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Nezumi Kotonashi
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Name: Nezumi Kotonashi
Nickname: The Rocket of Buranchi
Age: 22
Gender: [M] ♂
Village: Buranchigakure
Village Rank: Buranchikage
Skill Rank: S

The Rocket of Buranchi -- Nezumi Kotonashi Apii
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 140
Hair color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Looks Image: Nezumi
Looks Description:

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The Rocket of Buranchi -- Nezumi Kotonashi Personj

Personality Description:

Overall Outlook:


Reserved wrote:Nezumi has had a very hard time growing up. The fact that most abandon children are adopted into a family upon arriving in Buranchigakure made the situation worse. He was fathered by who he knew was Kiseki Kirigarinai, his mother having been called Merlin Cipriano. He knew very little about both, knowing only their names and that Kiseki was a former member of the Rokubantai Squadron, though he'd been told Kiseki has been killed in action, news that came to him by the Buranchikage. His mother had lied to him before passing away, having told Nezumi that she hadn't known who his father was, taking the blame so that Nezumi wouldn't house any regrets or hatred against his father for not being there. He had been bullied beyond belief, his classmates and "friends" always making fun of him since he'd had his real parents around at some point in his life, and not even they stuck around with him. Their words hurt far more than they could imagine, and it'd slowly killed Nezumi's spirit. He'd enclosed himself, creating a shell around his mind and emotions and trapped himself inside his own world. He'd done what he could to bear with it, trying to not let it affect how he was, but he crumbled under the pressure after a while and learned to just keep himself within an imaginary bubble, completely secluding himself from most people to avoid the pain.
Respect wrote:He has trouble understanding the concept of respect. He'd never really received it in his life until becoming a ninja, which has led to him only respecting his fellow ninja, his Kage and his homeland. He also makes it a point to respect anybody that he sees his Kage respect. His lack of a desire to look for an authoritative figure stems from the fact that he had no father, and despite the fact that his mother raised him properly, she wasn't exactly the stern type to instill such a mannerism in Nezumi. Because of this, he finds himself at a point where he believes respect is only deserved by those who had done something to earn it, be it something done for him or something done for greater good, but he sees no reason to respect anyone who hasn't accomplished anything that is remarkable in the slightest.
Underlining Qualities:
Strong Willed wrote:Nezumi has built a sort of self-reliance system, having never had someone to rely on, so he decided to count only on himself for whenever he had to accomplish anything. This has made him stronger as a person, granting him the confidence to do his absolute best on any feat he puts his mind to and not doubting himself. He knows that if he fails, it's not because anybody let him down, but because he has work to do before he can pull off whatever he is trying.
Hatred wrote:He harbors a great deal of hatred. It rarely shows, but it's bubbling just beneath the surface of his persona. He has some trouble handling it, but not suppressing it. He hates his situation and how it turned out for him since his very birth. It has created a sort of pool, one that is constantly being fueled more and more by the changes that occur inside him. He yearns for a release, but refuses to let it explode on someone who is innocent of the situation. He bottles up all his hatred, and it could one day very well be his downfall should he not find a safe outlet for it. His bottled up hatred can make him act rash in certain situations. Instead of being calm he his more hyped up and aggressive.
Strives for Perfection wrote:Nezumi feels like he can't ever fail at anything, because that would lead to people losing interest and would leave him alone once more. Because of the fact that he doesn't ever want to be alone, he puts 100% of his focus on what he's doing and his surroundings. Nezumi is always being careful to not miss a single detail and to make sure everything he does is as perfect as it can be within his own limitations. He refuses to acknowledge his failures to anyone, and will do any task as many times as it's needed so long as he is able to accomplish it in nothing but a perfect fashion.
Self-conscious wrote:He doesn't like it when people try to over-analyze him. Nezumi is nervous that they will peer into his soul and see the scarred remains of what he really should be. He doesn't want people to see his pain, to see his emotional wounds and to be drive away from him. Nezumi wants people to stay around him, he doesn't want anybody to leave him and because of this he's very paranoid and weary about his surroundings, though it doesn't really show in his actions and personality. He makes sure to note everything, and to keep everything he does and says in check to ensure the best outcome in each situation, all born from his desire to be accompanied and to avoid the solitude Nezumi has had to face for so long.
Likes:

  • Buranchigakure
  • Females
  • Excitement
  • Thrilling Situations
  • Training

Dislikes:

  • Gum
  • Soccer
  • Slow Days
  • Boring Conversations
  • Evil

Catch Phrases:"You're such a loser."
Nindo: No matter how costly, I will protect those close to me.

