Alder's slug jutsu

Name: Suragu o no hōhōL: Nen'eki bunpitsu (Way of the slug: Mucus secretion)
Rank:D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Range:self inflicted
Duration: Until mucus is removed or dried
Hand Seals/Charge up:One hand sign held until body is covered 2 seconds
Description:This technique is used to cover the user body in the mucus that is produced to by snails bodies.  Once applied the user becomes hard to grasp.  Taijutsu attacks that initiate physical contact will off user and or have their damage reduced.  For example a normal punch won’t hit correctly because the thick mucus layer will cause punch to slide off target.  This is parent jutsu for many of Adler’s slug techniques.
Weakness: Its not affective if it dries out before the goal is accomplished or is washed off



Name: Suragu o no hōhōL: Zesshi Nensan (Tounge tooth sticky acid)
Rank:C-A (paying for A user can user weaker version if the wish)
Type:ninjutsu
Range: 25m
Duration: It stays on the field for 3 of casters post
Hand Seals/Charge up:5 for an adept 2 for master
Description:Gathering up a large amount of chakra in their math the user will expel a high volume of concentrated acidic paste. This is strong enough to dissolve stone. The acid will not dissolve things that are covered in mucus
Weakness: Things that aren't solid can't be dissolved.  Not everything that is solid can be dissolved stronger solids would take longer if they are dissolvable at all.

the acid dissolves 1/2 in of non metal material per rank. rank startiing with D. Completely covered weapons C rank and lower dissolve within one post B rank and A rank take heavy damage but are possiby usable depending on special abilities. Metal rank B-rank+ will barely dissolve but metal will warp/become disfigured, more vulnerable.

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Name: Suragu o no hōhōL: Tan no teiden (phlegm blackout)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:
Range:5m per mucus secretion used.
Duration: gas is present for two post unless removed by something like a wind jutsu.  Takes affect after two post. Last three post
Hand Seals/Charge up:clap
Description:[After using mucus secretion the user turns mucus to gas people, animals, bugs… in range that breath in fall asleep. The affect is not instant. But if breathed directly will work in two posts. Partial breaths (furthest point from within jutsu range.)Take three posts and last one less post than full.
Weaknesses: If the target doesn't breathe it in it won't work. Or if gets blown a way





Name:Nen'eki hōrudo (mucus hold)
Rank:B
Type:Fuin
Element:
Range:all
Duration: If the technique works last until unsealed
Hand Seals/Charge up:No seal 3 seconds + time it takes to reach target+ 3seconds
Description: The user will produce mucus clones from their mouth. Mucus clones produced through this technique can only be used with to try and seal target. The clones will be very opaque but resemble the caster. These clones will engage the target in taijutsu and burst on them covering them in mucus. Three seconds later the mucus is fully hardened. This technique seals movement however once this technique is in affect they won't be able to use jutsu that requires movement.
Weakness: Given how long it takes for the jutsu to activate the target has plenty of time to counter. Which means it takes long for it to activate. An appropriate counter would be something like powering up or the hyuuga technique that emits chakra all over their body but has to be done before the jusu is finished activating.





Name:Slug gourd prison
Rank:B
Type:Barrier Ninjutsu
Element:
Range:5m
Duration:until released
Hand Seals/Charge up: 2 post
Description: The user will vomit an unnamed slug.This technique is used to capture and isolate a victim by sucking them into the slug's stomach. Isolated from the outside world by a barrier, the space inside the Gourd slug's stomach is far larger than the surface size of the Gourd Slug itself.
The environment inside the slugs stomach is a cavernous chamber, which includes a lake of strong corrosive gastric acid that can dissolve anything that should happen to fall into it, along with shores around the acid lake, and formations sticking out of the lake; the already-existing structures within the slug's stomach are unaffected by the acid lake. Once trapped inside, an opponent is cut off from any allies


Weakness: This jutsu causes for the target to be heavily distracted or injured because the slug is slow and weak on the outside it can easily be killed before the target is sucked in.

You are missing the weakness part of the jutsu.

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I use seconds because the amount of time that passes in post can vary especially in a fight. If I say one post, which it could easily be, a person doesn't really know how long they have. So they are more likely to say the attack misses because they don't know that even if it hits the move doesn't instantly work.

