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"The world was once a calm place, now it is a place of unending chaos"

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Name: Asce Amaterasu
Nickname: Golden Eyes


      Amaterasu has inherited of the 'dragon' eyes. But unlike those of the others, hers lack the velvet reddish brown color that the copper eyes are supposed to have. Instead, her eyes seem to be made of liquid gold.

Queen Of Chaos

Amaterasu is called the queen of chaos because she likes to be the center of the chaos that now resides in the land weither she was the one who caused it or not remains to be seen  but she likes to be around or is around when the chaos begins.

Age: Thirty [30]
Gender: Female
Village: Tanimuragakure
Village Rank: Kage
Skill Rank: S


Asce Amaterasu. Apii

Height:
6'1
Weight: 180 Pound
Hair color: Yellow
Eye Color: Golden/Yellow
Looks Image: Asce Amaterasu. 11mfhpj
Looks Description: To be a warrior that wears the name of a deity means that one should carry herself with pride and strength. Amaterasu is the female incarnation of that. Strong, well placed arrogance, she appears confident and mighty. Although her face is most of the time hidden, she has something approachable, something that can people believe that she is a protector. The woman has always her back straight, shoulders squared to make herself look taller and larger, as to impress. Her pace is brisk, large steps making her move around swiftly, but silently.
Of average height and slim but athletic build, Amaterasu has something elegant despite the tomboyish appearances. Her gestures are always finished, fingers seemingly to be like that of a danger, fleeting and precise. And yet, one should not underestimate the strength in those hands, as their grip can be vicious.

She has rugged looks. A skin that seems to be more appropriate to find in the freelands and hair that seems to have been chopped off in a uncontrolled manner, Amaterasu does not reflect the graceful beauty of the sun goddess. And yet, she is not disagreeable to the eyes, as many would say.
Her eyes seem to contain the sun in them, as her blond hair does. Round curves, long legs and arms and when she allows it, her jaws show off a strong, somewhat square line. Straight nose, well proportioned lips, she would have been a great beauty had it not been for the scars that mar her cheeks. Those scars are of a blueish tint and have ugly traits, zigzagging over her cheekbones and jaw, some part of it showing that the wounds had been bone deep. They have left her nose, lips and eyes unblemished, but one cannot ignore them.

Her whole body is covered in muscles that could have certain other kunoichi pale in envy. A strict training program along with a strict diet and sleeping habits keep her in tip-top form. She takes pride in her body, working on it and making sure to keep it well toned. But unlike many may think, Amaterasu has no wishes to seduce half of the worlds populace by doing so. She does it merely because of practical reasons. A kunoichi is good health is one that is more likely to be successful in missions and victorious in battles, as well as capable to survive hardships with more ease.

Amaterasu has a strange habit of wearing clothes that barely cover her upper body, leaving the underside of her chest and mid drift completely naked. And as in to make up for that, she covers her face up as much as possible, hiding behind a large and wide collar that reaches up to hide her face up till the bridge of her nose. The jacket, of which the collar is part of, has long sleeves, that cover up till the balls of her hands, from under which hands covered with white gloves can be seen. All of it is in the colors of white and black, black being only seen on the stitches and a few decorative lines near the pipes of the sleeves. On the collar, two round golden fixtures are apposed on the white texture - they represent nothing and are simply there for decoration.
She disregards the jacket only a few times. When she is in the safety of her home, when she is demanded to do so by a superior, when she wishes to appease the never ending curiosity of the youngsters and when she is in a heated battle.

Under the jacket, she wears most of the time just as revealing clothes, but still wears a high collar that hides her face as well - this one, she can pull down with ease, but has a great amusement to see the shock of people when they think at first it is a large grin made of bones. Attached to that collar, something that resembles like a bone armature holds her breasts, barely covering them. The armature closes under her chest. There are no sleeves to the 'shirt' and she only wears wrist gloves that could be seen from under the jacket's sleeves.

Attached to her back, is her short sword. It is placed in a manner that she can easily reach for it. It is held in a white scabbard, which is directly fixed to the jacket as well.

As pants, she has a preference for the large ones that priests seem to prefer. And yet again, she seems to be able to defy gravity and common sense, as it hangs onto her hips in a rather daring manner. The large pipes hide her long legs that only a few rare "lucky" ones mau have been able to admire. Again, as in to make up for the lack of decency she seems to have with some parts of her clothing, the pipes go down and hide her feet almost completely. As for her footwear, they are simple black boots with a sturdy sole.
Around the black sash that serves her as belt, pouches containing various things can be found.

Amaterasu is not one to have a frivolous habit to wear jewelry. The only indulgence she has allowed herself to have as a woman are the small beads that are in a single lock of hair, at the left side of her face. They are of an emerald color, the same color her eyes had before she got the golden color with the activation of her bloodline. The beads are of several sizes and types of spheres and ovals.
She wears never make up, but has an uncanny habit to wear perfume. The woman has a preference for spicy smells and they suit her well, as they accentuate her strength as well as bold manners. And at the same time, those smells she prefers also remind some of the younger ones of their own mothers, the flagrance somehow reminding them of their homes.
Lastly, she has a gothic "3" tattooed on one of her breasts. No one, not even herself, knows why she has it - it is the result of a dare brought up in the middle of a drinking contest.

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Personality Description:

The Confident

   Amaterasu is many things, but one thing she is above all others is confident. It did not come easy and she has doubted herself during her youth, as all do. She has felt inferior and broken, but has strived to make herself better for the sake of her fallen father.



  The Humble

      Despite her confidence, Amaterasu is an extremely humble person. She can be quite soft spoken at times and always says thanks. She if the first to credit her parents and sensei's for who she has become and will quite often shy away from the spotlight. Despite her flamboyant exterior, she does not like to be the centre of attention. People have often though she strives for attention, with all the piercings, Tattoo's and outfits. But that is not the case, it is simply a way for her to express herself. She would be the first to risk her life, but the last to take the credit.

      This also plays a role in combat, as she is a cautious fighter. She knows herself, her strengths and limits and despite her confidence she does not underestimate her opponents and treats every fight as if it were her last.



  The Playful

      Once you get past her exterior, she is quite a playful person. Amaterasu loves a good joke and has quite the wicked sense of humour. She has a tendency of letting out witty and smart ass remarks. While she may appear to serious at times, she knows how to have a good time and is not opposed to taking a day or night off. She is very much a people person and will often drink to the wee hours of the morning with her cloest friends, when she has nothing important to do.



