Medical Strike

Rain Ryder wrote:
Name: Poisonous Roar
Rank:A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 80m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up:[Boar
Description:

The user utilizes there ability to create poison mist yet releases it in a ferocious roar creating a twister effect. The mist is expelled in such force and with such pin point control that it no longer looks like mist but a powerful beam capable of greatly injuring anything it touches with bluntofrce damage, When striking an opponent the poison seeps onto the clothing skin and into the opponents blood stream through touching smelling etc. This poison completely paralyses the body after one post and causes intense sickness in the second while death within the third


Name: Poison fangs
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: poison
Range: 50M
Duration: N/A
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger Boar
Description:

By releasing poison mist from there skin instead of there mouth the user is then capable of manipulating the poison substance into two whips capable of blunt force damage capable of naturally poisoning an opponent with the effects of the poison mist though through damaging the skin instead of scent. requires c-rank upkeep [CS applies]


Name: Poison Dragon Force
Rank: A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 20 inches from body
Duration: constant
Hand Seals/Charge up: tiger
Description:

The user secretes the poison mist technique from every pour upon there body, This creates a powerful aura that makes hand to hand combat deadly. Naturally as its Rains chakra like all the poison mist jutsu this has no effect upon him. Now what does this allow him to do, This becomes an extension of his body allowing him to manipulate the poison technqiues he utilizes without the need for handseals instead with simple hand motions. [B-rank upkeep]

Name: Poisons Spiral Jaw
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:poison
Range:20 meters
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up:N/A
Description:

The user jumps in the air and, when they are upside down, gathers poison on their legs and kicks the opponent while rotating [Can only be used when poison dragon force is activated]

Rain Ryder wrote:
Name: Poisonous Roar
Rank:A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 80m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up:[Boar
Description:

The user utilizes there ability to create poison mist yet releases it in a ferocious roar creating a twister effect. The mist is expelled in such force and with such pin point control that it no longer looks like mist but a powerful beam capable of greatly injuring anything it touches with bluntofrce damage, When striking an opponent the poison seeps onto the clothing skin and into the opponents blood stream through touching smelling etc. This poison completely paralyses the body after one post and causes intense sickness in the second while death within the third.


Name: Poison fangs
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: poison
Range: 50M
Duration: N/A
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger Boar
Description:

By releasing poison mist from there skin instead of there mouth the user is then capable of manipulating the poison substance into two whips capable of blunt force damage capable of naturally poisoning an opponent with the effects of the poison mist though through damaging the skin instead of scent. requires c-rank upkeep [CS applies]


Name: Poison Dragon Force
Rank: A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 20 inches from body
Duration: constant
Hand Seals/Charge up: tiger
Description:

The user secretes the poison mist technique from every pour upon there body, This creates a powerful aura that makes hand to hand combat deadly. Naturally as its Rains chakra like all the poison mist jutsu this has no effect upon him. Now what does this allow him to do, This becomes an extension of his body allowing him to manipulate the poison technqiues he utilizes without the need for handseals instead with simple hand motions. [B-rank upkeep] [poison techniques require a two post cool down after use, Example when in this form utlizing poison roar, Poison roar cant be used for two posts but poison fang can be used instead], When in this form all poisons become nullified within the users system and any and all form of poisonous ability used against the opponent is defeated,

Name: Poisons Spiral Jaw
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:poison
Range:20 meters
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up:N/A
Description:

The user jumps in the air and, when they are upside down, gathers poison on their legs and kicks the opponent while rotating [Can only be used when poison dragon force is activated]

Rain Ryder wrote:

Rain Ryder wrote:
Name: Poisonous Roar
Rank: S
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 80m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up:[Boar
Description:

The user utilizes there ability to create poison mist yet releases it in a ferocious roar creating a twister effect. The mist is expelled in such force and with such pin point control that it no longer looks like mist but a powerful beam capable of greatly injuring anything it touches with bluntofrce damage, When striking an opponent the poison seeps onto the clothing skin and into the opponents blood stream through touching smelling etc. This poison completely paralyses the body after one post and causes intense sickness in the second while death within the third.

Name: Poison fangs
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: poison
Range: 50M
Duration: N/A
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger Boar
Description:

By releasing poison mist from there skin instead of there mouth the user is then capable of manipulating the poison substance into two whips capable of blunt force damage capable of naturally poisoning an opponent with the effects of the poison mist though through damaging the skin instead of scent. requires c-rank upkeep [CS applies]


Name: Poison Dragon Force
Rank: A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 20 inches from body
Duration: constant
Hand Seals/Charge up: tiger
Description:

The user secretes the poison mist technique from every pour upon there body, This creates a powerful aura that makes hand to hand combat deadly. Naturally as its Rains chakra like all the poison mist jutsu this has no effect upon him. Now what does this allow him to do, This becomes an extension of his body allowing him to manipulate the poison technqiues he utilizes without the need for handseals instead with simple hand motions. [B-rank upkeep] [poison techniques require a two post cool down after use, Example when in this form utlizing poison roar, Poison roar cant be used for two posts but poison fang can be used instead], When in this form all poisons become nullified within the users system and any and all form of poisonous ability used against the opponent is defeated,

Name: Poisons Spiral Jaw
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:poison
Range:20 meters
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up:N/A
Description:

The user jumps in the air and, when they are upside down, gathers poison on their legs and kicks the opponent while rotating [Can only be used when poison dragon force is activated]

• Poison Senbon - Drop the range down a bit.
  
