Hazama Style II

Name:Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Destruction
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken (Taijutsu)
Used For: Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:25
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b
[b]Description:The user has added the wind element into the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm making is a new and powerful jutsu. The jutsu uses the wind element to deal an incredible amount of blunt force damage. It uses the wind pressure to forcefully impact it's target. The power of the sphere is so strong that it leaves a crater impact upon the ground. If a target was hit with the technique it would not only damage their chakra system, but also crush some bones an organs. Like it's predecessor it is a gentle fist technique.
Weakness:Because of the sheer amount of force from the technique it pushes the user back by a total of 10 meters from his original position.

Name:Eight Trigrams Hellzone
Rank:S
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu[Bloodline Trait]
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:Himself, outward range Eight Meters
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: By producing effects similar to that of Eight Trigrams Palms Technique Hazama has decided to take it a step further by not just moving joints of his body, but his entire existence at speeds that exceed that of Deviations Techniques. With the aid of his Byakugan, Uson can see things slowed down significantly, and allows his body to react with insane reflexs to the situation. When he moves or attacks with in the Hellzone it appears as if he is standing still, and deadly blows one receives from him are not realized until after it has happened.

Weakness: Hazama, must make take the position of the Eight Trigrams stance before activating the jutsu.

Name:Empty Hollow Point
Rank:D
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline Ability]
Used For:Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:10 meters
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:A lesser version of the empty palm technique. Instead of using a palm thrust Hazama simply points his finger and releases a small high velocity burst of chakra from his finger tips. With it being so small it is great for hitting pinpoint target. The force of impact is capable of making bruises and small welts upon the body
Weakness:Low Range, and very low damage.

Name:Wind Needle Assault
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline}
Used For: Offense
Element:Wind
Range:35
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:1
Description:An upgraded version of the chakra needle. Hazama aids his Fuuton chakra into this technique and rapidly fires an intense barrage of Wind Needles that are capable of ripping through wooden trees with great ease. They are very hard to see and are very fast. They are great for multiple enemies, but only range from short to mid range combat.
Weakness:
Must charge the fuuton chakra into his finger tips for an entire post, and katon jutsu of B rank can over power it.

Name:Gentle Edge Breathing
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Both
Element:
Range:Self
Duration: Four Post-Five Post Cool Down
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Hazama has mastered the art of taijutsu. By controlling his breathing he is able to harden his muscles and skin to the point that it is capable of blocking regular steel, and taijutsu blows. It is not Superior to his palms rotation, but it is great for the mobility and defense it offers, but the offensive ability it also posses. Like the name suggest Hazama's finger tips become like a small dagger allowing him to pierce an enemy's body with just his finger. It is only usefull against Taijutsu attacks of A-Rank and Kenjutsu of A-Rank. The breathing must be done to produce this effect.
Weakness:Does not offer any protection from Ninjutsu, or poisons

Name:Gentle Fangs
Rank:B
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:7.5 feet
Duration:Three Post-Four Post Cooldown
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:This is similar to the Gentle Fist technique called Gentle Edge, but Hazama create streaming razor sharp beams of charka by simply focuses chakra in the tips of his fingers, while releasing a steady flow of chakra. Using these blades allows him to use them as an extension of himself. These tiny chakra beam blades allow him to remove the flesh or limbs of his enemies with ease. While it is strong it can't cut throw anything stronger than iron.
Weakness: Requires a chakra upkeep of 4

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OG Swankmaster wrote:
Name:Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Destruction
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken (Taijutsu)
Used For: Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:25add your unit
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:The user has added the wind element into the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm making is a new and powerful jutsu. The jutsu uses the wind element to deal an incredible amount of blunt force damage. It uses the wind pressure to forcefully impact it's target. The power of the sphere is so strong that it leaves a crater impact upon the ground. That Ranges 6 meters wide radius , and 12 meters deep.this technique is like a conentrated blast of wind if I'm reading right, so I'm not sure what deep means in this instance. unless you mean the ball is 12m in diameter. which is around 36 feet so too big If a target was hit with the technique it would not only damage their chakra system, but also crush some bones an organs. Like it's predecessor it is a gentle fist technique.  
Weakness:Because of the sheer amount of force from the technique it pushes the user back by a total of 10 meters from his original position.