  The Wise

      Despite her youth, Amaterasu possesses a wisdom that is seldom seen in the elderly let alone the young. She has a way of seeing things in a manner others do not, as if she were looking at a situation from every angle all at the same time, seeing everyone single outcome while the rest fumble around blind in the darkness. It is something she has become known for within her leaf and while her elders were apprehensive at first, they have come to accept her and her wisdom for what it is.



  The Cunning

      Along with being Wise, she is extremely cunning. She is intelligent, even by Nara standards. She has shown spectacular results at battle tactics from a young age and is able to comprehend and create plans on the fly, without having to stop and think. She often holds lessons with genin, showing them how to out smart their opponent instead of trying to out muscle.



  The Ruthless

      Despite her compassion, Amaterasu is a warrior, a shinobi at heart. When the time comes, she is a merciless goddess of war that none can stop. She would kill you without hesitation if you forced her hand.



  The Calm

      Amaterasu has an extremely calm exterior. She comes across as serene and in control, which is a part of why she can appear so confident and otherwordly. Her tutors from a young age, taught her to stay calm within the eat of battle and she has made them proud. She always keeps a level head during bad situations and tries to keep others around her calm.



  The Leader

      Something she inherited from her father, Amaterasu is a natural born leader. She seems to instill confidence in the people around her and on the battlefield is capable of rallying those around her to victory. It is not something she embraced until recently, as she doubted herself for a great many years. But she has come to accept her role and with pride looks to the future.



  The Naive

      Despite her apparent maturity for her young age, Amaterasu is just that, young. To many of her elders she can come across as rather Naive, trying to see the good in everyone. She always tries to give someone a second chance and is not quick to condemn, which can be exploited by her enemies.



  The Closed

      While she can come across as a playful and confident person,Amaterasu  is actually rather closed off from the world. She keep's things to herself and does not wish to burden others with her problems, even though she has assistants and body guards. She's got very few friends and quite often buries herself in her work.



  The Doubtful

      To many she comes across as confident and charismatic, and while that is true she is still only human. She doubts herself as much as anyone else and finds herself dwelling on the decisions she makes. This is something she keeps to herself and tries to hide from others.

As her appearances suggest it, Amaterasu is a strong person. With a strong, somewhat rugged and sharp personality. She is a warrior first and for all, taking a great importance in honor, justice and strength. She does not belittle those who are smaller than her, or weaker, nor does she patronize them. No, the woman considers it is her job to help them, be it to teach, protect or fight alongside with them. She will adapt her actions and mind to theirs, doing her best to make up for their breaches.
She takes pride in being a kunoichi and even more into being a Hiryū. The blonde does not take it well when one tries to minimize her strength or importance in a situation and takes no 'shit' from anyone, defending herself and if needed the others surrounding her, keeping the accuser in her bad books and making sure to give them the cold shoulder and have them cower under some vicious lashes of the tongue.

Amaterasu is a wild person. She loves freedom, nature, but also battles, games, drinking contests, races and brawls. Her whole being seems to breathe freedom once she is set upon one of those things - she becomes less stern and demanding, not to mention that whenever she plays games, drinks with some excess or races with others, people will be able to hear her laugh with innocent joy. She is quite daring and cheeky, not fearing to take risks to reach her goal. As much as she can be vicious or sarcastic, she has also some hidden humor that peeks out from time to time.
But as much as she is wild, she knows where the limits lay and does not push it too far.

Active, always in the move, Amaterasu seems to be never relaxing or standing still. She is always busy with one or another thing, enjoying manual work quite a bit. Even when she is not busy with a mission or another, she is helping out civilians building, repairing, restoring or working in their shops. She has picked up quite a few skills that come in a range of being a kunoichi but also a shopkeeper, apothecary, farmer, carpenter and plumber. As long her nimble fingers are busy working, she is quite content.
Because of that nature, she has opted to become a teacher. Having had her share of time in the ANBU corps, she decided she disliked the rather silent and hidden nature of those people. She preferred interacting and if it meant she would have to talk to kids of the age of eleven, she didn't mind. And she isn't half so bad in that task.

As a teacher, she is a hard taskmaster, but far from unfair. She demands strength, endurance and will from her students. Pushing them to reach further, she encourages them to accomplish whatever they wish and will put all efforts she can give to help them achieve that. She is uncannily observant and is not a stranger with taking care of children of which's family life is far from normal.
She has a secret wish of being able to take one of the kids in one day and be a real mother for them. But so far, she hasn't found any of them 'appropriate' to take in and thus keeps herself to the boundaries of a teacher.

The woman is someone who appreciates respect and subtlety. Although not a master in the latter, she is one who shows the first one when she considers that the one concerned has earned it. Although not insulting, she will not show any other sign of acceptance until she has decided the other person deserves the titles and stories people associate to them.
And having said that, she does not expect people to respect her either. Her opinion is that she has to work to deserve the respect from others as well. She dislikes simpering weaklings who try to flatter their way through and Amaterasu has sworn to never lower herself to such methods.

Amaterasu is creative. She likes artistic activities and takes pride in her own works of art. Despite those not being the best that can be seen, she has some talent that lacks attention and development.
So instead of trying to spend more time into something she won't really use in her life, she derives her artistic moments towards imagining more training programs for her students, for creating some jutsu or tactics to win the next race/game/drinking contest she'll participate in. Sometimes, she indulges herself into story telling, publishing from time to time under an alias in a local children's news paper with a moderate success.

Although she is not really known for this, the blonde is a kind spirit. She is a good listener when she is needed and has great care for those she has lodged in her heart.
When it comes to friendships, Amaterasu would not be the loudest of the group, nor the jealous one. Although she does fear to be forgotten by her companions, she will not seek attention continuously and simply remain as a constant presence who laughs and cares alongside them.

Having said all that, Amaterasu is not a perfect human. She has her flaws, some of them more pronounced than others. First and most of all, she is unforgiving. She absolutely abhors traitors, people who enjoy pain and murder and most of all bullies in all forms and appearances. And with that, some hypocrisy shows in her. Although she doesn't mind befriending people of other villages, she does not appreciate it to be done by others - herself enjoys the exhilarating feelings that come from battle and spars but she dislikes people who seek out fights on purpose against people from another village.
But, not only she is unforgiving with other people, she is also unforgiving with herself. Easy to take the blame on herself for things and events, Amaterasu wears a heavy weight on her conscience. Whenever she slips what is allowed or not in her mind, she will carry another added burden of guilt. She lacks confidence when it comes to her appearances but also her morals, knowing that more than once they have slipped into the wrong direction.

She is somewhat paranoiac. One would say it is normal for a ninja to be wary, but Amaterasu brings it to a whole other level. Checking several times a day if she still has her sword, pouches or whatever she carries in her pocket, she is also always on the alert. She has a habit of first observing her surroundings and then to speak and that several times in a conversation. And although the action is done in silence, people always notice her eyes daring around before settling back upon them.

