Izanagi's Embrace: Susano'o of Asura

Name: Izanagi's Embrace: Susano'o of Asura
Rank:  S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/a
Range: 5m~20m
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts

Description:

Spoiler:

When the Susano'o is first cast, Asura's body is covered in a blood red/black aura that forms into the first stage of Susano'o. The first stage of Asura's Susano'o uses a bone scythe, the scythes primary function is made for both attacking and blocking.The Scythe is capable of blocking and parrying certain physical attacks, and even jutsu up to A rank in nature. A part from this, the scythe can also be used to smash into the ground, creating large divots or craters(being 15 meters in total length and width. A blow at this stage from the scythe can be lethal if hit in the right place, or from the right angle. (This is the first is capable of withstanding up to B rank damage and  the second Stage of the Susano'o, the armor is capable of withstanding up to A rank damage in stage two form)

The third and final stage of Asura's Susanoo is the full and most powerful form .Now, Susanoo is clad in armor, its scythe is now at max potential turning itself into scythe in the picture above and the Susanoo's alternate weapon of choice is none other than the "Bloodedge's Death Sword."  The Bloodedge's Death Sword is a weapon so powerful, it is said to be the weapon of Death himself. ( The armor of Susano'o is now capable of completely withstanding anything that is A ranked.)

Other things:Being  thrown out of the upper half of Susanoo by an enemy manipulating the substance underneath Susanoo or hitting the actual Susano'o are the only two noticable ways of defeating the user while in this state. This only applies to Stage one and two due to them being incomplete forms.

The only known ways to attack the user while Susanoo is active is either to draw the wielder out of the technique and then attack, bind and restrict its movements, or to break the defence with overwhelming force.

The amount of A ranks it takes to fully damage the susano'o is 6 in the first and second stages, but in the third it takes either 8 A ranks or an S rank equivalent to damage it.

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Take note that attacks from below the susano'o could still get past the armor and change the half S rank damage. The best of changing the lower susano'o forms armor to B rank techniques and the full armored one to A rank techniques cause I mean there are some extremely powerful S rank jutsu and it wont half everything and some stuff can still get through susano'o so this way it isn't seen as OP as much and yet you are still getting the blocking effects of your armor to a point.

' ( The armor of Susano'o is now capable of completely withstanding anything a rank and below, and taking half damage from S rank techniques.)' Remove that

So why am i removing that? its what the armor can withstand before either being broken or deactivated.

I told you in the chat box about giving others a chance during a fight rp to at least damage you in susanoo as it currently is you can make 30 meter craters which could be S rank alone. What I am saying is now make sure the max damage you can block is A rank no higher no matter what stage of susanoo as the rp has to be fair and with me approving this as it is wont be fair and either change it or lose it.

i already took out the swords ability to make craters, and your referring to others having a chance, this jutsu in itself is a double edge sword. Your acting as if nothing happens to me if i use this and im going to go around smacking everybody into the ground, anyone has an equal chance of defeating Susano'o if they actually thing about it. i see this as an excuse in making something weaker than it should be. I don't really have the time to be sitting here and having a moot conversation where i won't even have an equal say due to your position, so i will make it " Fair" for others.

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Remember staff can ask for changes as they see fit and most of the time they can ask for anything that makes the rp a better place. Also not all people can beat susano'o cause of the way it is designed this often can prevent this. Also my position doesn't matter weither I am admin or a mod they and I have the right to ask for changes at any given time. Thank you for the patience in the matter we got there in the end.

What Kaira means to say is that before, your technique was literally perfect.

And that isn't acceptable in an RP, where battles should not be one-sided. You claim that 'anyone has an equal chance of defeating Susano'o if they actually thing about it', but you don't have any weaknesses with this sussanoo. It's defense can't be penetrated, and Sussano'o is a secret technique that the majority of ninja would have never encountered in their life.

Itachi's Sussano'o, for example, was a good defense, but it had a weakness, and put INCREDIBLE strain on his body. Like, if he lived through his fight with Sasuke, he wouldn't be a very active ninja anymore.

While you have lowered it, 'completely withstanding A-Rank techniques' is still a little far-fetched. So here is what I ask:

1.) Emphasize the fact that the technique takes an incredibly large amount of chakra, enough to render them nearly unconscious after use. No implying it, either - just straight-up put it on the App.

2.) Add some kind of weak-point. Itachi's sussano'o had a vertebrae which was weaker than the rest, for example.

3.) The shielding should have a breaking point. So it can withstand, say, 5-6 A-rank jutsu's worth of damage before the strain of keeping the shield up is too much for Asura to take.

That's all.

Firstly, the Susano'o already has an effect on my body, weakening me and also blinding me with each post that it is kept up just like any other Mangekyo Sharingan jutsu. Also noting just like Madara's Susano'o, the user would have to be either pulled out of the upper portion or of course be hit with a sufficient force to either break the skeleton of the susano'o or make the user drop it. Also noting any notable weaknesses would be made null once the full form of susano'o is reached due to it being fully developed.

But to avoid yet another altercation i will make it to where it inhibits my movements and the like after use for a short while ( not making it knock me unconscience because not even sasuke passed out after using it.)

Without stating that Susano'o has an incredibly straining after-effect, it implies that there are no downsides to using the Jutsu.

Characters such as Madara and Sasuke had powerful techniques, but your character is neither of those characters in terms of strength. Keep that in mind.

However, I will approve this for now. Please remember, though, that abilities such as this are incredibly controversial and having your own susano'o is a gift in its own right.

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