Purple's List

Name: Creeping Tendrils
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Range: 30 Meters
Duration: 3 Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up:Rat-->Snake-->Roster-->Snake-->Rat-->Roster-->Rat-->Rat
Description: After performing the hand seals needed the ground around the opponent will begin to spike up and unless the target manages to get into the air above five meters(how far the earth can spike) they can either get impaled by the earth or captured by it. It is a strong technique and as such it requires more hand seals than most of B's jutsu.


Name: Golem's Touch
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Duration: 3 posts before requiring another A rank of chakra to last another 3 posts.
Hand Seals/Charge up:Snake
Description:This jutsu only requires one hand to form half of the hand seal for snake and for the caster to be touching an object. Once the jutsu is cast the user will form a seal on the object they are touching and seemingly melt into it. If the object is mobile or autonomous then the caster can move it about. If not then it can only expel chakra to move the object through the air. The user can jump out of the object at any time and even move the seal on the object. However if the seal is destroyed the user will be stuck in the object until it too is destroyed and after that the user will appear and will be extremely tired.
E Rank - 35 lbs
D Rank - 75 lbs
C Rank - 125 lbs
B Rank - 250 lbs
A Rank - 500 lbs
S Rank - 1,000 lbs

I don't see anything too majorly overpowering,

The second jutsu though id like to ask can it work on living things?

Nooooo haha, that would be like a semi-justified god mode jutsu haha waaaay too OP if it would work on living beings.

Purple wrote:

Name: Creeping Tendrils
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Range: 30 Meters
Duration: 3 Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up:Rat-->Snake-->Roster-->Snake-->Rat-->Roster-->Rat-->Rat
Description: After performing the hand seals needed the ground around the opponent will begin to spike up and unless the target manages to get into the air above five meters(how far the earth can spike) they can either get impaled by the earth or captured by it. It is a strong technique and as such it requires more hand seals than most of B's jutsu.

Name: Golem's Touch
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Duration: 3 posts before requiring another A rank of chakra to last another 3 posts.
Hand Seals/Charge up:Snake
Description:This jutsu only requires one hand to form half of the hand seal for snake and for the caster to be touching an object. Once the jutsu is cast the user will form a seal on the object they are touching and seemingly melt into it. If the object is mobile or autonomous then the caster can move it about. If not then it can only expel chakra to move the object through the air. The user can jump out of the object at any time and even move the seal on the object. However if the seal is destroyed the user will be stuck in the object until it too is destroyed and after that the user will appear and will be extremely tired.
E Rank - 35 lbs
D Rank - 75 lbs
C Rank - 125 lbs
B Rank - 250 lbs
A Rank - 500 lbs
S Rank - 1,000 lbs

Unless another member of staff deems otherwise

Name: Flock of Beeguls
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Explosion
Range: .5 meter blast per bug
Duration: Permanent
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: By molding the clay with their chakra the user can create up to five hundred bees(one hundred fifty the first post, three hundred fifty the second post, and five hundred after three posts) that can explode from the clay. The bees are each three inches long and can travel at the speed that matches their user's ninjutsu level. (ex: Master would move at Mastery, etc) The clay creatures look identical to regular bees except for the fact that they are not colored, however unlike normal bees since they are made from chakra they do not beat their wings as much and as such are much quieter than a normal bee. The bees are rather fragile however and can be taken out by B rank and above jutsu of any type if they come into contact with it and it is meant to harm. These bees respond to the thoughts of the user and thus can be moved about with the user's will unless the caster of this jutsu becomes knocked out at which point the bugs will all explode regardless of placement. The explosive power is listed below with D ranks being equal to an exploding tag, and A ranks to a suicide clone.
200 Bees - A rank
80 Bees - B rank
10 Bees - C rank
1 Bee - D

Name: Speed Seal
Rank: S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Self/Self
Duration: 5(3) Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon-->Snake to activate seal
Description: The user must have the seal placed upon them with this jutsu. The Seal itself appears to be a Celtic Knot and is infused with Raiton Chakra. When the user unleashes this seal it automatically brings them up to the speed charted below based on their based rank in Taijutsu or Weaponry. The seal lasts for five posts posts and can only be utilized once per thread for this power:
N/A - Basic
Basic - Adept
Adept - Master
If one is a Taijutsu Master than this power switches completely into something different and the user may be at a speed that is comparable to the third gate for a total of three posts before losing half of their base speed for three posts after the jutsu runs out.