Amaterasu is a rash person. Being more of a 'do' than a 'think' person, it happens that she runs towards places where angels do not dare to thread. Although she is double careful when she has her students with her, she has a streak of irresponsibility. Lacking by times enough strength or insight to scold her students or companions whenever they did something dangerous, she is somewhat too lenient when it comes to taking risks and approaching a battlefield.

The woman is also stubborn like a mule. Once her mind is set, she won't be easily coaxed into another option. She will go through with her idea and if it is forbidden to her, she will still try to find a loophole to still do it.
Although this can be seen as a bad personality trait, it is still one that managed to motivate her and keep her living as well after having suffered life threatening wounds, but also to help others through their own troubles.

Lastly, Amaterasu can be a very erratic person. Although not easy to be brought into panic, she can be a very dispersed creature who's mind is all over the place. Whenever stressed or distressed enough, she seems to be even less capable to remain in place. Pacing, whining, berating herself and excessive cursing are not rare or surprising. But also being overly clingy and childish are some of the 'symptoms' in those situations.
And whenever is brought into panic, she is will first spend a long time moving, be it to scratch her wrists, pace around the room and pulling her hair. Once that phase is through, she'll sit down and close herself completely off, allowing herself to wallow in self-pity and guilt. Whenever in such states, she cannot see reason and patient and strong people will have to hold her back from doing anything drastic.
Likes:   ✔ Having a Good Time
  ✔ Being in charge
  ✔ Causing Chaos
  ✔ Planning
  ✔ Leadership
  ✔ Booze
  ✔ Sex

Dislikes:
✖ Bullies
  ✖ Weaklings who do not work to strengthen up
  ✖ Tea
  ✖ Sea food
  ✖ Her face
Catch Phrases: " Why must you stand in my way its only gonna result in your timely death or worse hell."
Nindo: Chaos

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Clan Name: Asce
Bloodline Name: Lava Release
Bloodline Ability: Lava Release (熔遁; 溶遁, Yōton; Viz "Corrosion Style" or "Lava Style") is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that combines fire and earth-based chakra to create lava and related substances that can serve multi-faceted purposes.
Location: Tanimuragakure
Clan History: It is said that a long time ago the Asce clan used to rule all mountain tops in the land of mountains close to Tanimuragakure or commonly known as the village hidden in the valleys. The founders of the Asce clan (Satos parents) were a Guy known as En'en (Smoke Blaze) and a lady known as Kirameki (Twinkle). En'en used the Katon element and Kirameki used the Doton element and one day they found a way to merge both the elements into one and create the Lava Release. As time passed on they both grew old and passed the clan and the Lava release down to Sato Asce hoping that one day Sato shall bring glory to the Asce clan.
Members: Sato Asce [Cousin]
Jutsu: Next Post.

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   Hip Pouch 1:
   3x Soldier pills
   20m spool of wire
   Packet of cigarettes
   Lighter
   2x roll of 20 exploding tags


   Arm pouch:

   Flask of whiskey 45 Percent
   5X Flash Bombs
   5x Smoke Bombs

   Hip Pouch 2:

   10x shuriken
   10x kunai
   10x kunai with exploding tags attached to them
   Gas Mask


Asce Amaterasu. Sumu

Contract: Cat
Name: Nibi
Rank: S
Element: Fire
Personality:Since Nibi is a cat, she acts similar to regular cats: eating treats, fish, and playing. Nibi has a very high intellect level as well as having proved herself to be sentient. She's fiercely loyal to Amaterasu but with time she has slowly shown loyalty to all that Amaterasu has deemed worthy of her own, though her main priority is always her master, who she has maintained an inseparable bond. Nibi also has and demonstrates regularly, exceptional patience, often honoring the requests of the group and their various friends, depending on her master's wishes and or whether or not Nibi likes them herself.
Appearance:
Normal Form:

Battle Form:

Nibi "usually appears to be a small kitten-sized feline with red eyes, a marking on her forehead and two tails. However, she has two forms: one of a small kitten, and one of a large cat that resembles a saber-toothed cat. In her full-sized cat form, flames emerge from her feet and tails and her abilities increase tenfold allowing her to battle even the strongest of opponents."
Weapons or Items: None
History: Nibi and Amaterasu met each other when Amaterasu was in her Jounin years at the age of 20 it was then they agreed to work together as a one summon partnership.
Jutsu:
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Jutsu Specialist: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu and Fuuinjutsu.
Chakra Pool: 310
Element Affinity: Lava Release
Sub Element Affinity: Fire + Earth
Jutsu:Next Post

These jutsu are automatically learned by you're character.
Spoiler:


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2Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Sun Sep 08, 2013 3:08 am

Revy

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Asce Amaterasu. 00f1b981-f817-411b-9088-7264c391d7de
OSHIRO NO JUTSU
"King Castle Techniques"

Spoiler:

None Element:


Fire:



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3Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Sun Sep 08, 2013 7:11 am

Revy

Revy

Done

4Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Sun Sep 08, 2013 2:26 pm

Sato

Sato

Kaira wrote:The grand jewel ability of these vambraces is the strange alloy acquired from his time spent with an ally of her, Darashiganai. This special material is often made into training staves for those wishing to train sages, though this particular alloy is capable of interacting with physical energy rather than natural energy.
If you are implying that you are able to teach Sage mode with these or able to do anything with the natural energy, remove this. Sage mode is a limited technique so if someone was to train another under Sage it would be him.

Kaira wrote:
With these, Amaterasi is capable of attacking physical energy itself. Though the power stems from the vambraces, the power is capable of being transferred alongside of the force of her arm-related attacked. In other words, her elbows and fists may also possess these weapons' energy-affecting power. This also means the magnitude of one's attack amplifies the amount of physical energy affected. However, what the effects are depends on whether she is attacking animals, shinobi, or other living things, or if the target is chakra itself.
Remove the bolded part.


Kaira wrote:
Being that physical energy resides within the cells of living things, a strike from these weapons can simply knock a sizable percent of that energy from the bodies of those struck. Against an average level Chunin of meager physical condition or stamina, even a firm, harmless jab to the torso can lead to them passing out from lack of energy. When used alongside of one of the incredibly powerful earth-shattering strikes, even those with notable constitution and stamina will find their bodies struggling to move if they are not simply broken and battered by the attack.
You got to be kidding right? remove this entire Special Ability, knocking out peoples physical energy, knocking Chunin leveled ninja unconscious with just a lousy jab to the torso. I am not allowing any of this 'Knocking out the Physical life force' thing. This is highly to god like.

