Hebi's NSP Request Thread

Topic Name: I am your Tool
Characters Names/Usernames: Hebi Gekido and Aigo/ Nabada Aigo
Link to Topic: Here
Link to Characters: Hebi
Aigo

Length of Story: 5 for posting rounds. 277 words on average, 11 points times 5 = 55 points

Storyline - 4 points gives some explanation on your character.

Dialogue Quality - I really liked some of the lines you had 7 points

Writing Skills - 4 points

Imagination - N/a

Total 75 points!


Length of Story: 5 points for rounds. 640 words on average. 20 points x 4 = 80

Storyline - 4 points

Dialogue Quality - Not as good as Hebis stuff, but I still enjoyed it. 5 points

Writing Skills - 5 points, not any errors.

Imagination - n/a

94 points total for Aigo.