I meant the range of the crater.

Name:Eight Trigrams Hellzone
Rank:S
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu[Bloodline Trait]
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:Himself, outward range Eight Meters
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: By producing effects similar to that of Eight Trigrams Palms One Hundred Twenty Eight Technique Hazama has decided to take it a step further by not just moving joints of his body, but his entire body at speeds that exceed that of Deviations Techniques. With the aid of his Byakugan, Uson can see everything significantly with in his range allowing him to move and react with insane reflexsbeing able to see things coming, doesn't mean you can react. If you are too slow, you're too slow so the reflex aspect is to be removed. to the situation. When he moves or attacks with in the Hellzone it appears as  if there are multiple Hazama's moving, but truthfully there is only one. The afterimages look like they are attacking, but Hazama has already moved from that position, and is attacking again. and I'm not seeing how illusions of himself are being made seeing how this is not a Genjutsu

Weakness: Hazama, must make take the position of the Eight Trigrams stance before activating the jutsu. Leaving him open for about half a post.


I understand this fully well. My character is one a Hyuuga , a clan who has displayed excellent reflexes in the series. My point that I was making is that he can do this because of his Byakugan, but it aids him in situations like that. In addition to that he has a Mastery in Taijutsu so, I'm sure he's not slow. Secondly I after image was stated, because he is moving that fast. When you see a Hyuuga attacking with 64 Palms or 128 Palms do you not see multiple images or multiple blurs of their attack? That's what this is as it's not a genjutsu.




Name:Empty Hollow Point
Rank:D
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline Ability]
Used For:Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:10 meters
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:A lesser version of the empty palm technique. Instead of using a palm thrust Hazama simply points his finger and releases a small high velocity burst of chakra from his finger tips. With it being so small it is great for hitting pinpoint target. The force of impact is capable of making bruises and small welts upon the body
Weakness:Low Range, and very low damage.10m is not a low range and the weakness isn't really a weakness, because low damage is what is expected from D-Rank techniques


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Name:Wind Needle Assault
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline}
Used For: Offense
Element:Wind
Range:35 add your unit lower to 20m, and for future reference just expect the ranges on techniques to be nerfed because you seem to go above and beyond with them.
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:1
Description:An upgraded version of the Water Needle. Hazama aids his Fuuton chakra into this technique and rapidly fires an intense barrage of Wind Needles that are capable of ripping through wooden trees with great ease. They are very hard to see and are very fast. They are great for multiple enemies, but only range from short to mid range combat.
Weakness:
Must charge the fuuton chakra into his finger tips for an entire post, and katon jutsu of B rank can over power it.







Name:Gentle Edge Breathing
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Both
Element:
Range:Self
Duration: Four Post-Five Post Cool Down
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Hazama has mastered the art of taijutsu. By controlling his breathing he is able to harden his muscles and skin to the point that it is capable of blocking regular steel, and taijutsu blows.It is not Superior to his palms rotation, but it is great for the mobility and defense it offers, but the offensive ability it also posses. Like the name suggest Hazama's finger tips become like a small dagger your fingers are shaped like blunt edges, not daggers. Just because they have the hardness of steel doesn't mean they become steel daggers. Maybe if you tried using wind instead they could be like daggersallowing him to pierce an enemy's body with just his finger. It is only usefull against Taijutsu attacks of A-Rank and Kenjutsu of A-Rank.how many? Because infinte defense against Ken and Taijutsu for 4 post won't be permitted. The breathing must be done to produce this effect.
Weakness:Does not offer any protection from Ninjutsu, or poisons

Duration has been edited, and Ranks of the damage has been edited from A-Ranks to B-Ranks.
About the fingers and ect. Not trying to make any assumptions about you, but I'd like to ask have you ever done martial arts? I'm sure you know of breaking wooden boards, bricks, and denting certain steels. I wasn't saying that this cuts people, but I didn't explain that well. I meant puncturing. One doesn't need chakra to do so.




