Raionhato Style Jutsu III

Name: Raionhato Killing Technique: Lion's Bladed Fang
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Kenjutsu
Used For: Offense/Defense
Element: N/A
Range: Within Weapon Range
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up: -
Description: Similar to the samurai's "Iaido" technique, this kenjutsu serves as a quick draw slash. There is no particular stance for this kenjutsu meaning it can be used differently, depending on the situation (except if laying on down). The user unsheathes their sword, with an explosive slash towards the target. The swipe is such a strike that the average shinobi of even S rank will not be able to tract the swing before it concludes. Unlike the samurai version, the user does not sheathe their weapon. Instead they leave it out, a setup for a second attack should the first attack miss. The force of the swing is enough to cut through a boulder and fast enough to interrupt a adept ninjutsu skilled ninja's hand-weaving instantly.
Weakness: Katana is required. Cannot be performed if laying down flat on your back. The technique requires a lot of force and as such can cause a strain on the arms. As such the jutsu can only be used three times. The first two resulting in major strains (reducing speed by 10%), the third resulting in that arm used being unable to hold a weapon at all.

Gambaldi wrote:
Name: Raionhato Killing Technique: Lion's Bladed Fang
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Kenjutsu
Used For: Offense/Defense
Element: N/A
Range: Within Weapon Range
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up: -
Description: Similar to the samurai's "Iaido" technique, this kenjutsu serves as a quick draw slash. There is no particular stance for this kenjutsu meaning it can be used differently, depending on the situation (except if laying on down). The user unsheathes their weapon and slashes at such a speed that by the time the victim sees the blade, the swing will have been made. Unlike the samurai version, the user does not sheathe their weapon. Instead they leave it out, a setup for a second attack should the first attack miss. The force of the swing is enough to cut through a boulder and fast enough to interrupt a adept ninjutsu skilled ninja's hand-weaving instantly.
Weakness: Katana is required. Cannot be performed if laying down flat on your back.

"such a speed that by the time the victim sees the blade, the swing will have been made."

Change to " No ordinary S rank shinobi could see it" As it sits it basically god mods a target, that they will be unable to see it. There are various things that could allow character to see it: KKGs, character abilities and even certain CS.

Also the Weakness isn't a weakness, its an obviously. That's like saying can't use a ninjutsu when their hands are tied. Or a movement technique can't use it when sitting down. I mean obviously you are laying down. Needs a real weakness.

Edited.

The user unsheathes their weapon and slashes at such a speed that by the time the victim sees the blade, the swing will have been made(according to a typical S-Rank vision)


Still needs to change. The phrase is still a borderline god-modding.


The user unsheathes their sword, with an explosive slash towards the target. The swipe is such a strike that the average shinobi of even S rank will not be able to tract the swings before it concludes.

Something like that. IT can't have a guarantee in it, of any kind. No absolutes.

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