So your able to use and give people gate speed without any gate drawbacks. If you want this to even be considered for an approval please give some very good drawbacks.

Purple wrote:

Name: Speed Seal
Rank: S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Self/Self
Duration: 3 Posts/4 Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon-->Snake to activate seal
Description: The user must have the seal placed upon them with this jutsu. The Seal itself appears to be a Celtic Knot and is infused with Raiton Chakra. When the user unleashes this seal it automatically brings them up to the speed of a Taijutsu Master, and gives a bonus based on how fast their base speed is. The seal lasts for three posts and can only be utilized once per thread for this power:
N/A - 2nd Gate
Basic - 3rd Gate
Adept - 4th Gate
Master - 5th Gate
The other power the seal gives also may only be used twice per thread and to unlock this power the user must be A rank or above. What the power allows is the user to step from where they are to a distance up to fifteen meters of them. Unlike other moves this move simply allows the user to step up to fifteen meters in an instant.

Did you even read the speed chart?

Sorry pretty tired haha, Im gonna mess with it in the morning :)

There that should be a bit better.

Nothing goes above the third gate, and if anything even comes close to that the drawbacks are debilitating.

Changed

Purple wrote:
The other power the seal gives also may only be used twice per thread and to unlock this power the user must be A rank or above. What the power allows is the user to step from where they are to a distance up to fifteen meters of them. Unlike other moves this move simply allows the user to step up to fifteen meters in an instant.

Remove that part. If you want it then make another jutsu for it.

Purple wrote:

Name: Flock of Beeguls
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Explosion
Range: .5 meter blast per bug
Duration: Permanent
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: By molding the clay with their chakra the user can create up to five hundred bees that can explode from the clay. The bees are each three inches long and can travel at one speed of taijutsu faster than the user (unless maxed). The clay creatures look identical to regular bees except for the fact that they are not colored, however unlike normal bees since they are made from chakra they do not beat their wings as much and as such are much quieter than a normal bee. The bees are rather fragile however and can be taken out by B rank and above jutsu of any type if they come into contact with it and it is meant to harm. These bees respond to the thoughts of the user and thus can be moved about with the user's will unless the caster of this jutsu becomes knocked out at which point the bugs will all explode regardless of placement.

1.your taijutsu has no relevance when it comes to a ninjutsu edit that ti it moves at the speed of the ninjutsu of the castor, if your a basic nin user then they move at basic nin etc.

2.Also a charge time of at least 2 posts should be added due to the rather vast amount of bees.

3. Could you perhaps mention the power of the explosions these bee's release?




Name: Speed Seal
Rank: S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Self/Self
Duration: 5(3) Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon-->Snake to activate seal
Description: The user must have the seal placed upon them with this jutsu. The Seal itself appears to be a Celtic Knot and is infused with Raiton Chakra. When the user unleashes this seal it automatically brings them up to the speed charted below based on their based rank in Taijutsu or Weaponry. The seal lasts for five posts posts and can only be utilized once per thread for this power:
N/A - Basic
Basic - Adept
Adept - Master
If one is a Taijutsu Master than this power switches completely into something different and the user may be at a speed that is comparable to the third gate for a total of three posts before losing half of their base speed for three posts after the jutsu runs out.
The other power the seal gives also may only be used twice per thread and to unlock this power the user must be A rank or above. What the power allows is the user to step from where they are to a distance up to fifteen meters of them. Unlike other moves this move simply allows the user to step up to fifteen meters in an instant


If your moving at third gate speed then this going by the new speed system [Sorry i know its brand new] Then this needs to be S-rank with drawbacks. At A-rank you may move at the first gate speed.

Sato wrote:

Purple wrote:
The other power the seal gives also may only be used twice per thread and to unlock this power the user must be A rank or above. What the power allows is the user to step from where they are to a distance up to fifteen meters of them. Unlike other moves this move simply allows the user to step up to fifteen meters in an instant.

Remove that part. If you want it then make another jutsu for it.

