Old Ki Jutsu for Fumiko

Name: Screaming Rabbit
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Lightning Hold 1 Round of Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Rabbit
Description: The jutsu overall idea is to interrupt someone using body flicker or something similar to it. It works much like screaming dragon, it coats the user in a thick coat of lightning instantly after the users hand sign is done. They can jolt forward within 15 meters in a 360 degree radius and then latch onto the target, the user is not the ones latching onto the target the lightening is whats sent forth to latch on, however they still move. The reason this is done is because lightnings speed is much quicker then the speed of the user. Upon latching onto the fleeing subject bones will be crushed and snapped, the bones that will snap depend on where it latches on. This jutsu is not meant to be a killing jutsu, but one to disable a enemy from retreating. Note that even though its range is 15 meters, the first 5 meters are spent to be on path with the target. The other ten meters is required so that they can catch up to them. Lastly the speed is achieved to do such things, by not increases the speed of the user or element. It does max out the top speed instantaneously of the user and the lightning. The jutsu is able to achieve this by using massive acceleration that is in the same way as screaming dragon. However instead of directing the energy force its directed as focus and tracking onto a target. Also note that this leaves no destructive marks on the surrounding terrain, unlike Screaming Dragon. If a enemy traveling at high speeds attempt to change directions the jutsu is capable of auto adjusting and catching within the same distance interval. Lastly the thick lightning (which is virtually the same and functions the same as it does in Screaming Dragon). mentioned at the start works as a barrier much like on a jet airplane, except it can handle almost any acceleration and certainly the type in this jutsu and Screaming Dragon. Lastly the jutsu can only attack one person at a time using flicker or something similar per usage of the jutsu .
DISTANCE NOTE: When its going after someone the first 5 meters are meant for the lightning to track them and get angled right to hit them, if you are within the 10 meters range of the jutsu it will hit you regardless. The reason the 5 meters are used is because the user can not instantaneously catch up to someone. It takes a distance of 5 meters traveling before the catch up to someone using a body flicker, however if they right next to them or within the 5 meters they will be caught virtually instantly.  
Defense Note:
It can still be interrupted by something such as a B ranked Barrier, however due to its ability to move at such rapid acceleration the terrain under them is of little effect, but something like a large wooden barrier or rock in the path can be used to block the user as long as it creates enough distance between them, however if the jutsu has already been activated the speed of the lightning will out pace the creation of a barrier. Other ways can be used to cancel out this jutsu. However someone so bold to simply attack the just with Taijutsu or Weapons in hand to hand combat, would mean the breaking of bones of the would be attacker.


Name: Screaming Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: 20 meters
Duration: Instantaneously
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon -> Tiger -> Dragon -> Tiger
Description: The user commits a series of 4 hand signs and as soon as he does so his/her body becomes coated in thick cracking waves of lightning. For a moment it would appear as if he lifts off the ground. His/her body then accelerates to 10% higher then the users maximum speed instantaneously and he then jolts forward, to a outside view they would see a huge crack of light accelerate to max speed instantly and then proceed to rip through the entire ground and destroy anything in its path. This jutsu is capable of destroying even S ranked Barriers and give the defending shinobi (if within 5 meters of broken point of barrier) several broken bones and possible unconsciousness. If a direct hit is taken by a enemy shinobi death awaits them, this will literally rip them apart and send body parts flying.  Another thing to note is the fact that this jutsu can change entire directions instantly and lost only 1/8 of its total speed *The user can move slight angles within the capability of there own agility* and that it also deals severe Raiton damage and can fry and destroy peoples flesh besides ripping them apart, so even coming in contact is dangerous. The actual speed of the jutsu is determined by the skill of the user doing said jutsu. Essentially the attack of this jutsu is based on going extremely fast and landing into a enemy with the thick coating Raiton. Causes first degree burns on contact skin of the user.

Name: Sliding Peace
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/a
Range: +3 meters from the tip of the blade
Duration: Until Released
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/a
Description: this technique employs the concept of chakra flow in a similar manner to the Flying Swallow and Sword of Kusanagi: Chidori Katana techniques. Through the use of chakra flow, the user channels their chakra through their swords, extending both the reach and cutting ability of the blade, while allowing the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction, as shown from how these projectiles completely penetrated a considerable stone pillar, before continuing to damage the immediate surroundings.