Kaira wrote:What makes the use of these vambraces so legendary is the ability to rend at the chakra of Bijuu themselves. Despite their tangible menacing energy, their chakra is still just composed of the two essential energies to make up normal chakra. Thus, with these vambraces, even Bijuu's chakra can be imbalanced. However, given the sheer density and mass of the chakra associated with the cloaks these beasts offer their hosts, these vambraces cannot fully disassemble the cloaks in entirety. However, given that the tools can tangibly interact with physical energy, Amaterasu possesses a means of simply ripping the cloaks off of uncontrolled Jinchuriki. The chakra-dispersing ability of the vambraces can make the affected cloak weak enough for the moment of the attack in order Amaterasu to simply strike and rend up to five tails from their body, the energy simply disassembling on its own without its direct contact with its host. This makes for an excellent set of tools to be used when teaching young hosts to control their beasts.
THIS IS GODLY LIKE. when i mean 'godly' i mean it like come on? You are messing with the tailed beasts here and you are saying you can render up to 5 tails? no one from Naruto could even control the power from one of the tails let alone 5 of them. REMOVE THIS ENTIRE THING OR EITHER EDIT IT. i will not allow these.

[quote="Kaira]Gunbai Uchiwa[/quote]
In order for me to allow this you will need to but a limit on how much attacks it can with stand, and yes i know in the series it can take just about anything but you got to know this is a RP, not the series. (What i mean by limit is for
example: It can take
20-D-rank jutsu
15-C-rank jutsu
10-B-rank jutsu
5-A-rank jutsu
1-S-rank jutsu

You see even that their is a bit too powerful.)

Please take not that you can not carry the giant fan and the 10 swords into the same topic, you will have inefficient space.

Now onto Jutsu Concerns

1) bump Lightning Finger Ball up to S-rank for 1 reason. 1, 0-30 Meters, 30 Meters is a massive area next, if you wish to keep it at A rank bump the meters down to 0 - 20m.

2)Gunbai Barrier Technique, What can break this barrier? please state it.

3)Gunbai Return, im fine with it if you bump the cooldown post up by 3.

4)Hell Stab i added to the banned list but i think someone removed it. That is banned and if it wasn't it would be limited.

Edit these and i shall look at your app again.








Kaira wrote:
the special ability of these vambraces can distort the balance of the twin energies that make up chakra. In short, these can even cause ninjutsu to crumble or disperse. Whether it is applied to a seal, a barrier, or simply an elemental ninjutsu, a powerful enough attack can break them down into nothingness. However, Amaterasu's ability to do so relies on how powerful her strikes are compared to the power placed behind the target jutsu; what she does must be as strong or stronger than her target in terms of rank or power in order to effectively diffuse the makeup of the chakra.
I don't like that you can distort the balance of the energies that make up chakra, I want this to be limited to B-Rank techniques and unders. There is no point of adding the last part of that jutsu since you are the strongest rank and power. Change this to B-rank and under techniques as i will not accept it any higher.

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5Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Sun Sep 08, 2013 3:46 pm

Revy

Revy

Thats the whole point of the vembraces when they are covered in my lightning armor they become extremely powerful and its not control bijuu its knocking them out of chakra cloaks not controlling them and a chakra coats energy can be disputed with enough force behind it even seals can disrupt chakra. Everything else mainly edited apart from one thing I pmed you about. Also how many Jin will i be fightning very little and if any none it is mainly for the 9 tails we have in our village eventually she will want to train to control the beast the part about the bijuu is to help train the user with there beast so its not exactly godly as you put it when its mainly used for training and every jin on the site starts as genin as its not in my interest to go around each village smacking cloaks of there village bijuu one it is not realistic and two Amaterasu's persona wont allow for that. I would understand to a point if I was evil but Amaterasu isn't evil is a Kage and will be a respected one.

So in all I am trying to say its to help train bijuu if you want another reason the Raikage from the series managed to cut the horn off the 8 tails in its full release form and my version is just kocking them out of chakra cloaks which my main style is taijutsu and I use lightning release armor so my speed+ strength would be able to knock things out in one strike reguardless of the vambraces or not the vambraces just add a more power behind my stikes.

Also the vambraces are made from basically chakra enhanced metal that what gives it its power to break through chakra and disupt it as chakra metal can do this if done in the right way and my item is well explained like I have added I can only do most of my attacks while in my Lightning Release Armor so I think its pretty balanced.

6Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:59 am

Sato

Sato

Kaira wrote:Thats the whole point of the vembraces when they are covered in my lightning armor they become extremely powerful and its not control bijuu its knocking them out of chakra cloaks not controlling them and a chakra coats energy can be disputed with enough force behind it even seals can disrupt chakra. Everything else mainly edited apart from one thing I pmed you about. Also how many Jin will i be fightning very little and if any none it is mainly for the 9 tails we have in our village eventually she will want to train to control the beast the part about the bijuu is to help train the user with there beast so its not exactly godly as you put it when its mainly used for training and every jin on the site starts as genin as its not in my interest to go around each village smacking cloaks of there village bijuu one it is not realistic and two Amaterasu's persona wont allow for that. I would understand to a point if I was evil but Amaterasu isn't evil is a Kage and will be a respected one. .
You say this but does it say it on the app? does it say it is only for training purposes, if you add that the abilitie can only be used in training topics then i shall accept it and allow it but nope i am not allowing such a thing to happen in battle topics.

kaira wrote:So in all I am trying to say its to help train bijuu if you want another reason the Raikage from the series managed to cut the horn off the 8 tails in its full release form and my version is just kocking them out of chakra cloaks which my main style is taijutsu and I use lightning release armor so my speed+ strength would be able to knock things out in one strike reguardless of the vambraces or not the vambraces just add a more power behind my stikes.
True but the two main points are you are not the A, the Raikage and this is not the series it is a Role Play forum. The things that happen in the series are all OPd. If you are saying just cause A did this in the series means you can as well. If that's the case the everybody that has cannon techniques etc.. can do what ever the person in the series did with it but its not the case so no.



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7Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Mon Sep 09, 2013 3:09 am

Revy

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Yes but you are also forgetting I am taijutsu main not second or third. Also weither or not I am A or not the point remains Taijutsu main power/strength+ speed increase+ Lightning Release Armor Speed + Strength/power + Vambraces.

That last part online could kill/defeat most things in her path also combating Bijuu so weither I knock there cloaks off or knock them out is irrelevant as I am using my character power/speed correctly.

Edited anyway

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10Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:49 am

Katsuro

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Unapproved with Sato's permission.

