Water Water Everywhere.. I'm getting ALL WET

Demon wrote:either give a 1 post charge time or add in some hand signs because an instantaneous S rank with no consequences to ones health is quite OP.

Demon wrote:The user can only use basic/water/clan techniques while activated.

Demon wrote:Hozuki water gun technique only costs D rank chakra as the pressurized part of the technique is already complete: it can also be fired from any point in the body.

Demon wrote:The user is also able to expand its body using the water, allowing for immense utility, able to expand any limb or overall body up to 20 meters.

1/3 discount to water techs.

Demon wrote:200 meters in any limb or the body entirely becoming a massive water monster.

Demon wrote:Able to utilize the water gun technique at D rank cost and can be fired from any point of the body. The clone is also able to use its own body for water technique sources. If it uses its own body it only requires 1/3 the chakra cost.

Setōshi wrote:Name: Blaaahhh
Rank: D rank
Type: ninjutsu
Used For: Slippery
Element: Oil
Range: 10 meters
Duration:Single release, contents until removed or end of thread.
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: The user swells water chakra in their stomach using their KKG, a Hozuki member changes the water to oil. The oil is then released in a single spouting up to 10 meter blast, releasing a 100 gallons of clear flammable oil in a splash. The initial blast is none damaging, but equal supplementary.
Weakness: The oil can be ignited by enemy or foe. Simple blasting of oil that could used by an opponent.

[ Bump this up to C, 100 Gallons is quite a lot of oil. Also change the color to the regular black color of oil please. Other than this is fine. ]


No reason to make the oil black. The clan's oil is clear and there are plenty of clear flammable oils.

Its about two standard bathtubs full. I would still argue its D rank, as its not the amount of oil. Its that its literally being fired about 10 paces in front of you. Its an extremely short distance. If you want it C rank I will change how its fires as right now its just a splash of oil.

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Name: ULTIMATE HYDRATION
Rank: S rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Supplementary
Element: Water/Oil/HydrationKKG
Range:Personal
Duration: 6 posts, not including post of activation.
Hand Seals/Charge up: None. Instantaneously
Description: The ultimate technique of a Hozuki Clan master. The technique utilizes all the supplementary benefits of the Hydration technique to its absolute. The technique releases a large amount of chakra through the user's chakra network. The chakra massively produces hydration water/oil that begins to massively compress throughout the body; equal to that of a lake or bursting water waves jutsu. The water continually pressurizes compacting and forming into the users body. The entire process takes only millisecond as the body release the transformation in a burst of chakra. The body also expands, every muscles becoming enlarged and enhanced; gaining the "great water limb technique" effect. The body made of unique water becomes larger, gaining more height, and two extra arms located beneath the preexisting ones. Their body is in constant hydration stasis, but appears to be a solid and is as durable as pressurized water, able to withstand most blunt damage and stop most slicing techniques. The user is able to use their body as a source for water techniques and utilize special techniques. Standard water/clan technique used from the body are at a 1/3 discount, deducted before any other discounts. Hozuki water gun technique only costs D rank chakra as the pressurized part of the technique is already complete: it can also be fired from any point in the body. The user is also able to expand its body using the water, allowing for immense utility, able to expand any limb or overall body up to 20 meters. He is also able to use "Free Form" hozuki technique as well. The over utility of this technique is immense, not only increasing physical stats; but also ninjutsu capabilities. The technique can be released at any point or will be done upon its termination. All the pressurized oily-water is released outward in a highly pressurized blast able to slice through solid rock reaching 50 meters in all directions, the water will still continue beyond that in massive waves.

Demon wrote:either give a 1 post charge time or add in some hand signs because an instantaneous S rank with no consequences to ones health is quite OP.

• Please decrease the duration to 3 posts, not including the initial. 4 seems more fair, keep in mind this will be an up keep cost.

I know there is an upkeep. Also 3 posts is about less than a minute of RP time. I actually shouldn't even have a limit as long as I pay the up keep. This require no special c chakra or physical strain, as long as I pay the up keep it should be continuous. 6 post was just a random number, I see no reason to remove that at all or even have that. I am choosing to pay the S rank up keep fee. There is no reason my character couldn't continually pay cost until chakra was gone.

• I need you to give limits to the strength, I.e. boosts the users physical strength up 1 tier.

All the physical increases are based on "great arm technique" but I added they are bumped by one tier.

• There is a bold bit in their about you producing oil in this technique as well, seeing as you have made a completely second technique then I'm going to ask you to remove this bit about oil in your tech.

Probably should read the KKG. But my body is made up of oily water, that jutsu was to create a flammable oil. But all my techniques are oil based.
Once a member of the Hozuki clan becomes S rank or master KKG. The water becomes more like oil and they gain access to oil techniques. My kkg is a water/oil. The 2nd technique is to make the oil flammable.
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Demon wrote:The user can only use basic/water/clan techniques while activated.

This needs to be explained since we have no basis of what is basic amongst these techniques.

basic techniques.. i.e basic ninjutsu E-D academy techniques.

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Demon wrote:Hozuki water gun technique only costs D rank chakra as the pressurized part of the technique is already complete: it can also be fired from any point in the body.