• Poison Wolve - Drop the range down a bit.
  

• You have still not the edits i told you to make. Please make the changes.
  

• Posion Wolves: [CS discounts apply] remove that.
  
• Nightlock: the death is instantaneously, NO WAY im allowing that so edit it or remove it.
  
• Poison Dragon Force: Bump that upkeep to A-rank.
  

Vegas Kazama wrote:

Rain Ryder wrote:

Rain Ryder wrote:
Name: Poisonous Roar
Rank: S
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 80m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up:[Boar
Description:

The user utilizes there ability to create poison mist yet releases it in a ferocious roar creating a twister effect. The mist is expelled in such force and with such pin point control that it no longer looks like mist but a powerful beam capable of greatly injuring anything it touches with bluntofrce damage, When striking an opponent the poison seeps onto the clothing skin and into the opponents blood stream through touching smelling etc. This poison completely paralyses the body after one post and causes intense sickness in the second while death within the third. This technique carries a high speed limit, however if one is at least 60 meters from the user they have a chance to dodge. Anyone within a 30 meter range must have Taijutsu Mastery to dodge this or have some sort of Mastery in another Combat Specialty to use a counter that close. Anyone in five meters is a guarantee hit.


Name: Poison fangs
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: poison
Range: 50M
Duration: N/A
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger Boar
Description:

By releasing poison mist from there skin instead of there mouth the user is then capable of manipulating the poison substance into two whips capable of blunt force damage capable of naturally poisoning an opponent with the effects of the poison mist though through damaging the skin instead of scent. requires c-rank upkeep [CS applies]


Name: Poison Dragon Force
Rank: A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 20 inches from body
Duration: constant
Hand Seals/Charge up: tiger
Description:

The user secretes the poison mist technique from every pour upon there body, This creates a powerful aura that makes hand to hand combat deadly. Naturally as its Rains chakra like all the poison mist jutsu this has no effect upon him. Now what does this allow him to do, This becomes an extension of his body allowing him to manipulate the poison technqiues he utilizes without the need for handseals instead with simple hand motions. [B-rank upkeep] [poison techniques require a two post cool down after use, Example when in this form utlizing poison roar, Poison roar cant be used for two posts but poison fang can be used instead], When in this form all poisons become nullified within the users system and any and all form of poisonous ability used against the opponent is defeated,

Name: Poisons Spiral Jaw
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:poison
Range:20 meters
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up:N/A
Description:

The user jumps in the air and, when they are upside down, gathers poison on their legs and kicks the opponent while rotating [Can only be used when poison dragon force is activated]

Name: Mist of Bats
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: Poison
Range: 40 meters
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Rat
Description:When expelling the poison mist or by using pre-existing poison mist technique the user is capable of turning parts of the mist into bats, The amount of bats created at one time can range up to 15. They have the same effect as the poison mist naturally. Capable of flight. Kamikaze bats that explode back into mist form when they strike something

Name: Poison senbon
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: Poison
Range: 40M
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: boar
Description: When expelling the poison mist or by using pre-existing poison mist the user is capable of creating thin poison mist senbon that are unable to pierce, Each senbon releases a meters worth of mist when released.

Name: Poison mist wolf
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: Poison
Range: 60m
Duration: 5 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dog
Description: When expelling the poison mist or by using pre-existing poison mist the user is capable of turning said mist into a total of 6 wolves, The wolves have pure form and are capable of piercing utilizing there claws and mouth, When expelled via a strike they turn back into there poison mist form and can be reformed for a C-rank amount of chakra.

Name: Nightlock
Rank: A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: Poison
Range: contact
Duration: instant.
Hand Seals/Charge up: 1 post charge up or dog seal
Description: When expelling the poison mist or by using pre-existing poison mist the user locks lips with another person and releases the mist directly into there mouth. Due to this being forced rapidly into a targets mouth [OR ANY WOUND or opening] the death is instantaneously.

Plague wrote:Name: Mist of Bats
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: Poison
Range: 15 meters
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Rat
Description:When expelling the poison mist or by using pre-existing poison mist technique the user is capable of turning parts of the mist into bats, The amount of bats created at one time can range up to 10. They have the same effect as the poison mist naturally. Capable of flight. Kamikaze bats that explode back into mist form when they strike something

Reduce the range, reduce to ten bats.