First two are basically Lightning Release Armor techniques, as that is a limited technique denied.

On the third technique, here is the canon version: http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Samurai_Sabre_Technique

It does the same thing with a canon description, plus you can then fire said chakra created blade. If you would still prefer your custom I will review then.

I'm the Demon of the Mist wrote:First two are basically Lightning Release Armor techniques, as that is a limited technique denied.

On the third technique, here is the canon version: http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Samurai_Sabre_Technique

It does the same thing with a canon description, plus you can then fire said chakra created blade. If you would still prefer your custom I will review then.

You've totally misunderstood the Jutsu then. Its somewhat similar then the armor release. However it isn't meant for protection and it works on a totally different principle and has no speed at all in comparison. Both these Jutsu were approved by the Owner of the site, so I'm going to have a Admin look at it, No offence.
On another note I did switch the technique to the Samurai Sabre.

So, based on what I was told of Screaming Rabbit:

- The lightning travels on a linear path.
- The user gets no speed increase from this.
- The user is merely protected from the acceleration of his own jutsu
- The jutsu is used to intercept someone moving at exceedingly high speeds.

Now for this "5-meter mark", am I to understand that if the target uses Shunshin within 5 meters of you, the lightning will definitely hit them before they flicker, or is it not applicable at all?

Screaming Dragon: So long as you don't get any increased reactions from your accelerated speed and you don't have full control over your momentum (meaning you won't be able to change directions until you're near the range limit of your jutsu), this is approvable. That of course would mean you would need to increase duration. You're also missing a Weaknesses section for this jutsu; I suggest one of them to be some severe electrical burns or bruising on your part for this jutsu.

Name: Sliding Peace
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/a
Range: +3 meters from the tip of the blade
Duration: Until Released
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger
Description: this technique employs the concept of chakra flow in a similar manner to the Flying Swallow and Sword of Kusanagi: Chidori Katana techniques. Through the use of chakra flow, the user channels their chakra through their swords, extending both the reach and cutting ability of the blade, while allowing the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction, as shown from how these projectiles completely penetrated a considerable stone pillar, before continuing to damage the immediate surroundings.

You tossing this?

When its going after someone the first 5 meters are meant for the lightning to track them and get angled right to hit them, if you are within the 10 meters range of the jutsu it will hit you regardless. The reason the 5 meters are used is because the user can not instantaneously catch up to someone. It takes a distance of 5 meters traveling before the catch up to someone using a body flicker, however if they right next to them or within the 5 meters they will be caught virtually instantly.  Should help clearing up. Added that in

If I use it before they flicker then they are 100% done for. The 5 meters is really just used to catch up to them. But if they were within 5 meters then its irrelevant and they will be caught. Also the lightening does travel linear but it can change directions.

The screaming dragon is simply moving myself to my top speed quickly and I'd assume you can have the same movement as someone running top speed. I added in a part where you can actually change entire directions by using the lightning wave you create but at a cost of total speed. Not sure what you mean about duration. It would only last one post. Added in first degree burns on dragon to myself.

Rabbit: okay, so your lightning will travel at Taijutsu Mastery speeds, but anyone within range who uses Shunshin will cause the lightning to accelerate to catch them regardless. 


Dragon: Alright, since your charry isn't maxed out in speed as far as our system goes, you can have the acceleration beyond your own movement speed for the jutsu. The jutsu is approved.

V wrote:

Rabbit: okay, so your lightning will travel at Taijutsu Mastery speeds, but anyone within range who uses Shunshin will cause the lightning to accelerate to catch them regardless. 


Dragon: Alright, since your charry isn't maxed out in speed as far as our system goes, you can have the acceleration beyond your own movement speed for the jutsu. The jutsu is approved.

I'm fine with that, however its more for people who uses moves(Jutsus) that increase there speed that its able to rapidly catch them. I guess how you put it is correct. Does that mean this stuff is approved?

I have discussed this matter with various people, including Second V, Third V, and Blue V. We have come to the general consensus that this is approved.