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1Swagbito Empty Swagbito Tue Sep 23, 2014 6:19 am

Swagbito

Swagbito
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin





Swagbito ><font color="Power is not will, but the phenomenon of destroying physical objects. "

Swagbito P91b

Name: Swagbito
Nickname: Swag
Age: 17
Gender: M
Village: Konoha
Village Rank: Genin
Skill Rank: D


Swagbito V128

Height:
5'5
Weight: 93 lbs
Hair color: Black
Eye Color: Brown in Normal Form. Red in Dosinki Form.
Looks Image:   [img]     http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRdx4vzNfC7_Hw9a7xJ1DXz2WKSzt8cA4NThFK9Hoy7MF3jZrBQ        
Looks Description: Swag wears a blue cloak like kimono that goes to his feet and beyond.   He hides his headband on his arm under the kimono. He hides his identity under his dark shades.  His dark hair is spiky. He has a severe injury on his left of his face.  His skin is a tanish pale. You can say he is pretty tone for someone who doesn't work out.  His legs are surprisingly long too. His arms are about 2 feet which is pretty average for his age.  His face is round and his chin is sharp.  His ears aren't very big. Swagbito also has his Dosinki Form. This is a forum that only happens when Swagbito experiences some kind of tragic situation or trauma. He grows horns on his shoulders and forehead during this form. He has swirls on his chest during this form. Not only does his power significantly increase, but he gains a metal staff during this form, holding it with his left arm. Since Swagbito doesn't have many clothes and doesn't get any money, he is almost never seen with his Kimono.  His father gave it to him when he was 7,so he wears it the remember him. Occasionally, on hot days/missions Swagbito may be seen with a blue, short-sleeved shirt.

Personality Description: He rejects all emotions and is very quiet.  He has no friends because of it. He only does what's he told making him praised upon his teachers and senseis. He is thought to be stuck up due to this.  He stays in the dark allys of the village and gets likely at times.  He occasionally makes friends with the bugs and rodents, making him disgusting at first glance. If you try to talk to him don't expect a response.


 If you are to annoy him you are in for a whole world of pain.  He won't be afraid to even if your a female.  Most avoid him because of this too. Overall, you could say that Swagbito has a shy and dark personality.  At least that's what most people think.  If you get the chance to know him, he can really open up.

Basically, the only time he talks is when completely nessasarry. He doesn't talk so much that some actually thinks he's a mute.  He doesn't care one bit about what anyone says about him, though,as he knows that words can't phase him.  Words didn't mean anything to him in the first place anyways.
Likes: Healthy Food, Training, Darkness
Dislikes: Light, Comrades, Sweets
Catch Phrases: Nindo:" always finish the mission"

Swagbito 73m2

Element Affinity: Fire
Sub Element Affinity: N/A

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History:

At the age of 6,Swagbito was a powerful and gifted child, destined for greatness.  He became a ninja at 7 and is very praised due to this fact. His teachers want him to be Hokage. That was his dream until.....

At the age of 13,Swagbito witnessed an event that changed his life.  He and his team were surrounded by dozens of S-rank ninja on an S-rank mission . He was on this mission as all Jonin were on missions so he was sent instead. He tried to save his Comrades but failed in the end.  They all died.  He was the only survivor.  He could've died if it wasn't for his Dosinki Form.

He sustained severe injuries after this.  He thinks that that event could have been prevented if he finished them off.  He now rejects all emotions at the fear of something like this happening again. He  now fights for his village and only his village, finishing the mission no matter what.

He has said to himself that if a teammate is injured or sustained useless, he will kill them off.  No one knows of this. Swagbito has a plan to change the world.  He calls it "Project No Gingnem".  He will gain all the trust of the village.  Then he will kill all the Kage and rule the world.  His intentions aren't bad, he just wants to create a world of peace.

No one knows of Project No Gingnem.  And he has no intention of telling anyone.  He has no interest at becoming Hokage.  He thinks it's a child's game.

Swagbito thinks that power is everything.  There is no need for friends.  Power is all we need......

Swagbito is a double edged sword basically.  In life he is lonely and dark.  In battle he is a weapon that can't be rusted.  He thinks everyone is a pawn to be used and destroyed.

His parents died when he was 15. He turned into an even more, lonely, emo, psychopath. Everyone is nice to him only because they feel sympathy for his loss.

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Last edited by Swagbito on Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:11 am; edited 14 times in total

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2Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Tue Sep 23, 2014 6:50 am

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Under Review

This application has a way to go before it's approvable. First off, you should had deleted everything in front of the [b][*/b] tag.

Second, no such thing as a C Genin on this site. You are to be D.

Third, your appearance is inadequate. To be frank, you didn't even attempt to write one, and writing the appearance isn't an option. It's a requirement, so do it.

Fourth, Personality is inadequate. It should be at least one entire paragraph, or 200 words. What you have isn't acceptable.

Fifth, history is inadequate as well. We learn absolutely nothing about your character from it. Except for the fact that he's considered a prodigy, and that his teachers wanted him to be Hokage. So that needs to be expanded on. You have been alive for seventeen years, no reason for the history to be short.

And lastly, you never got admin permission to create an Uchiha. And to not waste your time, I shall deny the request to make an Uchiha.

3Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Tue Sep 23, 2014 8:22 am

Swagbito

Swagbito
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

Done Setoshi.

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4Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Wed Sep 24, 2014 1:27 am

V

V
Konoha Jounin
Konoha Jounin

Mmh, do yer wanna fix the top image link of your application?

Your personality does need more work, thus anubis's 200 word req. is strict. Develop your character.

History:
He and his team were surrounded by dozens of S-rank ninja on an S-rank mission. He tried to save his Comrades but failed in the end. They all died. He was the only survivor.
You were a Genin. Why were you on a S-rank mission? What was it about? Why were you surrounded? And how did you survive an onslaught from dozens of S-rank mission?



5Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Wed Sep 24, 2014 1:37 am

Swagbito

Swagbito
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

fixed

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6Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:53 am

Swagbito

Swagbito
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

edited again.

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7Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Thu Sep 25, 2014 3:27 am

Kuroo

Kuroo
Konoha Chunin
Konoha Chunin

Swagbito wrote:He grows horns on his shoulders and forehead during this form. He has swirls on his chest during this form. Not only does his power significantly increase, but he gains a metal staff during this form, holding it with his left arm.

• You cannot just say from appearance changing, (knowing you're basing your character off of Obito) your power will increase. This would be a clan related effect, so you can possibly create a clan about it, saying your form will change, yadayadayada.

8Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Thu Sep 25, 2014 3:28 am

Swagbito

Swagbito
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

I'll make a clan when my app is approved.

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9Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:06 am

V

V
Konoha Jounin
Konoha Jounin

At the age of 13,Swagbito witnessed an event that changed his life. He and his team were surrounded by dozens of S-rank ninja on an S-rank mission . He was on this mission as all Jonin were on missions so he was sent instead. He tried to save his Comrades but failed in the end. They all died. He was the only survivor.
Meh. Still pretty iffy on you being sent on a S-rank mission when at best canon Konoha is willing to offer is a squad of capable genin led by a chunin on an A-rank rescue mission. If you were led by S-class ninja, then I could go with that, but I'd still like more details regarding the mission especially what it was about and why there were so many S-classes there and such. Just craft the story of the mission that had such a traumatic impact on your character's life (doesn't have to be terribly long though). And as mentioned earlier, do mention why you were the only survivor and how you survived attacks from so many S-classes.

10Swagbito Empty Re: Swagbito Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:31 am

V

V
Konoha Jounin
Konoha Jounin

.....

Hey! Let's go!

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