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Clan Name: Kotonashi
Bloodline Name: Boil Release The Rocket of Buranchi -- Nezumi Kotonashi 18px-Nature_Icon_Boil.svg
Bloodline Ability:

Boil Release (沸遁, Futton; Viz "Vapour Style") is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that is made up of techniques that combine fire and water-based chakra to create a powerful corrosive vapour capable of melting anything. The user is also able to control the range and level of the vapour's acidity. Not only is it dangerous to be near, but as being gaseous, it can cover a considerable range shortly, and go through small spaces. It also stays in the air, so it can potentially deal continuous damage if the enemy is trapped or knocked back into its range. Reference: This technique is strong enough to melt Susanoo's ribs; an impressive feat, as Sasuke has stated that Susanoo is even more of an absolute defence than Gaara's Shield of Sand. It however has the inherit flaw of being able to harm allies, so it is critical to control the level and range of the attack, and use it in a smart area.

Location: Buranchigakure
Clan History:

There is a Buranchigakure fable about the ones birthed from the clouds. In a small land ravaged with war and the soil drenched with tears from the sky, a lustrous burst caressed the atmosphere as lightning ripped into the ground, destroying it utterly. This cataclysm of nature and the bloodlust of the feuding armies created an energy on that day, giving rise to a new genesis, evolved in the image of shinobi—carved to near perfection in appearance; ability moreso.

It was only a legend, of course. The inception of the Kotonashi clan recognized in official record can be traced back to antiquity where inhabitable lands were few and civilizations were scattered. Its founders and their generations grew up in an incredibly tumultuous environment. Lightning storms cause mass explosions when hitting the earth which was ubiquitous there. It was befitting, because the Kotonashi had always possessed an affinity for lightning & earth. The common belief was that their chakra nature came as a biological imperative for survival...but who could say? Their characteristics were difficult to trace, hence the myths.

Times were prosperous and courtesy was in order. Settled in their ways after long since forming a family, the nameless patriarch and his subordinates clasped hands and joined together in a collective hum. All hushed, intoning soft prayer. After their mumbling, everything in sight dimmed. The familiar rumbling disturbed the anticipatory women and children, but the patriarch remained steadfast. A cacophonous noise preceded ringing ears. Their adrenaline rushed like the streak of desolation embracing frail bodies. This practice was excruciating and reoccurring.

This ritual survived up until the First Shinobi World War, whereupon the realization struck that not even the gods had the power to protect them, if the gods even existed to receive their praise. The war served as a culling process, where their numbers dwindled down to absolute strongest of the group; more women than men, interestingly enough. By the conclusion of the war, most of their numbers had been vanquished, and they became a primarily militarized clan out of necessity. Though they would not have agreed to it being beneficial at the time, posterity proved it to be.

Taking note of the remaining fighters in lieu of the casualties, the nameless patriarch had found his ideal, and that was to set the stage to breed the most capable shinobi for his lineage. It was in honor of the vast generational staircase that came before him, and ultimately, the generations who would succeed him. Eugenics became his life mission; an obsession that would come to nearly consume his humanity. Any lesser person was murdered at birth. The patriarch established a science division to dissect each infant, with he serving as the overseer—a mad scientist.

Although he did come to achieve what he wanted in the creation of a set of offspring with perfect genes, he had failed to master a way to extend his own life, and thus the patriarch perished. With his own life ending, he used his skills to murder all but the most capable members of his clan. Anyone deemed unsuitable was cleansed from the Kotonashi, leaving only the members with the greatest and most suitable genes. This set the precedent for future generations of the clan, and the practice continued to influence the clan into modern times, albeit with expatriation rather than death.

