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1The demons among us [Complete] Empty The demons among us [Complete] Thu May 15, 2014 12:36 am

Kal

Kal
Kiri Anbu
Kiri Anbu

The demons among us [Complete] 1prj

Clan Name:Kaos

Clan element's: Dark Chakra

Special characteristics/traits: Being an engineered clan, most member have a heightened stamina and endurance, while lasting this has been noticed as one of the passive characteristics of the clan and said to be a part of the KKG. almost all members are also very pale. due to some sort of malfunction with experimenting the clan has been given the gift to transform their limbs into weapons and also the ability to transform themselves into demonic humanoids.

Location: Scattered

Bloodline Name:
Akuma o henkan suru (transforming demons)

Bloodline Ability:
The wielders of this KKG have dark chakra. This allows users to partially or fully transform their bodies onto demonic humanoids or certain limbs onto weapons.they work off of dark chakra. the abiltity to trnasform back and forth between demonic humanoids and their weapons is a bonus but the true ability is their bodys can do it only suffering mild cases of stress to their bodys and fatigue. stress and faigue only happens if the users are not use to doing it or if they go full demonic humanoid

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Demonic release- Partial Demonic Transformation
Rank- B
Element- dark chakra
Duration- as long as it can be maintained
Range- self
Type KKG offensive
Handseals- none
Description- The user takes in enough dark chakra to altercate his arms from his elbows down. The user can only use the same kind of weapons on both hands. These weapons can not be changed at rapid intervals. these weapons include hammers double edged swords axes and even spikes
Weakness The alternates weapons are only a b rank weapon. The weapons can be broken and causing revertation by a strong force brought upon them by either blunt force or and item strong enough to cut through them. the weapons being made by the weilder is also affected by rank. so if the user is an a rank ninja the weapons will have to be broken by atleast an a rank weapon


Demonic Release- Full Demonic Transformation
Rank- s and will cost the amount regardless of chakra discount and rank discount
Element- dark chakra (demonic chakra)
Range-self
Type-KKG
Duration- 8 of my posts
Handseals- none
Description-This ability is the most used and dangerous justu of the Kaos clans arsenal. The weilder of this exoctic ability is allowed to tranform into a demonic humanoid while being able to transform his arms into any weapons they would like to use. this jutsu allows the users body to gain and additional foot in height and an about 10 lbs in mass. due to the clans unique abilitys, while in this form the user is yet gifted with high stamina and endurance on par of the opening the second gate. thus, no heightened speed nor strength is given. but due to the skin being altered, it becomes hardened to the point where only s rank weapons can pierce the actual skin or an s rank taijutsu move can harm and do damage. the only problem with this technique is where the body and muscles had stretches and grew in the transformation is that when reveting all the muscles in the body are very sore, and just about at a breaking opint. it hurts the users to move for a short while afterwards. thus being in the demonic state and form the users stamina and endrance isnt affect but as soon as they revert back the fatigue will hit like a ton of brick, and they will be on the brink of uncontioness.

Weaknesses- due to the hichly hardened skin the user can take most damage and absorb it. if hit with a sharpened s rank weaponf hard enough or even a s rank taijutsu move it will affect damage normally, due to the hardened skin most ninjutsu wont have due much, eventhough a jutsu is s ranked it will do only have of the damage it normally would because the skin is so hard, not much feeling at all. after reverting from this transformation the ody will have alot of stress and tension and putting the user in danger for in a stand so closly to fainting.

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Clan History:

An experiment that went horribly wrong cause this clan to be born. It all started with a male and female survivor. These two being lucky enough to get away from the mad scientist didn't understand what had happened to them. After the experimentations that the scientists had brought upon them, they had started to feel different. Soon after they discovered they no longer could use regular chakra but was only taking in sunrays that they felt an amense power, this power was known as dark chakra or to them dark chakrs. This made them stronger,faster, and having better endurance and stamina. This wasnt all they soon realized they were gaining his dark chakra at a rapid pave. Knowing that eventually this would cause them to go completely mad and blood lusted. Or as they would say the demon would take over. To waste energy they discovered their abilities to transform into demonic humanoids. Though scary but really strong. Eventually they fell in love and decided to make a family. Not realizing that was has been done to them will carry on. Their first born came about and proving a valid point that the boy didn't start taking in demonic chkra until he was 10 years old. Not only did he use demonic chakrs instead of regular chakra but he was able to altercate his arms until he was older then he could turn full demon. So the cycle went on for a few years. Their child having a son also went through the same problems. Everything was doing good until the third son of tue third son got into a fight and used his powers. Not only did he win but he killed the other guy. Putting the whole village in a frenzie they kill all of a few males and females of tue clan. Of course they left the village and devote their lives to secrecy. Now scattered all across tue Shino I world. Anyone could be a demon walking among the normal. So far only 6 members are known to live and thrive with this gift of the demons.