1:
Alone, each vambrace weighs almost three tons, making for excellent training weights for the extreme.
Weighing 3 tons each is incredibly amount of wait for anyone to carry(impossible more like it). Definitely going to have to tone this down by a large majority.

2a:
..though this particular alloy is capable of interacting with physical energy rather than natural energy. Rather than nature energy which means not sage chakra phyical energy is chakra as certain materials can and this is S rank.
The ability to interact with someones physical energy(note physical energy IS NOT their chakra. It is one of the forming energies that make up chakra but it is not someone's chakra. For these to attack physical energy you would have to attack a person's 'STAMINA' which is impossible(unless it somehow seals the ability for physical energy and spiritual energy to meld to form chakra). Physical energy is used to perform taijutsu attacks and doesn't subtract from the chakra pool unless chakra is used with taijutsu.

2b:
In other words, her elbows and fists may also possess these weapons' energy-affecting power.
Fists i understand. Elbows I do not.

2c:
The main power of this is using her Lightning Release Armor with the vambraces to give it the power to disrupt chakra and chakra defences which weapons can do anyway. Up to B rank in power.
What do you mean by disrupt Chakra and chakra defenses? Do you mean blocking tenketsu so that chakra can't be formed properly(which is a no no unless you are hyuuga and have incredibly intimate knowledge of tenketsu which is Medical Ninjutsu specialty)

2d:
In short, these can even cause ninjutsu to crumble or disperse. Whether it is applied to a seal, a barrier, or simply an elemental ninjutsu, a powerful enough attack can break them down into nothingness.
Basically this gives her the power to break through any jutsu, any defense(topped with her LRA) makes her incredibly OP

2e:
However, given the sheer density and mass of the chakra associated with the cloaks these beasts offer their hosts, these vambraces cannot fully disassemble the cloaks in entirety. However, given that the tools can tangibly interact with physical energy, Amaterasu possesses a means of simply ripping the cloaks off of uncontrolled Jinchuriki. The chakra-dispersing ability of the vambraces can make the affected cloak weak enough for the moment of the attack in order Amaterasu to simply strike and rend up to five
SO basically she can break through unnatural chakra(Bijuu chakra isn't made up of the same thing regular chakra is) and take away up to 5 tails from a Bijuu no matter what. Basically this makes it so she can control every Bijuu.

3a:
The Gunbai can also act as a giant fan and produce powerful gusts of wind without the requirement of wind natured chakra these winds are just as powerful to blow away projectiles, people and even mist and other type of cover like smoke.
So without chakra it can create gusts of wind that can blow away shit? Temari's fan used chakra to do so(indicated by the circles known as stars/moons on the fan)

3b:
20-D-rank jutsu
15-C-rank jutsu
10-B-rank jutsu
5-A-rank jutsu
1-S-rank jutsu
So it can block all of these attacks in a row?

4:
Name:Gunbai Return
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: ---
Range: 0-10 Meters
Duration: ---
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description:By utilizing their gunbai in a particular manner, the user is not only able to block and completely nullify the effects of an incoming attack, but also deflect the technique back along its original course. As this redirection occurs both suddenly and unexpectedly, the reflected attack can prove difficult for opponents to evade. This is mainly for any phyical attempt they is used like a resengan type attack or taijutsu type moves. Close range to 10 meters.
How is it meant to reverse a physical attack back along the course it came in on? Seems a little far fetched to me. Maybe block up to certain amount of A Rank(limit the number of jutsus it can block as well and put a chakra cost on it. Same for the basic Gunbai jutsu) but no returning a physical attack backwards. Maybe deflect thrown weapons.

5:
Name:Lightning Oppression Horizontal
Rank:B-A
Type:Nintaijutsu/Taijutsu
Element:Lightning/None
Range: Touch
Duration: ---
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Description:After covering himself in his Lightning Release Armour, the user performs a simple backhanded horizontal chop against his opponent, which is powerful enough to snap even the bones of Susanoo's ribcage. This can be done without Lightning release armor but does B rank damage instead of A. Does not use chakra as it is either taijutsu normally or done while in Lightning Release Armor.
If it uses LRA it uses Chakra just saying. Same for anything else that is utilized while in LRA.

6:
Name:Elbow
Rank:B
Type:Nintaijutsu
Element:Lightning
Range:Touch
Duration: ---
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Description:After covering herself in her Lightning Release Armour, the user thrusts his elbow at her opponent with extreme force. The technique is strong enough to send a enemy crashing into a wall, disabling him from battling any further.
B-ranked attacks shouldn't be able to KO everyone who is hit by it. Even when LRA is used in tandem with it.

7:
Name:Lariat
Rank:B-A
Type:Taijustu/Nintaijutsu
Element:None/Lightning
Range:Touch
Duration: ---
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Description:The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move, which can be coated in chakra. A successful strike can blow away a target's entire chest with a direct hit. The attack is rather straightforward, but very quick and powerful. When Amaterasu uses it, she surrounds herself with her Lightning Release Armour, rather than tailed-beast chakra. Her high-level chakra, which is comparable to that of a tailed beast's, would produce the same effect as chakra cloak version. A Rank version is the Lightning Release Armor version, the B rank is without Lightning Release Armor. Either use chakra because the B ranked version is taijutsu and the A ranked version is used when Lightning Release Armor is active.
1 you can't have Bijuu level chakra without a bijuu. 2 Where were you approved for high chakra level?

8: [quote]Name: Charge
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Duration: Lasts until stopped
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: A simple jutsu where the user, after a single handseal, will charge themselves with a low yield of Raiton chakra. This will create a layer of static electricity on the users skin, if an opponent comes into contact, they will be zapped and the part of the body which touched the electricity will become completely numb for roughly three minutes. The opponent will loose the ability to use their limb, this jutsu constantly drains chakra but does not take much due to it being of low yield. It is a very useful jutsu for Nintai or taijutsu users.[/url] Posts not minutes please.

9:
Name: Lightning Release: Flare
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: 0-15 Meters
Duration: Blindness lasts for 2 posts if close enough.
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description:The user releases a discharge of Raiton throughout a large portion of their body, resulting in a bright burst of electricity that can temporarily blind those who gaze upon the instantaneousness flash. If one is touching the user when the technique is being used, they will be met with a sudden electrical shock.
Duration of Blindness in posts.

10:
Name:Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Range:0 -15 Meters
Duration: 1 Shot Jutsu/ 1 post
Cooldown: 1 Post
Description:A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire and expelled from the mouth either as a massive orb of roaring flame or as a continuous flame-thrower. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. This technique apparently requires more than average chakra reserves and most genin should not be able to do this technique.
You said so yourself this jutsu is Uchiha only.