Bump to C rank please. Also, for the bold area, the technique already has no hand signs and specific to a hand gesture so I will have to ask you to remove this please.

Once this technique is started, my entire body is as pressurized as a hozuki water gun. The gun motion is pointless, it is simply firing a finger sized shot from an already pressurized body. I can make a different technique but it will be the exact same thing, the hand sign isn't even a requirement to mold the chakra. I will bump to c rank because I really don't care, but it doesn't make sense I can't fire it from any point.

•The user is also able to expand its body using the water, allowing for immense utility, able to expand any limb or overall body up to 20 meters.

20 meters is excessive, I edited it to 10. But with normal hydration technique I can expand my body to 3 meters, with a C rank technique. When my body is made up of pressurized water I should easily be able to expand it.

1/3 discount to water techs

What is there to consult, I am using water from my body to reduce the cost. Its logical, I don't have to create the water, I already have a source.

• I will need to consult the others about this portion.

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Name: Oil dive
Rank: D
Type: ninjutsu
Used For: supplementary
Element: oil
Range: 0-25+ meters
Duration: n/a up to three posts.
Hand Seals/Charge up: none
Description: The user release oil through their feet that soaks into the ground rapidly. The oil softens the ground which allows them to quickly dive through the earth, they can release the oil from any point in their body allowing them to travel quickly through the ground. The oil can quickly be removed as the target moves away, returning the earth to a solid state.
Weakness: Doesn't work on anything oil resistant or non-deconstruct-able.  

• I'm going to ask you to boost this to C rank because of it's similarity in style to the Hiding Like a Mole technique which is C rank. It's doing the same thing with a different medium, perfectly fine.

The difference is I am not converting earth to sand and I don't have the ability to sense whats happening through the ground. Which hiding like a mole technique does.

• Decrease the distance to 20 M or 25 M, that's definitely more reasonable for C rank.

sure

• A three post duration is fine, just know it will be an up keep to continuously go into and move through whatever terrain you're in.

ya.....

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Name: Ultimate Hydration clone
Rank: S rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: supplementary
Element:water/oil
Range:personal, 30 meters
Duration: Until destroyed.
Hand Seals/Charge up: One seal, index, middle finger erect, creation is immediate, looks like normal water clone.
Description: A master of hydration technique is able to create a special clone, similar to that of "Steaming tranny technique." This clone utilizes the clans very special body modification kekkei genkai, creating a clone visually identical to that of the user. The clone is made from unique oil water of the Hozuki clan and is created from 1000s of gallons of it; equal to that of a large lake. The clone is able to expand up to 200 meters in any limb or the body entirely becoming a massive water monster. The clone is able to use any hozuki/water technique even on a massive scale. The clone can use "free form" without chakra cost; allowing to change his body for various tasks. The clone is made for high utility with amazing reach and power. The clone's physical stats are beyond that of normal shinobi, the pressurized water being formed into enhanced muscles. Providing enhanced physical strength and speed equal to that of a taijustsu master. Able to utilize the water gun technique at D rank cost and can be fired from any point of the body. The clone is also able to use its own body for water technique sources. If it uses its own body it only requires 1/3 the chakra cost.

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Demon wrote:200 meters in any limb or the body entirely becoming a massive water monster.

This is going to need to be decreased to 20 like your other tech of the same nature. The bold part I will have to confront the staff about.

This isn't created the same way. This is a clone entirely made of water and doesn't have the restrictions of a body. As such its expansion is completely different. It is designed to be a giant water clone, but using the hozuki kkg it can become pressurized. 200 meters might be extreme, but it should be the size of a giant summon, Statue of the outer path.


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Demon wrote:Able to utilize the water gun technique at D rank cost and can be fired from any point of the body. The clone is also able to use its own body for water technique sources. If it uses its own body it only requires 1/3 the chakra cost.

Change the bold area to match that of the technique of similar nature, the Ultimate Hydration tech. As for the italicized portion I'll have to confront the staff.

Same reasons as above, also they are similar but also completely different. This clone has different limitations than the body modification.

• Finally, since you are adding even more water to your mass I ask that in this state Raiton techniques of A rank and higher do double the damage. it is a Hozuki's primary weakness. Your body being able to take one S rank strike and two A rank.

Well actually my weaknesses are still the same, if my body is in hydration technique and hit by lightning I become jello. There's no reason to add that as its obvious. One a rank would be enough to jello me. In fact a B rank probably would.

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Name: Hydration Great Arm Ad-on
Rank: C
Type: ninjutsu
Used For: supplementary
Element: water/oil
Range: personal
Duration: Until dispersed
Hand Seals/Charge up: none
Description: The user of the hydration technique creates an additional arm from any point on their body. They are able to use; including a shoulder. The arm is equal to that of a arm enhanced by great arm technique.
Weakness: An extra limb makes a larger target and can also get in the way if created in a wrong spot.

• Just be aware that the Hydrification technique must be used beforehand to utilize this technique, so much stacking

Ya obviously.

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The 1/3rd reduction on clan techniques as a benefit to using "ULTIMATE HYDRATION" or "Ultimate Hydration clone" will need to be removed. Verdict from on high; kindly don't shoot the messenger.