Exploding Air

Name: Exploding Air
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Explosion
Range: 20 Meters(5 meters cubed, no shrapnel, air pressure hits up to sixty meters away but not enough to launch anyone off of their feet or knock them down unless they are five meters away)
Duration: One post per use
Hand Seals/Charge up: Snake, Snap Fingers
Description: After snapping their fingers the direction in which they throw their hand will explode in a blast of fire anywhere up to twenty meters from them. This jutsu requires an immense amount of chakra control and as such can only be used by someone who is S ranked themselves regardless of other perks. The user will channel their chakra into the air and much akin to a strand from puppetry the chakra will go until it reaches it's target and will start filling up with chakra until the air itself explodes from the explosive chakra inside of it. This move can be used in succession with each explosion costing less chakra and becoming weaker in power, however subsequent explosions will have to be in the same spot and reduce one rank per explosion used. The chakra moves as fast as the user has skill in the ninjutsu area, if the user is a master the chakra will move so that the explosion is directly when the user snaps. If an Adept, the explosion will happen two seconds after, and a basic will have this happen a whole post after they snap their fingers. Those without any combat points in ninjutsu cannot use this jutsu. This jutsu can be trained but it will have to be at 1.5 x the regular word count, this jutsu was also developed by B. The exploding jutsu is considered one of the best showings of funneling chakra and the short range of it for it's rank and the blow back and blast range cause it to be only useful for ten meters without at least getting knocked onto your ass when you use the jutsu. Overall while it is powerful in some regards, it has many drawbacks that need refining.

So this attack is essentially invisible until you snap your fingers?

I'd imagine so as it isn't manifested into fire before I snap my fingers

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Sorry, Yeah this is denied, If im reading this right i mean i could be wrong your able to create a 20 meter area that is filled with explosives that are un-seeable by anyone without a doujutsu. :/ If you want to get a second opinion on this i do not have a problem with that though

You've read it COMPLETELY wrong. Not only could the opponent see a trail of fire racing towards them the jutsu only goes up TO 20 meters, and furthermore if used within ten meters of the user it hurts the user, so really this thing is pathetic compared to the other S ranks that were

So yeah unless you can actually read the jutsu all the way through instead of skimming and assuming I will want a second opinion.

Unless another member of staff feels otherwise.

After snapping their fingers the direction in which they throw their hand will explode in a blast of fire anywhere up to twenty meters from them. This jutsu requires an immense amount of chakra control and as such can only be used by someone who is S ranked themselves regardless of other perks. The user will channel their chakra into the air and much akin to a strand from puppetry the chakra will go until it reaches it's target and will start filling up with chakra until the air itself explodes from the explosive chakra inside of it.


Your wording basicly shows thatthe area first fills up with chakra [Chakra being invisible to the naked eye] it then explodes when you snap your fingers. So yes the area made into said bomb would be invisible until you snapped your gfinger which would then erupt into an explosion. It was your wording that confused me.