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1Crystal Release  Empty Crystal Release Sat Sep 06, 2014 6:52 pm

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin

Crystal Release  1prj

Clan Name: Varies
Clan element/'s: Earth
Special characteristics/traits: None
Location: Scattered

Bloodline Name: Crystal Release
Bloodline Ability: The Crystal Release (晶遁, Shōton; English TV "Crystal Style") is a rare and specialised field of elemental ninjutsu that can create crystal as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures.
Additional Information:
Added Branch:
Secret Clan Jutsu: Make Your Own. Check the Wikia.

Clan History: Something that had originally started with one user blossomed into something that had a great deal of users within the world. Contrary to popular belief, Guren had not been the first individual to utilize Crystal release, there had been a large family within Kiri that had specialized in the field before they were crippled in number by the genocides. There was also a clan within Kumo who had specialized in Crystal Release. So getting the first person to ever use the specialized field of ninjutsu is quite difficult if not impossible.

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Last edited by Chikara on Wed Oct 08, 2014 7:44 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Sun Sep 07, 2014 1:06 am

Akira

Akira

Akira Approves!

3Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Sun Oct 05, 2014 8:09 pm

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Been moved out of approved section for something is being added. Once it has been added, this will need to be approved again.

4Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Wed Oct 08, 2014 7:45 pm

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



With Don's clan information added, this is up for re-approval.

5Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:36 pm

Siegfried

Siegfried

Izanagi wrote: This allows them to harden their bones using the dark Crystal underneath their skin. This unique trait can aide a clan member in defensive situation, where their body will become so hard. That certain weapons and even jutsus at times may find it difficult to pierce their crystallized armor underneath their skin. They can also have the dark Crystals materialize on the outer layer of their body for further manipulation. This normally comes into the form of steel hard spikes being protruded from just about everywhere on the body. The Suishou Clan member bones hold a certain secret which is thought to be their greatest asset in battle. It is called Naimen Ran 内面蘭 or "Inner Orchid". It is a condition that all members have but only few are capable of using.

Is this its own technique or is this a passive technique (referring to the bolded information)? Up to what rank of techniques can this dermal armor defend against, what elemental techniques can actually bypass the defense (if any), can techniques like Sealing Techniques work against this sort of thing, etc...

Izanagi wrote: These crystals remain dormant and unusable for years continuously collecting bits of chakra allowing them, in theory, to have incredible amounts of chakra or a rather large reserve of Chakra naturally. Think Naruto/Kisame. For most members this is the only stage of Naimen Ran that they will ever be capable of using. Although there are a few members that are capable of drawing this auxiliary chakra out in what is known as the second stage. Can store an S-rank amount of Chakra in crystal buds to use at a later date.

Is this a separate amount of chakra aside from the allotted chakra reserves one's rank has? How is this chakra released (hand-seals? Simply utilizing it through willpower? if used, how long does it take for the user to regrow this crystal? Do they simply take away one S-Rank amount of chakra from their body in order to regrow this chakra-storing crystal?)

Izanagi wrote:Those very crystals will aid in the creation of Ninjutsu and Taijutsu techniques. The crystals can then be manipulated in order to form the desired technique along the way. The bones and body itself will be strengthened, making it more difficult to cause harm to the Suishou clan member.

Just to clarify, you are stating that there are certain abilities that can ONLY be used when this stage is attained? The density of this stage, how durable is the body? I believe I asked that earlier in the first critique paragraph, but I just need second clarification just to be safe.



Just note that these stages will have to have a price to achieve them, and depending on how complex they are you may have to add quite the amount of ryo to progress. When this stage is clarified I will move on to the rest

Disregard, I noticed the WC requirements for some. However, another mod might come through and make you add them. You're good for now Crystal Release  3515236843

6Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:38 pm

Don Pluto

Don Pluto

Question:
Is this its own technique or is this a passive technique (referring to the bolded information)? Up to what rank of techniques can this dermal armor defend against, what elemental techniques can actually bypass the defense (if any), can techniques like Sealing Techniques work against this sort of thing, etc...
Answer:
Its a Passive Technique the user can manipulate this Armour any time in battle, because it can be used in battle with the amount of chakra from a D rank technique. This only holds up to C rank attacks if not the elements weakness and if its Fuinjutsu or Taijutsu or Kenjustu it can hold up up to C rank as well.

