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1The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty The Aijō Clan [Done] Fri Nov 29, 2013 10:37 pm

Jake Haruno

Jake Haruno

The Aijō Clan [Done] 1prj

   Clan Name: Aijō
   Clan element/'s: N/A
   Special characteristics/traits: The clan members all have one single quality that they share, There hair is the same color as there chakra, Purple.
   Location: Scattered

   Bloodline Name: Kansen suru [Infected]
   Bloodline Ability: The blood line of the .... clan is one that has no rival in forms of unique ability, Most commonly this clan is used via weaponry ability. What makes this clan special is there unique chakra that allows them ti caus affliction upon an opponent, Now i know what your thinking. What type of affliction how does it work how does it happen so on well that will be explained.

What it does!!

The unique chakra allows the clan member to force an affliction, The affliction comes in the form of flower's. Yes flowers. When the clan member strikes an opponent and is capable of cutting them from the wound a small flower will grow, A flower that has a total of  properties, A clan member may utilize two properties in one flower but never ever all three together, due to the unique chakra from the clan they do not hold average chakra meaning distinguishing them is very easy

Flower of time!:

Flower of Eternity:

Flower of poison:

Flower of Pain,:


Now whats stopping me from ripping out the flowers? Well as stated these are flowers that have roots that invade your body, You may rip them out but it will caus much damage, There are ways to defeat these flowers though which will be stated.

If i rip out the poison flowers will that stop the poison? Yes and no, The poison will not spread any more but you will not be immediately healed, Ripping out the poison flowers will caus a rather large amount of blood loss from the gaping wound you would be left with the flowers blossoming in said would forcing it to expand and with the roots going deeper into the body causing more damage when ripping. Though if this is done the poison from these affliction flowers will halt after 2 posts.

How can these flowers be stopped. Well there are two major flaws to the flowers, First is burning, By burning the flowers you can eliminate all the effects [Minus the poison flower after poison effects], This means though the flowers are still in the body they are simply decoration. Raiton has a similar effect. Meaning that Raiton and Katon are vast weaknesses to the flowers. #

Two touch:

D-rank - C-rank may know pain flower [Auto start] they may learn poison flower [120Ryo]
B-rank may learn poison flower and flower of time [120 Ryo each]
A-rank may learn any flower [120 Ryo each while two kill requires 250 ryo]



   Secret Clan Jutsu:

One may say the secret clan jutsu's are the flowers, This clan has no specified jutsu themselves but the ability to use different forms of affliction via there flower like chakra. Each has a word count but no ryo count, There chakra may be incorporated into any canon jutsu. If incorporated into an elemental jutsu the only flower used may be pain flower, The clan may only be capable of learning a maximum of two elements.


   Clan History:

This clan is a small clan hailing form the land of iron originally, They have samurai quality and have the ability to harness there chakra in many ways, Not much is known about this unique clan apart from the fact that they are generally skilled in weaponry. Though normally unheard of the clan has begun to slowly make a name for them self in the art of the sword teaching many samurai certain abilities and movements. They have now become integrated into the ninja system. Children of this generation are more likely to be in the ninja academy than training to become a samurai warrior

   Members:  7



Last edited by Jake on Tue Dec 03, 2013 1:24 am; edited 3 times in total

2The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty Re: The Aijō Clan [Done] Mon Dec 02, 2013 10:39 pm

Jake Haruno

Jake Haruno

Complete

3The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty Re: The Aijō Clan [Done] Mon Dec 02, 2013 11:41 pm

Kid Koopa

Kid Koopa
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

Jake wrote:D-rank - C-rank may know pain flower [Auto start] they may learn poison flower [1k words]
B-rank may learn poison flower and flower of time [500 words each]
A-rank may learn any flower [requires 500 words while two kill requires 1k]
If it is not too much to ask, it would be appreciated if you just used Ryo. I like word training myself, but having two jutsu gaining systems co-existing, being a ryo/NSP(whenever that gets sorted) and this word system you are incorporating, is not necessary.

Jake wrote:There chakra may be incorporated into any canon jutsu.
Does this mean you could use Fire Ball Jutsu and if it made an open wound a flower of your choice could sprout?

Also each flower needs a rank and a style whether it be Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu, Genjutsu, etc. This is so chakra can be deducted when someone uses them, instead of it just being a passive. I would suggest using the jutsu template, I understand some fields will be N/A or weird to fill out, but it also helps me get a better understanding on these flowers.

This also needs to take up an element slot or something. Because the effectiveness of these flowers are pretty good, so it wouldn't be fair for this not to eat up and element.