Members:
1/6

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Last edited by Kal on Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:03 am; edited 18 times in total

2The demons among us [Complete] Empty Re: The demons among us [Complete] Tue Aug 12, 2014 10:47 pm

Kamina

Kamina
Akatsuki
Akatsuki

Chakra regeneration is a no go, and your S rank jutsu you'll need to give specific increases to speed and strength so a +1 to taijutsu or something along those lines. Note that you cannot exceed master level speed and strength.

Make the edits sir.

3The demons among us [Complete] Empty Re: The demons among us [Complete] Tue Aug 12, 2014 11:50 pm

Kal

Kal
Kiri Anbu
Kiri Anbu

edited again...

4The demons among us [Complete] Empty Re: The demons among us [Complete] Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:17 am

Kamina

Kamina
Akatsuki
Akatsuki

Unless your getting any skill passives to tai or nin from skill characteristics you don't put that there. Also throw in some clan weakness, Not all clans have huge weakness but even the slightest thing should be posted. Also for your Clone jutsu you still have it saying you regain chakra. And for the S rank.

Demonic Release- Full Demonic Transformation
Rank- s
Element- dark chakra (demonic chakra)
Range-self
Type-KKG
Duration- as long as it can be maintained Needs a post limit
Handseals- none
Description- the ultimate jutsu of this clan. Allowing only the jounin of the clan can be granted enough nat
demonic chakra to transform and taking the appearance of a demonic humanoid. Granting the user hardened black skin(obviously boosts defense so like +1),WE have no inherent defense skill so list types of attacks it can withstand and up to what rank also keep in mind element effects such as burning and shock. slight speed increase(that of maybe second gate),and strength increase of +1. Even being an S rank jutsu you wont be able to surpass master taijutsu level speed and strength so no gate level speeds or strength.The user however gets tunnel vision when fighting only to be able to focus on one opponent. The user may also alter their arms from the elbows down into whatever they want. They can change the weapons in rapid success but must also pay the additional activation fee.
Weakness: Once the jutsu is released the user may only use one more jutsu that day for he will be sluggish and exponentially exhausted and close to death. He won't be able to put up a fight if more than one enemy is around. Needs a better weakness, saying he only suffers adverse effects if he uses a jutsu afterwards its just trying to worm around it. Since its effecting physical abilities it a common weakness would be a drop in physical ability below the norm immediately after losing the effect

This jutsu is basically a 'Lightning Armor' version of your clan. Lightning armor is on the banned and limited and for good reason as its the ONLY other method of boosting your strength and speed up to a low gate level.

5The demons among us [Complete] Empty Re: The demons among us [Complete] Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:54 am

Kamina

Kamina
Akatsuki
Akatsuki

Explain the effects of dark chakra, if its basically just pure chakra thats colored then you might as well list all jutsu as pure chakra or something of the sort. Also seeing has how you wont be gaining chakra from the sun you dont necessarily need that part in your clan. Back to special characteristics you list things like the enhanced endurance and stamina all of this will need to be listed as passives according the system if thats what they are meant to be, if not then remove them. The special characteristics section is where you can go more into depth about the nature of your 'dark chakra' jutsu and the ability to turn your arms into weapons. Which reminds me what do the two have to do with each other? Even before this newest update you had a clan that could use chakra from the sun and then make arm weapons all willy nilly. Im not too sure how the two are related to each other in your clan?

6The demons among us [Complete] Empty Re: The demons among us [Complete] Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:26 am

Kamina

Kamina
Akatsuki
Akatsuki

The jutsu is better but you need to edit in any S rank attack. S rank fire jutsu would still burn you right? And S rank electricity would still shock you? If there are exceptions to this please explain why and list it in a weakness part under the jutsu it disappeared. Also you need an exact amount to detail your heightened endurance and stamina An example could be an enhanced chakra pool. Also remove the 'lower cost because of endurance and stamina' from your jutsu. Jutsu have set costs and depending on your skill level already determines what amount of chakra you will pay.

7The demons among us [Complete] Empty Re: The demons among us [Complete] Wed Aug 13, 2014 3:09 am

Kal

Kal
Kiri Anbu
Kiri Anbu

edited

8The demons among us [Complete] Empty Re: The demons among us [Complete] Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:11 am

V

V
Konoha Jounin
Konoha Jounin

Subject has agreed to 65 CP initial cost for full transformation.

You have my approval.

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