11:
Name:Fire Release: Great Fireball Shower
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Range:0-30 Meters
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown:4 Posts
Description:Kneading his chakra and then converting it to fire, the user creates a multitude of fireballs at the same time which then rain down on the target causing severe, widespread damage around the field. These fireballs can easily destroy Earth Release-created shelters and even overpower Water Release attacks.
Seems more like an S rank than an A-rank to me. I'll converse with another mod to decide fully on this one.

Not finished yet. I'm having someone check over the 7 swords jutsu before I finally finish.

11Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Tue Sep 17, 2013 11:45 am

Sketh Matamune

Sketh Matamune
Kiri Anbu Captain
Kiri Anbu Captain

I really, really wanted to stay out of this as I turned down the moderator position because of the other things you've tried to pull off in the past, but Katsuro wanted me to give my input on it and post them here.

So, with Katsuro's permission I'm going to get down to business. This may be a little harsh, but as you all know thats really just how I am.

Now, I have one question. How did this get approved in the first place?

Let me start off by saying that I despise the fact that you were allowed to use both LRA and the seven swords at once. How or why Sato allowed this is beyond my plane of comprehension. In fact, I'm fully entitled to believe that Seven Sword Dance should, in its own right, be a limited ability due to how hax it already is. The freaking Sharingan can barely keep up with it's movements and it even kicked Sasukes ass. You never see Killer bee using all seven swords at once while in his bijuu cloak. There must be limits.

Not to mention, the Seven sword dance requires a SHITLOAD of foot work, perception and balance, as well as coordination, LRA isn't meant to be used in combination with such a flashy dance show. It's meant for making you cover great distances in one lunge or push. Using them in combination with such a complex sword style would screw you up more than help you.

Also, even if the LRA is being used as a medium, it costs chakra to extend the LRA over something else aside from your body. So yes, coating your swords in LRA would cost chakra if we're being fair here.

Kaira, I'll level with you. You've been RP'ing for quite some time now and are still making characters like this. Stop. Just stop. Stop trying to combine overpowered shit with overpowered shit to make even more overpowered shit.

Now, onward to do what I was asked to do.

Kaira wrote:Name:Ittō-Ryū Iai: Shishi Sonson (一刀流「居合」 獅子歌歌, One Sword Style Draw and Resheath Technique: Lion's Song) / Single Sword Lion Strike
Rank: "A"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: Placing the sheathed sword upright and listening to the "breath" of his opponent, the attack rapidly unsheathes, attacks, and sheaths the sword.
Description: A strong technique that enables the user to cut through defenses and conventional weapons with a single strike. The user however must undergo a process in order to be able to perform this technique. The user must have their blade sheathed and they are able to perform this technique with just one blade. The user observes the opponent and begins to breathe quietly watching the opponent's breathe. When the moment comes the user unsheathes their blade while attacking in a single motion before sheathing the blade once again. This technique is capable of cutting through Defenses of "B" Rank and under while it is able to cut through any weapon or item with ease.
The name is plagiarized from One piece as one of Zoro's moves.

Cutting through ANY B rank defenses/weapons is a hell no. Number one, any weapon of B rank or higher will have the ability to channel chakra through it, making it capable of cutting through your sword instead unless the type of chakra coating your sword has an advantage over theirs (Fuuton>Raiton, btw). B rank defensive jutsu also have chakra channeling through it, so...yeah. I'm fine with this as long as you have the element advantage and that chakra is flowing through your sword. Raiton chakra flow > Donton defensive jutsu.


Kaira wrote:Name:Takanami (鷹波) / Hawk Wave
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: While airborne, creates a powerful gust of wind to knock opponents over. Can be done while standing on the ground.
Description: User jumps into the air while spinning once to get the momentum needed for this technique. When the user lands on the floor they swing both of their blades horizontally creating a gust of wind capable of pushing opponents back. This technique is used to subdue opponents quickly if surrounded to create an opening. This technique gives a knock back to the opponent of 5 meters.
Also taken from One Piece Zoro. Oddly balanced and not OP at all...holy shit thats something new. I might not have to do much work on this after all.

Kaira wrote:Name: Saikuru (犀回, Circling Rhino) / Rhino Rampage
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: The user puts their swords on their forehead, like rhinoceros horns, and spins quickly.
Description:An odd, yet decently powerful technique. The user takes and holds the handles of their blades against their forehead. The users push their head forward while pushing the sword towards the head to keep then steady. The user spins quickly as they push the blades out while still holding the swords capable of slashing and those that are around as it is capable of launching opponents off into the distance of up to 10 meters. The user is able to spin multiple times within a single movement able to cut through simple defenses of "C" Rank and lower.
...So, I spoke way to soon.

This makes no freaking sense, especially as a kenjutsu technique and the way you describe it. This isn't one piece, this is naruto. Putting two swords near your forehead and spinning, while thrusting them outward isn't going to do anything like you've described. Killer B spins all the time and the only damage he does is literally cutting things stupid enough to get within range of the swords themselves, even with naruto logic this is highly unlikely and makes no sense. However, if you re-word it and stop stealing Zoro's attacks, cutting through c-rank defenses I'm okay with as long as you have the element advantage.


Kaira wrote:Name: Nitou-Ryuu Iai: Rashoumon (二刀流「居合」 羅生門, Two Sword Style Draw and Re-sheath Technique: Rashoumon)
Rank: "A"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: A dual sword drawing technique so powerful it split large obstacles in half. The user draws their sword, and sheaths it so quickly splitting a train carriage into half.-
Description: A strong technique that enables the user to cut through defenses and conventional weapons with a single strike with their two blades. The user however must undergo a process in order to be able to perform this technique. The user must have their blades sheathed for this technique to work. The user observes the opponent and begins to breathe quietly watching the opponent's breathe. When the moment comes the user unsheathes their two blades by crossing their hands grabbing the blades on the opposite ends while attacking in a single motion before sheathing the blade once again. This technique is capable of cutting through Defenses of "A" Rank and under while it is able to cut through any overview weapon or item with ease. This technique may be used especially to cut through buildings and others.
Cutting through A rank defenses/weapons is, once again, a hell no. Number one, any weapon of B rank or higher will have the ability to channel chakra through it, thus giving you the same problem as the other technique you tried. And how does using two blades amplify it to cutting through A-rank defenses and fucking buildings? Even the samurai in Naruto, or killier B for a better example, who were experts at sword techniques, couldn't cut through freaking buildings. The samurai's chakra enhanced waves didn't even cut through a pillar all the way, they just damaged it and tore off large chunks.

No.

