Hazama's Jutsu creation thread.

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[b]Name:[/b][a realistic name, please.]
[b]Rank:[/b][What rank is this Jutsu?]
[b]Type:[/b][ninjutsu, genjutsu, etc.]
[b]Used For:[/b][Is this a Offensive or Defensive Jutsu? If both just state so.]
[b]Element:[/b][Does this jutsu have an element?]
[b]Range:[/b][how far can this Jutsu reach?]
[b]Duration:[/b] [How long does this jutsu last for?]
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b][How many seals does this jutsu require or how long does it take to charge before use?]
[b]Description:[/b][What does this Jutsu do? What does it look like etc.. details are important.]
[b]Weakness:[/b][EVERY CUSTOM JUTSU MUST HAVE ONE, NO BUTS.]

Name:Empty Cannon
Rank:B
Type:Taijutsu
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range: 45 meters
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up: place their hand in the shape of a gun
Description:Is an upgraded version of the empty hollow point jutsu. The user will release chakra from their finger tips in the form of a powerful beam of chakra. The jutsu itself travels at the speed of an adept taijutsu user. While it's impact damage is capable of blowing through solid stone. It is useful for precision based targets, and attacks allowing for some breathing room.
Weakness: Slows down after passing 30 meters

Added Oct 1st
Name:Eight Trigrams Shifting Blow
Rank:S
Type:Taijutsu
Used For:Both
Element:None
Range:65 m
Duration: Three Post
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:The user can focus five small chakra "spheres" to their fingertips and then release them to the enemy. Once the chakra sphere hits an enemy and enters their chakra system, Hazama is granted the ability to manipulate the shape transformation of the user's jutsus (this mainly applies to projectiles and blasts) for three posts. During which, the user can distort the enemy's jutsus' form in all sorts of ways, such as making a jutsu mid-way from hitting someone spiral back towards its user and turn it right back at them. While the jutsu moves at Taijutsu adapt speeds.Weakness if the bullets fail to hit its target, they'll turn right back at Hazama like a boomerang and if they hit him, the spheres will subtract 20 chakra for each bullet hit.


Name:Hyuuga Style:Gentle Flow (WIP)
Rank:B
Type:Taijutsu, Sensory, Jyuuken
Used For:Defensive
Element:None
Range:[how far can this Jutsu reach?]
Duration: [How long does this jutsu last for?]
Hand Seals/Charge up:[How many seals does this jutsu require or how long does it take to charge before use?]
Description:[What does this Jutsu do? What does it look like etc..


Name:Heavenly Star
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken KKG
Used For:Both
Element:
Range:70 M
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:[b/] Seal similar to the handgun
[b]Description: Hazama creates a more focused version of the one body blow technique in the form of a one centimeter sphere. Do to it being made of pure chakra ones who do not have a way of seeing chakra would not notice and even those who do would have a very hard time seeing it because of it's size. Do to it's compact size it is able to travel at far greater speeds than it's predecessor (Taijutsu Mastery Speed). When the star connects with chakra it will disrupt the technique or the chakra synthetic material cancelling it out regardless if it is elemental or natural. When the technique collides with a being or item it will release the chakra from within exploding itself by releasing a powerful version of the one body blow removing portions of flesh, and bone completely. The radius of the jutsu when it explodes range from to sixteen meters.
Weakness When the jutsu exceeds 50 meters it will slow down to adept.

Put a weakness like the beam slows down to Taijutsu basic speed after it passes 30 meters

there we go

Approved

New Jutsu Added Oct 1st Please review.

Would the dates help, but If you need them posted separately I could do that but it's less sexy. Would it be possible to just be more specific with letting you guys know what's been added, and what needs to be reviewed? I'm trying to be organized.

Since it's S-Rank how do you feel about Taijutsu Mastery, as it's a tai technique, and this character is a taijutsu master.

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make it Taijutsu Adept because keep in mind these bullets are normally invisible no?

There we go.

If it hits a target it removes 10 chakra per hit.

Remove this bit. The only person who's getting chakra is you. Otherwise, what you have for a weakness isn't going to suffice. The only thing your jutsu is doing is solely manipulating shape transformation of enemy jutsus.

Ah, very well. Edited.

Approved. Get that title.