Name:Gentle Fangs
Rank:B
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:7.5 feet
Duration:Three Post-Four Post Cooldown
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:This is similar to the Gentle Fist technique called Gentle Edge, but Hazama create streaming razor sharp beams of charka by simply focuses chakra in the tips of his fingers, while releasing a steady flow of chakra. Using these blades allows him to use them as an extension of himself. These tiny chakra beam blades allow him to remove the flesh or limbs of his enemies with ease. While it is strong it can't cut throw anything stronger than iron.
Weakness: Requires a chakra an additional B-rank of Chakra to keep active.


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Name:Reverse Gentle Fist
Rank:A
Type:Taijutsu [Bloodline]
Used For: Offense
Element:
Range:Must make contact with the target.
Duration: Until Thread is over
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Hazama presses one single point on the body to inject his chakra into it. His chakra will begin to act spread inside of the opponents chakra network. It will allow them to still use their chakra, but just cost three times as much. This last for four post.
Weakness:Target must be physically hit with this style. that's not really a weakness since this is a Taijutsu
Got any ideas or suggestions for this?

Name:Gentle Release
Rank:C
Type:Jyuuken, Taijusu
Used For:Defense
Element:
Range:Self
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Do to his training, Hazama has complete control of his chakra network, allowing him to release chakra from any point that he wishes. As the way Jyuuken develops    it's user mastering tenketsu. Hazama has produces a way to remove the influence of anyone attempting to gain control of his chakra network and it's functions. Hazama touches a a tenketsu upon either of his legs releasing, him from his opponents chakra control.
Weakness: Hazama must physically be able to move to do this.

Name:Gentle Fist Focus Point
Rank:S
Type:
Jyuuken, KKG, Tai
Used For:Both
Element:
Range:5m
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:1
Description:A technique similar to the Gentle Fist Art One Body blow, this jutsu is used in two ways. One is to disrupt the chakra, and target the weak points of a jutsu. Allowing Hazama to effectively disperse A Rank Ninjutsu. If this technique is used upon an opponent instead of their actual jutsu it is capable of blasting the opponent with incredible kinetic energy, and chakra. That it displaces the oxygen in the air with in a 10 meter radius. This technique isn't lethal, but with the opponent being hit to hard it visually appears as if time has stopped before physically sending the target 70 meters awayreally? 70m away edit to a more reasonable knock back please , or upward.
Weakness:User must focus chakra inside of their palms before they can use this technique, in addition to having to be up close to use the taijutsu. these aren't weaknesses, these are requirements to use the technique, it's a Gentle Fist type attack and taijutsu.
So, you're saying requirements can't be included in the weakness? If, so. I made an edit I think will be okay.

Name:Seal of Gravity
Rank:C
Type:[/b Fuinjutsu
Used For:Support
Element:
Range:
Duration:2
Hand Seals/Charge up:3
Description:Hazama places a seal upon an area, while whatever enters the 35 meter radius is slowed down tremendously to point that their speed is reduced by one rank. Even Hazama, is affected by this.
Weakness: To escape this effect the user can simply attempt to move out of the area, or release a C-Rank amount of chakra to escape.

Has been editted.

Name: Seal of Depth
Rank:B
Type:Fuinjutsu you mean Ninjutsu, I don't see any seals involved
Used For:Offensive
Element:Water
Range:100 meters. come on man . . . lower this to 20m this is getting out of hand.
Duration: As long as Hazama places chakra into it.
Hand Seals/Charge up: you left this empty, but mention handsigns
Description:Hazama makes handsigns, and places his palms towards the surface, t is formed in front of the user. Whatever steps into the tar pit will fall/sink deep below into the river of water. Drowning in the endless pit. I understand Fuinjutsu, if that's what this is suppose to be, allows people to do nearly random things, but just making tar out of nowhere without having it been sealed into something prior is a no go.
Weakness:Hazama must keep his hand placed upon the ground. Meaning once he activates this technique he can't move, and it cost an upkeep of 10 chakra per post, As soon as the hand is removed, the pit slowly begins to dissolve. needs a lot of edits

I'll remove that.