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Name: Storage Necklace
Type: Supplementary
Appearance: Necklace itself hangs from Nezumi’s neck on a simple chain. Made from three etched rings one of steel, platinum and silver, the necklace is fashioned almost like a piece of jewelry. Rotating patterned rings of various sizes fit together and rotate freely when left unchecked. When locked in place and held there, the various rings seem to form intricate seals obvious to those that inspect the trinket further in this state.

Rank: C
Special Abilities: The storage necklace may look like a piece of jewelry but this is because it allows its owner to carry object, usually weapons that would instead be stored in large and bulky scrolls into a small and compact form that doesn't get in the way during social functions or day to day operation. There are six possible seal combination resulting in the necklace allowing for six separate objects to be stored at any given time. Once and object is stored in the necklace in remains in storage until the user activates the seal with their chakra and summons the specific stored object forth.

Storage Index:
Seal #1: Sorakiri [Heaven Cutter]
Seal #2: ---
Seal #3: ---
Seal #4: ---
Seal #5: ---
Seal #6: ---

Origin: The Storage Necklace is another trinket of Nezumi’s father who was also a trained shinobi yet enjoyed an active social life among Buranchigakure’s merchant elite. Always wanting to be prepared on at least some level, this formal piece of jewelry was invaluable. Crafted in the manner of an interesting puzzle and encompassing the usage of Fuuinjutsu, the necklace is Shien at its very core. Allowing any of the simplest ninja who know the seals to use the necklace. Nezumi’s usage of it is much that same as his father’s but instead also allows the boy to carry around his array of large swords around with him at any given time without weighing his body down.

Name: Sorakiri [Heaven Cutter]
Type: Bladed
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Rank: A
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Origin: For a long as Nezumi could member, the blade have always been in his family. The Moon Blade was rumored to be passed down from the very first Nara Clan Member down to his son, on the year that he retired. The Sun Blade was said to belong to his first wife, which too was given to her only Son, on her death bed. Both Blades were said to be passed down generation to generation. At the mark of 30 years, the blades are to be reshaped and formed by the best blacksmith in the village. Each reshaping and reforming are to take place at the end of the head ninja's retirement, unless there is a death, than the blade transfer directly to the wife or new head of house hold.

It was said to be that Nezumi's Great Great Great Grand father received the blades after a terrible fire that had left his bother and pregnant wife dead. Although there were even more rumors that claimed his Great Grand father to be the cause of the fire, it had never been proven and thus the blades had remained on Nezumi's grand father side ever since. With the blade only being passed down early before retirement twice, once for his dad, and second for Nezumi.

The Rocket of Buranchi -- Nezumi Kotonashi Sumu

Contract: Spritual Sentient Being
Name: Aobōzu
Rank: A
Element: --
Personality: Aobōzu is a strong silent type, usually only speaking when there is something to be said. In life he had been a monk that became corrupted with dark practices to such a point that he became a demon. One of the few things Aobōzu will speak freely of is his interest, if any, of adding an opponent’s skull to his collection.

Appearance: Aobōzu has a somewhat humanoid shape to him, though only from the waist up. Below this point is a spiritual tail that looks like waving fog as it extend to near the ground. Thus, Aobōzu does not walk on, but hovers above, the surface level. His maximum extent is 15m above the ground, so this spirit lacks the ability to truly fly. Aobōzu upper body looks like that of a rather muscular man at the peak of his physique. However, Aobōzu's body is a bluish green in color. On his chest and over where a heart would be is a metallic plate. Attached to this is a slew of chains, along with two leather central band to hold it in place. The chains wrap around many parts of Aobōzu's body, two of the chains dangling down at the shoulders, and the other two continue down to the wrist before they fall off. attached to the end of each chain is a human skull, mutated to possess razor sharp teeth. These skulls belong to those who have been claimed by Aobōzu. Aobōzu has a chain and leather band that covers his right eye.

Weapons or Items: N/A
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Jutsu Specialist:
-Ninjutsu
-Genjutsu
-Weaponary
Chakra Pool: 300
Element Affinity: Boil Release
Element Affinity: Fire Release
Sub Element Affinity: Water Release
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These jutsu are automatically learned by you're character.
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Water Jutsu:

Fire Jutsu:

Genjutsu:

Regular Jutsu:

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Revy

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Chakra please set it to 300 you was not given permission.

