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1Burning Tear Empty Burning Tear Mon Aug 25, 2014 9:51 am

Kokoro Gishiki

Kokoro Gishiki
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

Burning Tear Udnn

Name: Burning Tear
Requirements: Suuhai clan; given to one member per generation
Item Type: Eye | Body modification | Seal
Elemental Type: N/A
Picture:
The Seal:
Description: The product of a cultish ritual preformed upon one member of the clan every generation upon their birth, it is said that the God of the Volcano who created the clan speaks personally to the elders of the clan when they select the recipient and that he himself places it during the ritual. Regardless, the sealing formula is grafted onto the recipient’s eye only upon the barer reaching puberty and, often times, after graduation from the local ninja academy. The ritual itself is astoundingly painful though confers to the recipient certain advantages. Their understanding of fuinjutsu increases, their eye capable of, by some ill-explained mechanism, aiding them in understanding new sealing formulas, thus causing them to require a smaller than normal word count to learn. Additionally, the eye augments the user’s sensory skill, increasing it by one rank.
Materials: N/A; product of a ritual preformed on an eye.
History: N/A [Mostly in description]
Abilities: Increase sensory skill by one and cuts word cost of training fuinjutsu by 40%.
Total Price:500 + 3000 = 3500



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2Burning Tear Empty Re: Burning Tear Thu Aug 28, 2014 8:34 pm

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Under Review

Sorry for the long wait.

This seems more like a Fuinjutsu than an item.

3Burning Tear Empty Re: Burning Tear Thu Aug 28, 2014 10:32 pm

Kokoro Gishiki

Kokoro Gishiki
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

No problem!

And I suppose that, technically, it is a fuinjutsu and a special ritual, but I thought to register it as an item since it irreversibly alters the eye on which it is placed and isn't intended to be placed by PC's (the NPC elders of the clan place it essentially). I'm not really sure if all that makes sense. It also isn't intended to have like an upkeep since it simply confers some passive abilities.

So, would you suggest that I re-submit it as a jutsu, or will an item suffice? Either is fine with me really. XD

Thanks!

4Burning Tear Empty Re: Burning Tear Tue Sep 02, 2014 6:11 pm

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Under Review

Okay. One thing though, decrease to 40% on your Fuin discount.

5Burning Tear Empty Re: Burning Tear Wed Sep 03, 2014 2:23 am

Kokoro Gishiki

Kokoro Gishiki
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

All fixed!

6Burning Tear Empty Re: Burning Tear Fri Sep 05, 2014 5:53 pm

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Approved

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