Kaira wrote:Name: Nana-Juu-Ni Pound Hou (七十二煩悩鳳, 72 Pound Cannon) / Dual Sword Soaring Phoenix
Rank: "B"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: Same principle as the 36 Pound Cannon using two swords.
Description: To initiate it, the user first holds their two swords horizontally above the shoulders, and then performs a circular swing that launches the air compressed projectile spiraling towards the target. Depending on the strength of this technique depends on the user's knowledge of San-Juu-Roku Pound Hou (三十六煩悩鳳, 36 Pound Cannon) / Single Sword Rising Phoenix. It's a strong double slashing attack that is quite close to one another making the wound very difficult to heal. The best option is to dodge. Depending on the user's class level depends on the strength of the technique.
Genin/Chuunin - 5 Meter Cone
Special Jonin/ Above - 10 Meter Cone
Oh my god its another move from Zoro..this should be fun, especially since you plagiarized the first two lines from the description from the Santoryu/Nitoryu/Ittoryu wiki of onepiece. I really have no problem with this technique other than that. People should just learn to dodge.

Kaira wrote:Name: Outourou (応登楼, Reply Climbing a Tower)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: Two air-based projectile slashes are sent downwards while falling as the user swings their swords downwards, with the gravity complimenting the force of the attack.
Description: The user holds the swords in a correct grip having the blades face upwards before they slash downwards while falling. With great speed and strength it cuts air and sends a projectile downwards that starts just a foot away from the blade down to the ground at a distance of 5 meters. The strength of the attack is dependent on the user's ability in performing Nana-Juu-Ni Pound Hou (七十二煩悩鳳, 72 Pound Cannon) / Dual Sword Soaring Phoenix. The slashes are close to one another which could prove difficult in making a wound heal, and would leave a nasty scar if not taken care of.
Another one of Zoro's moves...really? It's this hard to come up with original kenjutsu techniques? The hell, Kaira? No real problems with this technique either aside from it being a rip off. However, the pressure projectile starts a foot away and can only travel 5 meters? If that what you're saying? If so, I'm fine with it.


Kaira wrote:Name: Maguma: (魔熊, Demon Bear)
Rank: "B"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: A simple downward pound into the opponent with both swords.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A simple double stab downwards into the opponent with both swords capable of running through the opponent as well as creating a crater if the user jumps up into the air first beforehand. Depending on the user's Class level depends on the strength of the attack.
Genin - Creates a 5 meter crater
Chuunin - Creates a 10 meter crater
Special Jonin/ Jonin - Creates a 20 meter crater
Sanin a 35 meter crater
Yeah, no. I dont care what rank you are, a simple downward stab isn't going to leave any crater bigger than a few centimeters unless your character weighs a few dozen tons, which she doesn't. It might kick up a shitload of dust and dirt like a true anime style sword stab hitting the ground, but yeah. Not giant ass craters. Why is this B-rank? It's a simple stab with no added effect. This could easily pass as D-rank if you remove the massive craters that come from bumfuck nowhere.

Kaira wrote:Name: Oni Giri (鬼斬り, Demon Slash) / Oni Giri
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: A three-way simultaneous slashing attack.
Description: User crosses their two swords across their chest and places the blade in their mouth horizontally behind them. The user then approaches the target (usually at high speed) and cuts through by swinging the swords across their chest, resulting in a descending diagonal-crossing slash from both swords while the mouth blade performs a horizontal cut from either the left or right, depending from which side of blade is positioned from the mouth.
.....why cant you make original techniques, Kaira?

Actually, you plagiarized this entire paragraph from here: http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Santoryu Not no, but hell no.

Kaira wrote:Name: Tora Gari (虎狩り, Tiger Hunt) / Tiger Trap
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: User puts their hand swords over their mouth sword and swings downward with all three.
Description: The user puts their hand swords over their mouth blade and swings forth a forward descending slash with them. At close-range, this can incapacitate at least two foes at once. Two blades attack downwards while the mouth blade attacks sideways capable of slashing through two opponents knocking them away, or slicing the middle of the body.
Why the plagiarism? http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Santoryu Below Enbima Yonezu Oni Giri.

Hell no, denied.

Kaira wrote:Name: Santou-Ryuu Ougi Sanzen Sekai (三刀流奥義 三・千・世・界, Three-Sword Style Secret Attack: Three Thousand Realms) / Santoryu: Three Thousand Worlds
Rank: "A"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: Hold 2 Swords at an angle against each other and spins them while running towards the opponent.
Description: The user holds two of their swords at an angle against each other and spins them while running towards the opponent. According the name of this attack, this is the ultimate and strongest technique of the Santou-Ryuu. The user slashes simultaneously in a swift movement using the momentum of the spinning as they attack with a spread. This technique is capable of cutting through Defenses of "A" Rank and under while it is able to cut through any weapon or item with ease with the help of Raiton in the blades.
*facepalm* If you're going to plagiarize shit, atleast take out the style specifically used in one piece. And change the damn name. I specifically remember and am reading that name from the one piece wiki as I type this, as well as most of that description.

No on the cutting through A rank defenses and any weapon. If a weapon has Fuuton or raiton chakra pumping through it, guess what? Fuuton > Raiton, your swords get cut in half. Raiton = Raiton, guess what? Stalemate. You need to be extremely more detailed with these kinda of techniques, coming from a constant kenjutsu user, such as myself, be freaking detailed.

Kaira wrote:Name: Ushi Bari (牛針, Bull Horns) / Bull Charge
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: Running charge with two swords held out like a bull's horns.
Description: The user executes a multi-hit running attack with two swords held out like a bull's horns while having the third blade along the mouth of the user. The user charges towards the opponent and attacks 2 times per movement while running past the opponent before they slash sideways in a cross pattern with the mouth blade in a single movement cutting the opponent multiple times.
"Zoro executes a multi-hit running attack with two swords held out like a bull's horns."

Seriously....stop stealing shit. It's not direct plagiarism (not this time, atleast..) but seriously.... I'm fine with this technique over all, but dont think it's unable to be dodged, as most people tend to think multi-hit attacks are. They aren't.

Kaira wrote:Name: Gyuuki Yuuzume (牛鬼勇爪, Ox Demon Brave Hoof)
Rank: "A"
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: User points all the swords directly at the opponent, then charges and hits.
Description: The swords are positioned pointing at the enemy. The user lunges forward and hits the enemy with great impact. A defense destruction technique. This technique breaks through overview weapons as well as hitting with an "A" rank of power.
"The swords are positioned pointing at the enemy. Zoro lunges forward and hits the enemy with great impact."

.....why is this even a thing? Did I miss something about Zoro's techniques being perfectly integrated with Killer bee's damn-near unpredictable seven-sword dance? Secondly, the hell are overview weapons and what does A-rank cutting power classify as. Can it cut through other A-rank defenses or weapons like everything else you've tried to get passed?