Also explosion release is a limited ability apply for it before making it on your app located on the limited list. Your clan would be limited to the amount of slots that is open.

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Edited. Clan Here

Staz Charlie Blood

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Yea same thing that Kaira said and I see the mention of Tsuchikage and Iwagakure please change those to names of this site. I'm a little disappointed in the Looks Description, the first few sentences of  the third paragraph feels like a repeat of the top half of the 2nd paragraph so please edit that. Also in the fourth paragraph of the Looks Description says you have scrolls and weapons. Remove that please you need to make a topic with your weapons and add jutsu please. Thanks.

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Edited. Added Jutsu & Re-Worked Appearance

Revy

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Use our jutsu template please for all techniques I know it takes time but I am doing it also on my app and I expect everyone else to be. The template is located in the jutsu creation center.

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Edited. Done

Revy

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LTajū Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Multiple Shadow Clone Technique) Limited ability remove unless your claiming it.

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Edited. Claiming Scorch Release (Limited Ability)

Revy

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You cannot claim stuff randomly in an app go to the limited list located in the request part of the site and pick something from the list that is not banned.

Scorch is banned so CLAN DENIED

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Clan removed.

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Done

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  • Boil Release: Heat Barrier - What can break it, please give precise details.
  • Boil Release: Flying Swallow - How long is the chakra extension?
  • Boil Release: Boil Dragon Bullet Technique - If it is able to bend and be controlled change the duration to 1 - Lasting. And you will need to pay the CP lasting cost.
  • Boil Release: Skilled Mist Technique - The Distance of the mist?
  • Sorakiri [Heaven Cutter] - How much CP does it take away when charging the blade?
  • All Summoning Jutsu - Need to be ranked, have cool downs and durations.
  • You can't have the blade if you don't have weaponry as a spec.

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Tsugeki Genshi

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I'd say just make the Edoso a B-Rank, and you'll get my 1/2. (also maybe specify how many demons can be summoned at once)

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Sweatshirt. wrote:Name: Shinobi Raishuu (Ninja Attack)
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: --
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: N/A
Description: This Genjutsu is activated as an opening to many situations. During the effects of this Jutsu the enemy will be assaulted by enemies from all directions. Nameless figures will slowly appear from the corners of the area, whether that means they peek out from behind trees or look over walls the ninja will all peer down on the unsuspecting victims. With great concentration the user will control the fighting, allowing him to manipulate each ninja from above like a puppet master looking down on his little stage. These ninja can have any equipment one could imagine and attack with any means available, and they will continue to attack until the user ends the Jutsu. For the record, these fakes can be damaged and “killed” but more will take their place. This is effective for testing an enemy or an ally while at the same time facilitating the movement of other friendlies in the area. This technique ends when the user no longer focuses on it, though he is not able to move very far during this Jutsu he is allowed a basic amount of movement, but by no means will he be able to fight during this technique, at the most he can dodge while still standing in the same place. This is meant for use against one to many opponents.

Name: Cognitive Dissonance
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: --
Duration: 4 post
Cooldown: 2 post
Description: A fairly useful and interesting genjutsu that affects one's cognitive abilities and directly targets the brain. By interrupting the way that the brain receives and transmits information from one neuron to the next, the user can consequently rewrite the way the target's brain handles such information. By switching the roles of words and actions, they can instantly confuse the enemy by making their body like a puzzle that is extremely difficult to figure out. Any action that the target wishes to perform can no longer be done from thought and impulse alone, but by way of words. And any word that is to be spoken comes directly from thinking of it. In other words, the way the target speaks and performs actions is re versed as far as the process goes. This can be quite confusing, though it won't necessarily hinder anyone for very long.
For these two jutsu can you please add a trigger used for activation.