Name: Poison senbon
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: Poison
Range: 35M
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: boar
Description: When expelling the poison mist or by using pre-existing poison mist the user is capable of creating thin poison mist senbon that are unable to pierce, Each senbon releases a meters worth of mist when released.

This should be a B rank with the range reduced

Name: Poison mist wolf
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: Poison
Range: 60M
Duration: 5 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dog
Description: When expelling the poison mist or by using pre-existing poison mist the user is capable of turning said mist into a total of 6 wolves, The wolves have pure form and are capable of piercing utilizing there claws and mouth, When expelled via a strike they turn back into there poison mist form and can be reformed for a C-rank amount of chakra. [CS discounts apply]

Reduce the range on this a tinse.

Name: Poisonous Roar
Rank:S
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 60m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up:[Boar
Description: The user utilizes there ability to create poison mist yet releases it in a ferocious roar creating a twister effect. The mist is expelled in such force and with such pin point control that it no longer looks like mist but a powerful beam capable of greatly injuring anything it touches with bluntofrce damage, When striking an opponent the poison seeps onto the clothing skin and into the opponents blood stream through touching smelling etc. This poison completely paralyses the body after one post and causes intense sickness in the second while death within the third, The beam is capable of reaching 60 meters while it is 10m wide

How big can the beam be?


Name: Poison fangs
Rank: B
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element: poison
Range: 3M
Duration: N/A
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger Boar
Description: By releasing poison mist from there skin instead of there mouth the user is then capable of manipulating the poison substance into two whips capable of blunt force damage capable of naturally poisoning an opponent with the effects of the poison mist though through damaging the skin instead of scent. requires c-rank upkeep [CS applies]


Reduce this range to 3 meters or this is completely denied.

Name: Poison Dragon Force
Rank: A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:Poison
Range: 20 inches from body
Duration: constant
Hand Seals/Charge up: tiger
Description:The user secretes the poison mist technique from every pour upon there body, This creates a powerful aura that makes hand to hand combat deadly. Naturally as its Rains chakra like all the poison mist jutsu this has no effect upon him. Now what does this allow him to do, This becomes an extension of his body allowing him to manipulate the poison techniques he utilizes and grants  a quarter of the total range to  poison based techniques.


Name: Poisons Spiral Jaw
Rank: C
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Element:poison
Range:6 meters
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up:N/A
Description: The user jumps in the air and, when they are upside down, gathers poison on their legs and kicks the opponent while rotating [Can only be used when poison dragon force is activated]

Your kick can go 20 meters? @.@ [it creates a kind of large whip based move via the legs]

Name: Sparking Strength
Rank: A
Type: Fighting Style [Ijutsu]
Element:Ranton
Range: CES ranges
Duration:  2 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up:N/A
Description: by applying raiton chakra to the users CEs, They creator and user is capable of greatly enhancing not only the speed or there punches but the strength as well, Requiring pin point chakra control this fighting style can be added to cherry blossom impact and heavenly foot of pain and any other CES related jutsu without needing to buy elemental variations.  Especially useful against water based ninja due to the lightning being made up of there own chakra they are unable to be shocked. In terms of physical power the jutsu is on the same scale as ces meaning it does gain the clans boost. The electricity released from the CEs is enough to completely paralyze a body with the tiniest of movements

More detail is needed

Name: Fists of thunder
Rank: C-A
Type: Ijutsu/Taijutsu
Element:Ranton
Range: C-20M B-40M-A60M
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: This jutsu requires pinpoint chakra control very much like the hyuuga clans Vacuum palm this technique utilizes chakra control that even ordinary medical ninja are incapable off, In Rains case this technique allows him to release various degrees of powerful blasts of lightning that at C-rank can caus a sharp jolt B-rank can caus blunt force damage and half body paralysis and at A-rank can kill, If they survive the A-rank blast there entire body would be paralysed.

Ranges, way too much


Name: Lightning strike
  Rank: S
  Type: Medical/Tai
  Element:raiton/n/a
  Range:self
  Duration: till chakra exhausted
  Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger
  Description:

The user wraps their body in a layer of lightning chakra that, instead of being used offensively, is used to electrically stimulate the user's nervous system. The technique speeds up neural synapses to react faster, and to push physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing for tremendous raw speed. Thought to be the incomplete version of lightning release armour this form requires medical based chakra control and medical based chakra to help the raiton stimulate the nervous system, this requires master medical to be utilized and requires ana dept in taijutsu. Those who are adept are able to boost there speed to the mastery level while masters can boost there speed to the total of the 1st gate without a drawback. Adept users are capable of pushing themselves further. Unlike the complete and natural version of lra this does not increase the users defenses but does help push forward there strength. Now as stated before the user at adept is capable of pushing there boundaries even further and boosting there speed level to that of the 1st gate but naturally consequences, lightning within there bodies will erupt piercing and numbing there body from the inside easily damaging organs etc. While masters have the same flaw but are capable of 3rd gate speed at total.

Just so you know the damage trumps your 'without drawbacks'