Question:
Is this a separate amount of chakra aside from the allotted chakra reserves one's rank has? How is this chakra released (hand-seals? Simply utilizing it through willpower? if used, how long does it take for the user to regrow this crystal? Do they simply take away one S-Rank amount of chakra from their body in order to regrow this chakra-storing crystal?)
Answer:
This is a separate amount of chakra store in a crystal that is created by a technique. To release the chakra one must use hand seals two, and two post for it to release. To regrow the crystal takes two post, it takes away S rank away from the user to regrow.

Question
Just to clarify, you are stating that there are certain abilities that can ONLY be used when this stage is attained? The density of this stage, how durable is the body? I believe I asked that earlier in the first critique paragraph, but I just need second clarification just to be safe.
Answer:
Yes can ONLY be obtain, at a certain stage. The Armour, duration is Keepable until broken or user killed. Can only be heal or aid three times a topic, it doesn't heal all of the users wounds.

Hope this are better answers and if you want me to add it to the Information ill let Chikara to put it together :)

7Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:49 pm

Siegfried

Siegfried

Okay, then that stage and all I had questioned are approved. Moving on now.


Izanagi wrote:As anyone can imagine, a Suishou clan member is granted speed, strength, stamina and chakra. At the height of their Rank no Kaika, a Suishou clan member speed and strength can be compared to someone with Master Taijutsu. Their Chakra and stamina would have increased, but not without a cost which is explained below. At this stage, the Chakra capacity of a Suishou clansman increases, which lends to their naturally large Chakra reserves. This grants them an additional 1 B rank amount of Chakra.

  • What if the person already has Mastery of Taijutsu at this level? Sato has thing thing in which he doesn't like customs exceeding Mastery levels
  • Clans already have a pre-set "Enhanced Chakra Pool" amount, which is simply an extra 10 to their base chakra level.


The power level thing sort of impedes the following stage as an anteing up in power. Unless you find another alternative, to which I'm unsure of myself.

8Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Mon Oct 13, 2014 11:04 pm

Don Pluto

Don Pluto

Question:
What if the person already has Mastery of Taijutsu at this level? Sato has thing thing in which he doesn't like customs exceeding Mastery levels
Answer:
If a person has Master Taijutsu it doesn't counts towards them only Basic and Adept Members. No need to worry about that one

Question:
Clans already have a pre-set "Enhanced Chakra Pool" amount, which is simply an extra 10 to their base chakra level.
Answer:
Alright then If that's how it is then no problem.

There does hope does are good answer for the questions.

9Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Mon Oct 13, 2014 11:11 pm

Siegfried

Siegfried

Okay those are fine. Just have Chikara make the edits when she's available.

Izanagi wrote:Ran no Kaika leads into Mankai no Ran 満開の蘭 or "Orchid in Full Bloom" which gives the user the capabilities to alter their bodies from the inside out and show the strongest state of Naimen Ran in which their inner Orchid has bloomed completely and their power is at the highest it shall ever be but it undoubtedly brings their bodies to a state of self destruction. Mankai no Ran is considered to be the Suishou's last resort and is only used when the enemy must surely die! Mankai no Ran can kill the clansmen. It is similar to the Hachimon in this aspect.

How is it similar to the Gates? Are you drawing on Gates-level power? That could cause some administrative backlash

Izanagi wrote:he Mankai no ran state grants the Suishou clan member extraordinary powers, and as such they’re known to be described as demons. This state as explained will allow the clan member to alter the state of their bodies. The dark crystals inside their body will come to the surface through their bores, and completely darkens the body. The change of appearance may vary from clansman to clansman. Some may go as far as to call them a byproduct of a Demon, but is not always the case. Their Chakra Capacity would have increased further giving them an additional 1 A rank amount of Chakra.

Remember, to exceed the enhanced limit, one must train: http://www.narutonexusrp.com/t220-chakra-jutsu-summons-rules-and-systems#1480

10Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Tue Oct 14, 2014 12:00 am

Don Pluto

Don Pluto

Question:
How is it similar to the Gates? Are you drawing on Gates-level power? That could cause some administrative backlash
Answer:
Reason in similarity with the gates is increases Taijutsu Speed, and strength, plus drawing on Gates-level power, and as a backlash it causes the user death on impact.

Ill fix the second one

11Crystal Release  Empty Re: Crystal Release Sun Nov 16, 2014 8:52 pm

Aerie Locke

Aerie Locke

REVIEW.

Is this finished? Is all information added?

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