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3Genesis Lava Techniques  Empty Re: Genesis Lava Techniques Mon Jul 28, 2014 7:51 pm

Poncho

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Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

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Genesis Lava Techniques  73m2

Name: Ash Clone Technique
Rank: C Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Supplementary
Element: Lava Release
Range: 50 Meters
Duration: Four Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Clone Hands Sign
Description: The user creates a clone out of the usage of volcanic powders which are volcanic rubber and ashes into one. The material for the clones can be found from volcanic activity, pre-existing, or he can breath it out of his mouth of his pores. The clones require significantly less chakra to make in comparison to shadow clones but can interact just like most other clone techniques.
Weakness: C and above wind, water, and fire attacks can blow away the clones.

Name: Lava Release: Limelight Technique
Rank: C Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive and Defensive
Element: Lava Release
Range: 40 Meters 15m
Duration: Two Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Monkey, Ram, Tiger, Bird
Description: The user expels a large quantity of quicklime from their mouth, which is capable of inflicting damage to an opponent. Additionally the user can cause the quicklime to emit an intense glow, but in order to set off the necessary reaction, the user needs to add a fire technique to the quicklime. The light from the quicklime is so bright it can be seen from a couple of miles and is useful for blinding and distracting foes.
Weakness: C and above water technique blow away the limelight.

Name: Contract Unseal Technique
Rank: C Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Supplementary
Element: None
Range: Point Blank
Duration: Five  Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Tiger, Bird, Rat
Description: The user creates four hand seals that will creat a kanji of the word unseal. Once this technique makes contact it release any summoning technique C and one rank above summoning. releases a summoning technique? Elaborate on what that means, because you're not making much sense. If it's sending a summon back to where it came you need Fuinjutsu
Weakness: It needs to be full contact to work.

Name: Lava Release: Bahamut
Rank: B Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Lava Release
Range: 60 Meters 20m
Duration: Five Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Monkey, Ram, Bird, Dragon, Snake
Description: The User makes hand seals the plans his hands on the ground. As from the ground up a lava dragon will be raise as the dragon will be made out of lava and molted rocks making it hard for a technique to destroy it with one hit. The dragon is like a jet once it make contact with something it burns it to the ground even B rank Doton techniques.
Weakness: B and above water technique can solidified the dragon.

Name: Lava Release: Wall of Magma Technique
Rank: B Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Defensive
Element: Lava Release
Range: 10 Meters
Duration: Four Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Monkey, Ram, Bird, Snake, Dragon
Description: The user performs several hand signs as he open his mouth as lava will be spill into the ground until making a wall of lava. The wall can handle B rank technique and below also is very hot that can cause A rank that's not how we describe burns and besides it'd be a B-Rank burn. use 1st, 2nd, or 3rd degree.burn, the wall is 15 meters tall. width?
Weakness: A rank B-Rank, water is strong against lavawater techniques can solidified the Wall until crumbling.

Name: Body Seal Technique
Rank: B Rank
Type: Fuinjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Point Blank
Duration: Four Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Rat, Tiger, Snake, Dragon, Boar
Description: The user performs hand signs that will surrounds the users arms int black kanjis. Once the user makes contact with the opponent the kanjis will go from the user to the opponent sealing the opponent body like chains only with sealing kanjis.
Weakness: Both hands need to  touch the opponents. Not one, not a bit, not a tap needs to be both hands fully. to make the kanji's transfer it seems like more than a tap is needed, since they need time to transfer. Not a whole post of contact, but a decent amount of time

Name: Lava Release: Lava Hydra Bullet Technique
Rank: A Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Lava Release
Range: 50 Meters 25m
Duration: One Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Monkey, Dragon, Snake, Tiger, Board, Dog
Description: The user performs several hand signs to make the technique. By release lava frond his hands to the ground, three snake like lava monster will rise each of them are 15 meters long your range here is contradicting the range up above.in distance and travel at a adept Taijutsu speed. If made contact the snake can burn the opponents skin of or nearly kill them.
Weakness: The technique can be solidified by A rank and above water techniques.

Name: Lava Release: Lava Prison Technique
Rank: A Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Lava Release
Range: 10 Meters this is a close range technique, just like water prison
Duration: Five Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Monkey, Snake, Bird, Dog, Tiger, Boar
Description: The user will surround the opponent in a lava prison. This will cut the respiration short and cause the opponent to faint forin two post, not for two post immediately that's ridiculous two post. Also it could be use defensively to protect the user from A rank and below techniques. needs to take all of the weaknesses of water prison too, if you're just going to change the element.
Weakness: A rank Piercing technique can go threw the prison and water technique A up can solidified the ball.

Name: Black Hole Technique
Rank: A Rank
Type: Fuinjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 65 Meter
Duration: One Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger, Ram, Dog, Snake, Bird, Rat
Description: The user will release four seal on his body each seal will have the kanji of trap. After the seals are release the seal will start to leave the body like ink dripping in the ground until it reaches its distance. Once it reaches its distance any caught within its reach will be absorbed in a black hole. time space basically, denied
Weakness: The technique kills the user in the process.