Sweatshirt. wrote:Name: Seken no Yoinokuchi (World of Nightfall)
Rank: S
Type: Genjutsu
Element: --
Duration: Until CP Runs Out
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: This Genjutsu stops time momentarily after activation and quickly alters reality around the enemy, Once they are caught within this dreadful technique, the enemy will see the world in blues and whites, deep colors void of emotion. But then, that same emotion that was once gone will creep into them, fear, jealousy, envy, sadness, all will be absorbed into the enemy, welling up inside them like an ocean in a tea cup. Unable to move and barely able to breathe the enemy will be forced to suffer through this slow and debilitating torture until finally the technique is released. Though it does not have a set time frame, this technique (unless it is broken) will last until the user is 30 meters (roughly 100 feet) away from the enemy, at which time they will then be able to break away from the technique. But while they are still within that range it will be very difficult to do, even impossibly so if the Nezumi himself is helping.
An S-Rank jutsu of this caliber seems a bit advanced for someone who has Genjutsu as a Secondary Skill. Nevertheless, I would also require a trigger also.

Sweatshirt. wrote:Name: Fire Release: Racing Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
ElementThe Rocket of Buranchi -- Nezumi Kotonashi 18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: 3 post
Description: After performing several hand-signs the user of this technique will create at their base or hands a small flame that will rapidly expand and shoot forth according to how the user molds their chakra, since guiding the flames along the ground not only consumes chakra but also requires the user to concentrate on the attack path. This fire will travel in rapidly moving jets which will race towards the target and surround them in a ring of intense flames, which can be made all the more powerful with the introduction of wind from Fuuton techniques. So long as the user maintains the final hand-sign of this technique they will be able to direct the fire anywhere within the range limits of the technique, even splitting the traveling flame into multiple branches from the original source. While this technique is usually performed on the ground so as to limit the movement of the target, it can also be done in a mid-air spin, forming the fire from the user's limb into a ring that can be shot towards the target. These fires can easily rise above the height of a normal person even from being created with a very small initial flame, and the addition of more chakra can make the fires rise even higher if needed.
This one seems fine accept for the "Pyrokinesis" continuing for 3 posts. I'll take 2 posts, but 3 posts seems excessive.

Sweatshirt. wrote:[spoiler="Fire Jutsu"]Name: Fire Release: Salamandra
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
ElementThe Rocket of Buranchi -- Nezumi Kotonashi 18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg
Duration: 2 post
Cooldown: 1 post
Description: This technique creates a large, wide, flaming viper that spans the length of Nezumi’s arm. From there, the chakra-based serpentine can constrict around an object and increase the power of its output; in other words, Nezumi can punch harder when this thing supplements his arm, or swing harder with a weapon. It can also unravel and attach itself to other things, both energy-based attacks and solid objects. From there, Nezumi has added momentum through certain offenses. Nezumi does sustain all damage from any kinetic opposition Salamandra attaches to, but it allows him to push forward as if unharmed, unless the opposing force is stronger. This technique can be dissipated easily if targeted, especially against stronger elements.
Can you take out this part please
both energy-based attacks and solid objects
and simply make it solid objects because fire is intangible.

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1. Fire Release: Racing Flames - Changes were not made to.
2. Shinobi Raishuu (Ninja Attack) - Is seeing the user do the 'Ram' hand signs the trigger? If so please state that.
3. Seken no Yoinokuchi (World of Nightfall) - Changes were not made.

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1. I saw your comment more as a suggestion rather than a course of action you wanted me to take. I have a grievance against making it only 2 post, while it may seem excessive I believe it to be just enough time. For it may not hit it's intended target on the first run. Pyrokinesis isn't an actual ability, yet a term used to describe how Nezumi can control the flames.

2. Shinobi Raishuu is a passive genjutsu technique so it happens without the consent of the opponent. The genjutsu is not casted on the opponent but on the area in which the opponent encompasses. So a trigger for this jutsu would be unnecessary.

3. Once again the perceived course of action that you wanted me to take seemed more like a suggestion. I'm sure a S-Rank Kage can learn one S-Rank genjutsu, even if he/she only has it as a secondary. There are no rules that say otherwise. Also a trigger was added.

Revy

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its your secondary so make sure you only have one and do as the mod asks please. Don't use the excuse not in the rules as it doesn't fly or loopholes.

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If it isn't specified in the rules or common sense then it's justified. So other than that, can I get my second approval now?

Tsugeki Genshi

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In sweatshirt's defense, I don't think it has ever been said that there are secondary/primary proficiencies in the rules.

Katsuro

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I'll flip through your Application in a moment to see if there are more changes that need to be done or if there needs to be an approval up in hur.

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