The acid I expanded on but I can't /won't get super technical speaking of acid volume, cubic sq ft, masses and such. It won' break down a mountain but if a person or large rock is in the way it will get the job done. But even if it hits a person it isn't/doesn't have to be OHKO. Survival potential is decent if they are clothed, not hit a point blank range, and make some attempt at defense. When it comes to metal this is not the jutsu to use it won't work quickly enough weapon users are to fast and by the target melts other than small stuff, the enemy could have hit Alder and or bridge the gap in between them, putting Alder in vulnerable spot.

The gourd was suppose to be time it takes to throw up but I think 2 post fine for that jutsu

For gourd it a weakness because it is hard to use during a fight long cast time the help of team mates to distract. Like sage mode it's hard to pull off.  Injured people should be slower and easier to capture the move won't work if target is paying attention and can move. Plus Alder is vulnerable while casting

Within 1-2 post it does all it's going to as it dissolves it disappears equivalent to what it dissolved.  Actually does this sound better the acid dissolves 1/2 in of non metal material per rank. rank startiing with D. Completely covered weapons C rank and lower dissolve within one post B rank and A rank take heavy damage but are possiby usable depending on special abilities. Metal rank B-rank+ will barely dissolve but metal will warp/become disfigured, more vulnerable.

Perfect, make the changes and il recheck them.

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Name: Suragu o no hōhōL: Tan no teiden (phlegm blackout)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Range: 5m per mucus secretion used.
Duration: gas is present for two post unless removed by something like a wind jutsu.  Takes affect after two post. Last three post
Hand Seals/Charge up: clap
Description: After using mucus secretion the user turns mucus to gas people, animals, bugs… in range that breath in fall asleep. The affect is not instant. But if breathed directly will work in two posts. Partial breaths (furthest point from within jutsu range.)Take three posts and last one less post than full.
Weaknesses: If the target doesn't breathe it in it won't work. Or if gets blown a way

Explain a bit on how it's turned into gases. You just directly stated that it just turns into gas, however I don't understand how some mucus would just turn into gas magically.

Name: Suragu o no hōhōL: Zesshi Nensan (Tounge tooth sticky acid)
Rank: C-A (paying for A user can user weaker version if the wish)
Type:
Range: 25m
Duration: It stays on the field for 3 of casters post
Hand Seals/Charge up: 5 for an adept 2 for master
Description: Gathering up a large amount of chakra in their math the user will expel a high volume of concentrated acidic paste. This is strong enough to dissolve stone. The acid will not dissolve things that are covered in mucus
Weakness: Things that aren't solid can't be dissolved.  Not everything that is solid can be dissolved stronger solids would take longer if they are dissolvable at all.

the acid dissolves 1/2 in of non metal material per rank. rank startiing with D. Completely covered weapons C rank and lower dissolve within one post B rank and A rank take heavy damage but are possiby usable depending on special abilities. Metal rank B-rank+ will barely dissolve but metal will warp/become disfigured, more vulnerable.

You're missing it's type, it has to be ninjutsu, taijutsu or something.

Name: Slug gourd prison
Rank: B
Type: Barrier Ninjutsu
Element:
Range: 5m
Duration: until released
Hand Seals/Charge up: 2 post
Description: The user will vomit an unnamed slug.This technique is used to capture and isolate a victim by sucking them into the slug's stomach. Isolated from the outside world by a barrier, the space inside the Gourd slug's stomach is far larger than the surface size of the Gourd Slug itself.
Weakness: This jutsu causes for the target to be heavily distracted or injured because the slug is slow and weak on the outside it can easily be killed before the target is sucked in.

The environment inside the slugs stomach is a cavernous chamber, which includes a lake of strong corrosive gastric acid that can dissolve anything that should happen to fall into it, along with shores around the acid lake, and formations sticking out of the lake; the already-existing structures within the slug's stomach are unaffected by the acid lake. Once trapped inside, an opponent is cut off from any allies

Is this part of your weakness or description? Stating that an opponent is cut off from any allies is more of an advantage, rather than a weakness.

The weakness was pasted into the middle of the description so thats fixed and typed added.

Its not magic its chakra. Chakra changes the mucus from liquid to gas. just like it changes to anything else solid and not solid, including stuff that is neither like genjutsu.

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