Kaira wrote:Name:Rokutōryū: Phantom Dive
Rank: "A"
Type: Kenjutsu
Effect: The user does a horizontal sweep, then leaps and slams the ground, causing a huge shockwave that goes forward.
Description: The user takes all 6 of their swords and sweeps horizontally to knock the opponent off balance. Then the user leaps up into the air and slams the ground with all 6 blades. The strength of the attack creates a shockwave sending a cone of blast force towards the opponent as it sends massive amounts of debris to them. When used correctly it can knock the opponent 20 meters away.
Oh, look at that. Only the "Rokutoryu" part is borrowed from One piece.

Only thing I have to say about this is:

1: Thats one hell of a shockwave from a simple six-sword stab in the ground. Doesn't make much sense considering there's no chakra in the blade, as you like to claim, and you dont have "uber supa strangth!" to casually bitchslap mother nature.

Kaira wrote:Name: Jiten Hada (Body Spin)
Rank: "B"
Type: Kenjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to spin like a top to help block TaiJutsu techniques.
Drawback: This technique does not protect against any form of NinJutsu or GenJutsu.
Description: A powerful defensive technique, the Jiten Hada allow the user to demonstration their surreal balance by spinning with an extreme acceleration, using the many swords protecting them as a means to block projectiles and other physical based assault. Due to the movement, when striking with another weapon such as a sword the assailant will find themselves knocked back and severely cut. Projectiles are simply ricocheted away, into the sky or into the dirt depending on what angle they're sent toward the Jiten Hada. When first learned it is capable of stopping projectiles and "C" Rank TaiJutsu techniques
Right....so, what happens when someone throws a kunai into an opening and hits you in the gut? You're spinning at a rapid rate, not creating an impenetrable wall of blades. There are openings that can be exploited, it would just be difficult to do. Details, woman, details. Blocking c-rank taijutsu moves (which is kinda pointless considering you're a spinning mass of blades, any fist or leg that comes into contact regardless of the rank is going to get it's ass shredded into sushi, unless it's a chakra enhanced punch and even then, it's still going to get shredded, it'll just take you with it) is also kinda pointless given the circumstance, but if you want to limit it to that then I'm totally fine with it.

Kaira wrote:Name: Ro-ru Hada (Body Roll)
Rank: "B",
Skill: Kenjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to roll forward with extreme speed and power, unleashing a flurry of strikes in a sporadic movement.
Drawback: This technique can leave the user open to attack if disrupted.
Description: One of the more direct attacks, the Ro-ru Hada allows the user to roll forward with great power and speed, striking out at the opponent with the multiple swords being held in a simultaneous, fluent fashion
I'm going to give you the benefit of a doubt and assume that you made this technique and were using it on another site, because I found someone else with the exact same wording and, if it wasn't you, then this is plagiarism. However, the problem with this is rolling....

You have seven swords poking out and away from you, if you roll thats going to screw up not only yourself and the grip you have on the swords, but also the momentum you picked up to do the roll. Unless you're talking about jumping into a flip and roll/falling toward the opponent and catching yourself on the floor with your feet before you hit, then this doesn't make sense at all.

All jutsu durations are mark --- as most are instant. Ranges of the Kenjutsu are touch and rolls or dodge moves its 0-5 Meters. The cool down for all techniques is 2 posts. Kenjutsu also doesn't require chakra as they are kenjutsu strikes. All of these Techniques can be used while Amaterasu is in Lightning Release Armor to make the style Ninkenjutsu using the speed of her Lightning Release Armor to make her strikes more powerful and faster than using them normally yet and same before applies no chakra is used in this process as it comes from Amaterasu using her Lightning Release Armor as the medium.
And heres where I choked on my noodle soup, died, tore my way through hell, and then climbed my way back into my computer chair, just to moderate this part.

None of these attacks are instant, the duration would be "one post" at minimum even if they dont last for a full post. You're not the yellow flash, nothing is instant. Cool down and range I'm fine with.

Bullshit on the not requiring chakra since, as stated in several "plagiarized" techniques above, most of them create giant craters and cut through other forms of chakra made defenses, and even goddamn buildings. You're not A, or Tsunade, you dont have the pure raw strength to just casually tear the earth apart like it's your bitch and you it's dominatrix - especially with a sword as tiny and thin as the ones required to use the seven sword dance (the blades would snap under the pressure required to create such craters if chakra were not put into them).

Even Killer B's kenjutsu strikes didn't destroy the ground and create craters several meters across.

This is just about as bad as - if not worse - than that time you tried to combine a Curse Seal lvl 2 with Haku's ice mirrors (specifically their speed of light movement) and a chakra cannon that could do damage at a cellular level. Why are OP things a trend with you?  

Katsuro covered the braces and everything else.... I don't know how this got approved to begin with.

Here's my input, Katsuro. Hope it helped...

- You're friendly neighborhood ex-mod, Sketh.

12Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Tue Sep 17, 2013 3:12 pm

Revy

Revy

Yes the seven sword style are from wiki but you also forget to realise sketh is that all of this info is on a wiki page. I so called plagiarized as you said the same goes for people who copy bleach moves and so on and even naruto canon moves they are all on wiki and people copy them without no problem so you can keep the plagiarized issue to yourself cause on that respect everyone does it with techniques and such. Even images off google are coping so tell that to everyone on the site. No offense to Sato but this site uses Naruto icons does it not they belong to the owner of the naruto and using them would require his permission also so Sato using them would be doing the same thing hence that why they are able to be copied and pasted on the internet and worked with by great Gfx's for sites etc. Anyway my point is that everything can be taken and with naruto, one piece and bleach a key part of jutsus attacks and such are from these animes and manga's so no in regards to your comments about that.

Ill deal with the other issues later.

13Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Mon Sep 23, 2013 3:11 am

Katsuro

Katsuro

Per Sato's orders I have to tell you that the Kage position is no longer available to you and as been awarded Temporarily to myself. You may retain Lava release as a limited but please change your rank to anything below Kage.

14Asce Amaterasu. Empty Re: Asce Amaterasu. Mon Sep 23, 2013 3:54 am

Revy

Revy

Katsuro wrote:Per Sato's orders I have to tell you that the Kage position is no longer available to you and as been awarded Temporarily to myself.  You may retain Lava release as a limited but please change your rank to anything below Kage.
Actually I had a word with Sato about this on skype I have been ill that last couple of days with cold that I have told him about so once I make the changes I can be granted my position back. You have only been 'gave' it due to the event nothing more but most likely I will have it done within in a day or so.

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