Custom Jutsu [Ichirou] wip

   Name:Be gone
   Rank:S
   Type:Ninjutsu
   Used For:Offensive/Defensive
   Element:Fire/Electron
   Range:60m Radius
   Duration: Instant
   Hand Seals/Charge up: 1 post charge
   Description: Ichirou gather a high amount of electrons around his body then lets the electrons explode out in a 60m radius around him. Not only this since he has the fire affinity, Ichirou adds that to the mix causing the jutsu to be very deadly and destructive. Everything excluding Ichirou within that 60M radius is disentergated; organgic beings are severly burned.
   Weakness:Costs D ranked chakra deduction on top of the already S rank chakra deduction. This jutsu can only be used twice per thread. After th jutsu is used all ninjutsu over D becomes unusable.

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Want to go ahead and get the Be gone jutsu approved

60m translates to roughly 160 feet, which is a bit much even for an S. Also, the way you worded your weakness makes it sound like a strength. Instead of saying 'Costs a S and D rank jutsu deduction,' because that implies that you get a Jutsu reduction, you would say that on top of paying the S amount of chakra, you would also pay an additional D amount of chakra. And with the destructiveness presented by this tech, I believe you need another weakness. Something like, you cannot move during the duration of the Jutsu. Or you become exhausted for x amount of post. Catch my drift?

It'd be just over half a football field though

Decrease range to 50m. How long are you prohibited from using anything above D? Entire thread or a set amount of post?