Xi Xi wrote:

Name:Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Destruction
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken (Taijutsu)
Used For: Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:25m
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:The user has added the wind element into the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm making is a new and powerful jutsu. The jutsu uses the wind element to deal an incredible amount of blunt force damage. It uses the wind pressure to forcefully impact it's target. The power of the sphere is so strong that it leaves a crater impact upon the ground. The crater  Ranges 6 meters wide radius, and 12 meters deep. If a target was hit with the technique it would not only damage their chakra system, but also crush some bones an organs. Like it's predecessor it is a gentle fist technique.  
Weakness:Because of the sheer amount of force from the technique it pushes the user back by a total of 10 meters from his original position.
Please include the motions and actions involved in the jutsu. Are you throwing something? Are you dashing toward someone? it's 25 meters and aa taijutsu, some elaboration is needed

Name:Eight Trigrams Hellzone
Rank:S
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu[Bloodline Trait]
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:Himself, outward range Eight Meters
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: By producing effects similar to that of Eight Trigrams Palms One Hundred Twenty Eight Technique Hazama has decided to take it a step further by not just moving joints of his body, but his entire body at speeds that exceed that of Deviations Techniques. With the aid of his Byakugan, Uson can see everything significantly with in his range allowing him to move and react with insane reflexs to the situation. When he moves or attacks with in the Hellzone it appears as  if there are multiple Hazama's moving, but truthfully there is only one. The afterimages look like they are attacking, but Hazama has already moved from that position, and is attacking again.

Weakness: Hazama, must make take the position of the Eight Trigrams stance before activating the jutsu. Leaving him open for about half a post.
Half a post is not really a very subjective time. Posts can vary GREATLY. So either make it an entire post of getting into position or do another weakness.
Also please specify the specific increase in perception level.

Name:Empty Hollow Point
Rank:D
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline Ability]
Used For:Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:8 meters
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:A lesser version of the empty palm technique. Instead of using a palm thrust Hazama simply points his finger and releases a small high velocity burst of chakra from his finger tips. With it being so small it is great for hitting pinpoint target. The force of impact is capable of making bruises and small welts upon the body
Weakness:Can be countered by fire chakra

Name:Wind Needle Assault
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline}
Used For: Offense
Element:Wind
Range:20 meters
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:An upgraded version of the Water Needle. Hazama aids his Fuuton chakra into this technique and rapidly fires an intense barrage of Wind Needles that are capable of ripping through wooden trees with great ease. They are very hard to see and are very fast. They are great for multiple enemies, but only range from short to mid range combat.
Weakness:
Must charge the fuuton chakra into his finger tips for an entire post, and katon jutsu of B rank can over power it.
Please specify the number of needles that can be fired. Also short-mid range combat is not 20 meters (60 feet).

Name:Gentle Edge Breathing
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Both
Element:
Range:Self
Duration: Two Post-Three Post Cool Down
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Hazama has mastered the art of taijutsu. By controlling his breathing he is able to harden his muscles and skin to the point that it is capable of blocking regular steel, and taijutsu blows. It is not Superior to his palms rotation, but it is great for the mobility and defense it offers, but the offensive ability it also posses. Like the name suggest Hazama's finger tips become like a small dagger allowing him to pierce an enemy's body with just his finger. It is only usefull against Taijutsu attacks of B-Rank and Kenjutsu of B-Rank. The breathing must be done to produce this effect.
Weakness:Does not offer any protection from Ninjutsu, or poisons

Name:Gentle Fangs
Rank:B
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:3m
Duration:Three Post-Four Post Cooldown
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:This is similar to the Gentle Fist technique called Gentle Edge, but Hazama create streaming razor sharp beams of charka by simply focuses chakra in the tips of his fingers, while releasing a steady flow of chakra. Using these blades allows him to use them as an extension of himself. These tiny chakra beam blades allow him to remove the flesh or limbs of his enemies with ease. While it is strong it can't cut throw anything stronger than iron.
Weakness: Requires a chakra an additional B-rank of Chakra to keep active.


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Name:Reverse Gentle Fist
Rank:A
Type:Taijutsu [Bloodline]
Used For: Offense
Element:
Range:Must make contact with the target.
Duration: Until four post are up.
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Hazama presses one single point on the body to inject his chakra into it. His chakra will begin to act spread inside of the opponents chakra network. It will allow them to still use their chakra, but just cost three times as much. This last for four post.
Weakness:Target must be physically hit with this style.
Not a weakness. Also three is quite the multiplier for the entire network. Additionally the trigrams is usually a one-hit-one-point system. As such I'd say it would only effect techniques that channel chakra through the point that you hit (depending on where on the body they hit) if you want to have it effect a variety of used jutsu I'd make it have to hit the arms, but even then it'd only effect those thaat require hand seals or both arms. Otherwise you'd need to hit them in more than one point.