The flowers themselves, I think are fine. This is kind of an area of grey for me, so I am going to ask someone else to approve the flowers themselves.

Lastly, expand on the history just a tad. Minimum is a paragraph.

Anything I perceived incorrectly, let me know.

4The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty Re: The Aijō Clan [Done] Tue Dec 03, 2013 12:56 am

Jake Haruno

Jake Haruno

To me, It would make no sense in putting the flowers into a jutsu formation and or ranking them, The flower's are not jutsu themselves but simply the manifestation of the kekki genkai that is required to be used in conjunction with a jutsu, I will add it in but it is as if the clan do not have normal chakra and instead there chakra is full of this infection based quality that infects every jutsu they utilize. So yes if the user were to use fire ball jutsu and it made an open wound the infection would happen though i think i will state that if utilized in conjunction with an element only the flower of pain can be utilized.

Hmm i don't really think its fair stating it takes an element when all it is is a powerful infection based clan, It's not like it allows me to start with three elements or anything. I will add in that the clan may only be able to obtain a total of two elements and no more if that helps?

the flowers are more like stages [like kids clan] But ill happily remove the word count and add in the ryo amount ^^

5The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty Re: The Aijō Clan [Done] Tue Dec 03, 2013 1:06 am

Kid Koopa

Kid Koopa
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

Jake wrote:To me, It would make no sense in putting the flowers into a jutsu formation and or ranking them,
So you are basically poisoning people as a passive at no chakra cost. It's not fair and it won't be accepted as such. I understand it is an infection or antibodies traveling in the host, so it is passive, but for balancing purpose, a chakra cost is necessary.

Jake wrote:This is the clans strongest flower, It is a two hit kill, Yes being struck twice in the same spot will be an insta kill, When the spot is struck twice the flower will enlarged wrapping itself around the insides and outsides of an opponent before crushing them to death while releasing a vast injection of affliction chakra, The body of the target will burst into bloody flowers that will remain there forever.
Looking further at it, you expect a technique like this to cost zero chakra, you are silly. This one also needs a cooldown. Lets say you cut me on my arm. Five Post later if you cut me on my arm again, is the insta kill status still in effect? I vote no. Use a jutsu template and add ranks please.

6The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty Re: The Aijō Clan [Done] Tue Dec 03, 2013 1:23 am

Jake Haruno

Jake Haruno

Poncho wrote:
Jake wrote:To me, It would make no sense in putting the flowers into a jutsu formation and or ranking them,
So you are basically poisoning people as a passive at no chakra cost. It's not fair and it won't be accepted as such. I understand it is an infection or antibodies traveling in the host, so it is passive, but for balancing purpose, a chakra cost is necessary.

It is simple it is a passive ability granted on to another jutsu, For example Flying swallow, By using my clans chakra in conjunction with flying swallow then i will be capable of poisoning said person taking the flying swallows chakra cost. a move that requires the use of chakra is required to use any of the flowers meaning the chakra cost would be the same amount as whatever jutsu is utilized.

Jake wrote:This is the clans strongest flower, It is a two hit kill, Yes being struck twice in the same spot will be an insta kill, When the spot is struck twice the flower will enlarged wrapping itself around the insides and outsides of an opponent before crushing them to death while releasing a vast injection of affliction chakra, The body of the target will burst into bloody flowers that will remain there forever.
Looking further at it, you expect a technique like this to cost zero chakra, you are silly. This one also needs a cooldown. Lets say you cut me on my arm. Five Post later if you cut me on my arm again, is the insta kill status still in effect? I vote no. Use a jutsu template and add ranks please.
Again it is alll stated within the clan itself, IT is the ability of there chakra, A jutsu is required to pass from the user to the target, Again flying swallow is a good example, As for a cool down, I'll give it a cool down of five posts :3

7The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty Re: The Aijō Clan [Done] Tue Dec 03, 2013 1:36 am

Kid Koopa

Kid Koopa
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

Once again, please give each flower a jutsu. Handeals do not have to be required because it is an infection, but a chakra cost will be deducted for these flowers.

How I am reading it is if someone has a cut and any amount of your chakra gets into it, whether it be from a weapons coating(No chakra cost) or a fire ball jutsu, then one of these plants, that can easily kill someone and regrow, can sprout.

Put the flowers into jutsu templates please. They will have a chakra cost.

8The Aijō Clan [Done] Empty Re: The Aijō Clan [Done] Tue Dec 03, 2013 3:28 am

Jake Haruno

Jake Haruno

Sure ill make them kenjutsu i suppose

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