Name: Lava Release: Ifrit
Rank: S Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Supplementary
Element: Lava Release
Range: 100 Meters
Duration: Six Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Monkey, Ram, Dragon, Bird, Dog, Tiger
Description: A giant humanoid monster made of molten rock and lava. Usually formed through his chakra, the user  has absolute control of it. The demon can spew out lava blast and balls while using its massive strength to crush all in its path. Mighty wars that can shake the earth and those who stand on it. At full size, it can size up to other giant warriors. Kinjutsu, since this is basically equal to Wood Human Susanoo and stuff
Weakness: S Rank and up water technique can solidified this monster. need waaaaaaaaaaay better weaknesses for something of this caliber

Name: Lava Release: Earth Crumbling Impact
Rank: S Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Lava Release
Range: 150 Meters
Duration: Two Post
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: The user will make the required hand seals and then release their chakra into the ground. The earth surface for up to 150 meters will start to split as lava veins melt the surface creating a large multitude of lava cracks that start to destroy the terrain. This technique is capable of altering the terrain to the users advantage as the lava released from the cracks begins to melt away any form of cover or small rockery. Larger peices of earth such as platous or mounds will form cracks just the same but will become scared and disfigured as lava spills over them. This technique is essentially capable of affecting and altering a large piece of land in a matter of moments.
Weakness: User cannot move will performing the technique.

Name: Body Release Unfold
Rank: S Rank
Type: Fuinjutsu
Used For: Supplementary
Element: None
Range: Self
Duration: Keepable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger, Clap hands, Dragon
Description: the user will surround his body in seals as this would suppress his chakra and balance it for a faster and smoother fighting still. The user can also release the seal as this opens more chakra points of the body making him adept Taijutsu speed.
Weakness: This technique warns out the user.

Name: Lava Release: Lava Sphere
Rank: S Rank Kinjutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Lava Release
Range: 10 Meters
Duration: Two Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Monkey, Ram, Snake, Dog, Dragon
Description: The user performs hand sign. Afterwards the user releases a lava sphere on his hand. Once the technique makes contact with the opponent or any material even S rank Doton it will burn it melting it and breaking it into pieces. Human bones will be shattered if touch by the technique, ground, walls, rocks, even metal will melt and dissolve. S rank and below Doton techniques will crumble.
Weakness:  Water A and S rank technique can solidified the sphere.


finish the rest later. Also make all water techniques need one less rank to solidify the lava. Water is this elements weakness, so an A-Rank water tech can combat an S-Rank Lava one.

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5Genesis Lava Techniques  Empty Re: Genesis Lava Techniques Thu Jul 31, 2014 12:39 am

Shinkirou

Shinkirou
Hokage
Hokage

To clarify, you were asked to mark the Suiton advantage one rank beneath the technique (A B-rank water can combat an A-rank), however, you still list some needing suiton techniques of the same rank to affect these. Please make the edits accordingly.


Contract Unseal Technique
This is undistinguishable from what Minato uses on the Kyūbi. As stated, you’ll need some talents in Fūinjutsu to utilize this. However, also add in that your aptitude in Fūinjutsu needs to be higher than your opponents (An adept can release the contract seal of a basic, etc). This will add some sense of equilibrium and objectivity to the technique.

Lava Release: Wall of Magma Technique
Make the width of this wall ten meters as well. That’s more than enough space to completely block yourself and allies, if need be. Twenty is just bizarre for the rank and dimensions already stated.

Body Seal Technique
You never added in the duration needed to fully constrict an opponent as Jun asked. Also, four posts are incredibly long for this technique to have absolute effect. Cut this in half and make the interval needed for full transfer more evident in the description please.

Lava Release: Lava Hydra Bullet Technique
While this isn’t really a demand, but more so a suggestion, it will be better for you to make it known that these serpents can move outwards to a maximum length of twenty-five meters. Nothing big, just the phrasing is kinda off.

Body Prison Technique
Please clarify this better. Does it take two whole posts to completely seal the opponent’s mobility, or just the portion of the body touched? If two posts is the duration for full paralysis, how long does this technique last after the fact?

Lava Release: Ifrit
I’ll agree with the aforementioned grading on the fact that this, for what it does, needs better drawbacks. Firstly, you’d pay the duration of what an S-rank technique’s upkeep would be, not C-rank (unless a certain utility makes it more logical to do so, which in this case, it doesn’t). Kinjutsu are forbidden because they’re not only powerful beyond belief, but also dangerous to the user. Make its negatives more interesting or more balanced with its positives.

Lava Release: Earth Crumbling Impact
I’ll start with you didn’t list the Handseals for the technique, but mention needing handseals; please add them in. Secondly, the range of this technique is extremely large. Please drop it (50 meters, in my opinion, is more than enough for an S-rank technique that’s not a Kinjutsu and on this scale of efficiency)

Body Release Unfold
As it stands, I don’t feel comfortable allowing this technique to be approvable. It functions exactly like the Hachimon (8 gates) but in a sealing technique variant (and the chakra points aren’t sealed by fūinjutsu). As it stands, this can’t be approved until you think of another way to make this acceptable (at least for me). There are a lot of methods to increase speed without going to the chakra points.


Outside of grammar-related things, I’ve went through your techniques. Hope these changes aren’t too much to ask of you and when you’re done, just bump again.

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7Genesis Lava Techniques  Empty Re: Genesis Lava Techniques Thu Jul 31, 2014 10:10 pm

Shinkirou

Shinkirou
Hokage
Hokage

Lava Release: Ifrit
This being such a powerful technique, I’d like for you to go with my original decision and just make its upkeep that of an S-rank, seeing as its protocol for something with no sophisticated function or higher purpose.

Body Release Unfold
You’ll need to word this properly to avoid exploitation. Being weightless wouldn’t make you faster, but it would make your positioning dependent on your environment (a slight breeze would be strong enough to knock you off your feet, let alone a fūton technique which would send you flying). Also, you added in this absorbing chakra now? You have on technique two operable purposes? Why? And how does it take in chakra?


The rest are approved, doe.

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9Genesis Lava Techniques  Empty Re: Genesis Lava Techniques Mon Aug 04, 2014 5:38 am

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approved.

10Genesis Lava Techniques  Empty Re: Genesis Lava Techniques Thu Nov 13, 2014 10:35 am

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