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1Hatake | [Done]  Empty Hatake | [Done] Tue Feb 25, 2014 6:43 am

Vince

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Clan Name: Hatake
Clan element/'s: Wind and Lightning; required for Spark Release.
Special characteristics/traits: Grey-Black hair, usually intelligent personalities.
Location: Sunagakure/Scattered.

Bloodline Name: Spark Release (フラッシュリリース, Supāku)
Bloodline Ability: Spark release is a mixture between Wind and Lightning. It's not the same when you compare lightning and sparks, because sparks is a type of electricity created through contact/mixtures of different items and natures. Lightning is plainly lightning, however not sparks itself. Sparks can consist of many types of techniques utilizing this KKG.
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Last edited by Vince on Wed Feb 26, 2014 8:58 am; edited 6 times in total

2Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:10 am

Sato

Sato

Your missing the weakness part for the jutsu Templates?

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3Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 12:20 am

Vince

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You added in the weakness part after I posted this. Or my web browser didn't show it, lol.
Added in Weaknesses.

Edit: +Members too.

4Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 3:57 am

Eden Alexandria

Eden Alexandria
Suna Anbu
Suna Anbu

Spark Release: Spark Rod - The weakness, "The rod doesn't last for long"...if this is the case, there needs to be an exact duration. Otherwise replace it with a different weakness.

Spark Release: Rippling Shockwave Technique - No invisible techniques please. They need to be visible to the eye. Especially if only at B-rank.

Spark Release: Static Sphere - Same as above. No invisible techniques.

Spark Release: Spark Arrow - "infused with Static which is thrown and is untraceable from any eye." Nerf this, please. This would mean the technique can travel faster than the speed of light on a literal scale. I'm not sure just how much is allowable here normally, but this is definitely overpowered in my book.

Note: Keep in mind that durations are explicitly referring to the duration of the technique itself. Duration in the template will never refer to how long effects last on the opponent. That goes in the description.

5Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 4:15 am

Vince

Vince
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Kumo Anbu

"How long does this jutsu last for?" I'm pretty sure it means both what you're saying and the effect duration, otherwise Duration would only be there for one reason, because effect duration is also duration, hence the word duration. We shouldn't be disregarding it into description. Description is there to describe the technique itself rather than explain how long the effect/jutsu lasts.
Static Sphere is not an inivisible technique, it clearly states that you can VISIBLY see it. "you can visibly see the static going into the user in an orb or when it's first casted"
Spark Arrow, Spark Rod and Rippling Shockwave fixed.

6Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 7:26 am

Sato

Sato

Vince wrote:
Jutsu:

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7Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 8:25 am

Vince

Vince
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Fixed the mistakes.  Hatake | [Done]  1805572670 

8Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 8:37 am

Sato

Sato

Approved [1/2] Eden will need to be your second.

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9Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 8:44 am

Eden Alexandria

Eden Alexandria
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Suna Anbu

One last thing. Every jutsu where you state that nerve damage done, please elaborate on exactly what it does to the nerves that damage them. I know this is nit-picky, but we need to know exactly how it would affect an opponent's nerve system since the nervous system is very important in the human body. :) Need to be extra specific the higher the rank of jutsu.

After you take care of this, I can give the second approval.

10Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Wed Feb 26, 2014 8:59 am

Vince

Vince
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Kumo Anbu

Mah gerd, too much typing for this night. Edited.

11Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Fri Feb 28, 2014 2:04 am

Vince

Vince
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Kumo Anbu

Bump, Eden I need an approval if you can? >_>

12Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Tue Mar 04, 2014 6:52 am

Kamina

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13Hatake | [Done]  Empty Re: Hatake | [Done] Thu Nov 13, 2014 5:01 pm

Sato

Sato


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