opponent and clasp onto them. Ankles around the opponents arms in attempt to bind them, and arms around the legs keeping them clasped together, the gripping is hard to escape for opponents without Taijutsu specialization, from grappling not being a commonly trained martial art, and being in the air while doing it. If the grapple is successful, Poncho then shifts the pairs direction into a downward decent, aiming to slam the opponent head first into the surface below. This can be possibly fatal, and causes major neck injuries.
If followed by Genteiban(Limited Edition), the damage is greatly increased, from the increased elevation. The results of the attack if followed by Genteiban(Limited Edition), are self harming though and leave Poncho exhausted

Name: Bijuu Cloak
Rank: D
Type: Jinchuuriki
Element: N/A
Range:N/A
Duration: 5 Post
Cooldown: Once a Topic
Description: When greatly angered Poncho's bijuu takes advantage of this state, and imbues his body with its chakra. It heals minor cuts and scratches.(Scratches, not bruises missing limbs, gashes and shit, mostly for aesthetics.) This cloak is red and transparent, and boost Poncho's speed and power by a rank. ie: Genin on par with Chunin. Poncho loses all awareness, not able to tell friend from foe, and attacks on instinct. After 5 post the cloak dissipates and Poncho is extremely exhausted.

Approved 2/2

Jutsu For Training
Name:Chikyū Kokūn(Earth Cocoon)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Range:Close (0-5m)
Duration: 2 Post
Cooldown:5 Post
Description:After a small array of handseals, Poncho erects a hollow pillar of earth anywhere in a 5 meter diameter. The hollowed pillar only has enough space for one body, and reaches about 15ft into the sky. It can withstand 2 D-Rank Jutsu and 1 C-Rank, before breaking. Someone could enter through the top though.

Name:Dangan Panchi(Bullet Punch)
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Range:Contact
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown:5 Post
Description: Poncho takes a twisted crouched stance with both arms down to his right side.(similar to how Ryu would prep for a Hadouken, or Goku a Kamehameha.) Then launches a double fisted punch, while shifting his weight toward his opponent, at their Sternum. This causes shortness of breath, internal damage, and bruised or cracked bones.

Name: Yamaarashi Shotta(Porcupine Shot)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Range: Close-Mid (0-10m)
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown:  5 Post
Description: After a quick array of handseals, Poncho targets a section of earth, then strikes it. Whether it be punch, kick, stomp, headbutt,etc. The angle of the earth can be altered to Poncho's liking, via grabbing an pulling. This section of earth then fires a barrage of 50 earthen "quills"at roughly 45mph, similar to senbon or nails. It causes minor numbness to the opponent, due to so many nerves receipting pain in such a small moment, and puncture wounds.

Bump

Chikyū Kokūn(Earth Cocoon)

C rank as a D rank cannot take a C rank damage unless it matches the jutsu rank.


Yamaarashi Shotta(Porcupine Shot) How many? How fast do they move?

fixes attempted