Chii: Grade of Wonderment
Length of Story: 5 points total for posting rounds, Average length of post 250.2 words = 10 points. 10 x 5 = 50. 50 points for individual post.
Storyline - Classic mission, nothing of note, more topics maybe to grow friendship or squadship. 3 points.
Dialogue Quality - Great, you keep a light hearty and a serious vibe in conflict. I got the vibe that I think you were trying to portray with your character. A social awkward but confrontational girl. 6 points. (Color your speech please, makes it easy to read, imo)
Writing Skills - 10 points
Imagination - n/a
Total points Mosou, Chiisai : 74
Dante: Grade of Wonderment
Length of Story: 5 points for posting rounds, average posting words 227.2 = 10 points each, 5 x 10 = 50 points.
Storyline - Same as chii, nothing that stuck out to me. 3 point. Dudes with creepy past, I like'em
Dialogue Quality - 5, seemed to have a similar wording with each time your character spoke. Cheerful, but somewhat wake. (COLOR ON SPEECH PLEASE!)
Writing Skills - few minor errors: 8
Imagination - n/a
Total points for Dante: 68