Xi Xi wrote:

Name:Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Destruction
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken (Taijutsu)
Used For: Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:25m
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:The user has added the wind element into the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm making is a new and powerful jutsu. The jutsu uses the wind element to deal an incredible amount of blunt force damage. It uses the wind pressure to forcefully impact it's target. The power of the sphere is so strong that it leaves a crater impact upon the ground. The crater  Ranges 6 meters wide radius, and 12 meters deep. If a target was hit with the technique it would not only damage their chakra system, but also crush some bones an organs. This action is done in the same manner of the empty palm technique. Releasing a simple palm thrust.  Like it's predecessor it is a gentle fist technique.  
Weakness:Because of the sheer amount of force from the technique it pushes the user back by a total of 10 meters from his original position.

Name:Eight Trigrams Hellzone
Rank:S
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu[Bloodline Trait]
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:Himself, outward range Eight Meters
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: By producing effects similar to that of Eight Trigrams Palms One Hundred Twenty Eight Technique Hazama has decided to take it a step further by not just moving joints of his body, but his entire body at speeds that exceed that of Deviations Techniques. With the aid of his Byakugan, Uson can see everything significantly with in his range allowing him to move and react with insane reflexs to the situation. When he moves or attacks with in the Hellzone it appears as  if there are multiple Hazama's moving, but truthfully there is only one. The afterimages look like they are attacking, but Hazama has already moved from that position, and is attacking again. The perception, Hazama gains is dependent upon how strong his Byakugan is.

Weakness: Hazama must use the Eight Trigrams 64 Palms technique at least once in the thread, or at least use the Eight Trigrams 128 Palms once in the thread in order to use this technique.

Name:Empty Hollow Point
Rank:D
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline Ability]
Used For:Offensive
Element:Wind
Range:8 meters
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:A lesser version of the empty palm technique. Instead of using a palm thrust Hazama simply points his finger and releases a small high velocity burst of chakra from his finger tips. With it being so small it is great for hitting pinpoint target. The force of impact is capable of making bruises and small welts upon the body
Weakness:Can be countered by fire chakra

Name:Wind Needle Assault
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu [Bloodline}
Used For: Offense
Element:Wind
Range:20 meters
Duration:Instant
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:An upgraded version of the Water Needle. Hazama aids his Fuuton chakra into this technique and rapidly fires an intense barrage of thirty six Wind Needles that are capable of ripping through wooden trees with great ease. They are very hard to see and are very fast. They are great for multiple enemies, but only range from short to mid range combat.  
Weakness:
Must charge the fuuton chakra into his finger tips for an entire post, and katon jutsu of B rank can over power it.

Name:Gentle Edge Breathing
Rank:A
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Both
Element:
Range:Self
Duration: Two Post-Three Post Cool Down
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:Hazama has mastered the art of taijutsu. By controlling his breathing he is able to harden his muscles and skin to the point that it is capable of blocking regular steel, and taijutsu blows. It is not Superior to his palms rotation, but it is great for the mobility and defense it offers, but the offensive ability it also posses. Like the name suggest Hazama's finger tips become like a small dagger allowing him to pierce an enemy's body with just his finger. It is only usefull against Taijutsu attacks of B-Rank and Kenjutsu of B-Rank. The breathing must be done to produce this effect.
Weakness:Does not offer any protection from Ninjutsu, or poisons

Name:Gentle Fangs
Rank:B
Type:Jyuuken Taijutsu
Used For:Offensive
Element:
Range:3m
Duration:Three Post-Four Post Cooldown
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description:This is similar to the Gentle Fist technique called Gentle Edge, but Hazama create streaming razor sharp beams of charka by simply focuses chakra in the tips of his fingers, while releasing a steady flow of chakra. Using these blades allows him to use them as an extension of himself. These tiny chakra beam blades allow him to remove the flesh or limbs of his enemies with ease. While it is strong it can't cut throw anything stronger than iron.
Weakness: Requires a chakra an additional B-rank of Chakra to keep active.


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