Okay done

Rain Ryder wrote:Name: Speed Seal
Rank: S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Self/Self
Duration: 5(3) Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon-->Snake to activate seal
Description: The user must have the seal placed upon them with this jutsu. The Seal itself appears to be a Celtic Knot and is infused with Raiton Chakra. When the user unleashes this seal it automatically brings them up to the speed charted below based on their based rank in Taijutsu or Weaponry. The seal lasts for five posts posts and can only be utilized once per thread for this power:
N/A - Basic
Basic - Adept
Adept - Master
If one is a Taijutsu Master than this power switches completely into something different and the user may be at a speed that is comparable to the third gate for a total of three posts before losing half of their base speed for three posts after the jutsu runs out.
The other power the seal gives also may only be used twice per thread and to unlock this power the user must be A rank or above. What the power allows is the user to step from where they are to a distance up to fifteen meters of them. Unlike other moves this move simply allows the user to step up to fifteen meters in an instant


If your moving at third gate speed then this going by the new speed system [Sorry i know its brand new] Then this needs to be S-rank with drawbacks. At A-rank you may move at the first gate speed.

It is a S rank with drawbacks.

Rain Ryder wrote:

Purple wrote:

Name: Flock of Beeguls
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Explosion
Range: .5 meter blast per bug
Duration: Permanent
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: By molding the clay with their chakra the user can create up to five hundred bees that can explode from the clay. The bees are each three inches long and can travel at one speed of taijutsu faster than the user (unless maxed). The clay creatures look identical to regular bees except for the fact that they are not colored, however unlike normal bees since they are made from chakra they do not beat their wings as much and as such are much quieter than a normal bee. The bees are rather fragile however and can be taken out by B rank and above jutsu of any type if they come into contact with it and it is meant to harm. These bees respond to the thoughts of the user and thus can be moved about with the user's will unless the caster of this jutsu becomes knocked out at which point the bugs will all explode regardless of placement.

1.your taijutsu has no relevance when it comes to a ninjutsu edit that ti it moves at the speed of the ninjutsu of the castor, if your a basic nin user then they move at basic nin etc.

2.Also a charge time of at least 2 posts should be added due to the rather vast amount of bees.

3. Could you perhaps mention the power of the explosions these bee's release?

1. Done
2. I changed it a bit so they trickle out I think it makes the most sense and meets what you want for it.
3. A rank explosive power

Hmm so each Bee has an A-rank explosive power and your capable of making five hundred, I think either lower the amount by atleast 350 and keep the explosion power or keep 500 and have each Bee the power of a D-rank explosion because if each bee is at D-rank per bee five hundred would still make a massive explosion. , Because 500 bee's each capable of A-rank explosive power combined = wayyyy about S-rank power.

Well I figured they just weren't shrapnel and as such just caused trauma to the area around them, if i bring the damage down to D that will just make the jutsu D rank to block, which would be a gigantic and pointless nerf. They have a short blast range so it's not hard to dodge them or destroy them for that matter as most people have lightning. I just think that bringing it down to a D rank just so it can be blocked by D ranks (an explosion is an explosion) is a tad ridiculous. That being said if you have your heart set on it I can let it get blocked by B ranks.

Im meaning a single bee would be a d-rank explosion, If you cluster the bees to explode say like 5 bees that would be a powerful blast and not just a d-rank, They add up ya see but the amount of bees ia problem. 500 exploding bees that when clumped togethher could create a massive explosion is like WOW. see what i mean?

Then tell me what exactly a D rank explosion would mean then. Cause if you need all 500 for an A rank than this thing has been nerfed beyond broken, hopefully I am misunderstanding that due to just waking up. D rank explosion tells me nothing and if they're all D rank then they could never even break a C rank shield...at A rank...

so the way your wording it you want a single Bee to have the power of an A-rank explosive.


Ill use the explosive scale from canon

a D-rank would be 1 explosive tag,
A C-rank would be the equivalent of a C1 explosive
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/C1
A B-rank would be C2
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/C2
An A-rank would be the equivalent of Deidaras suicide shadow clone explosion
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Suicide_Bombing_Clone
And an S-rak well
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/C3

So then could I have something like
?

YEs, But if thats the case id only allow you to create and summon 100 bee's max at one time if you would accept that

Hrm okay I see what you're getting at then, this any better?

200 Bees - A rank
80 Bees - B rank
10 Bees - C rank
1 Bee - D

Ok be warned i will be watching how this is used

Approved