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1Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Raikan Clan [Done] Thu Sep 25, 2014 1:39 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

Raikan Clan [Done] 1prj
Clan Name: Raikan
Clan element/'s: N/A
Special characteristics/traits: Every member of the clan has a great sense of respect towards an Alpha, they will almost never try to harm an Alpha and will have the instinct to protect him or her. The pack members' eyes will turn a glowing gold when emotional (Angry, sad, very happy ect) whilst an Alpha's turns a glowing red.
Location: Various packs amongst the villages.
Bloodline Name: Raikan no Shinka
Bloodline Ability: The Raikan no Shinka is what makes the Raikan clan who they are. They are a species more than anything else really. There is the base state of every Lycan (Raikan) which they are in from birth, and then there is a special evolution into which four members of the clan can evolve into. These four are the Alphas. Every member of the clan, no matter their pack, can sense an Alpha when he is within fifty meters of them if that Alpha allows this. Any member of the clan will have an instinct to protect an Alpha, and will rarely attack him or her. If they do fight with an Alpha, their natural instinct to protect that Alpha will kick in immediately and they will have a harder time fighting him or her. This leads to the clan member struggling to control their body, loosing a tier level in tai as long as they want to attack that Alpha. This is due to their instinct telling their body not to do this, so their mind and body struggle with each other and thus they can not fully use their skills. An Alpha is the leader of their village's pack and is highly respected by all members, regardless of their respective pack.

Every clan member starts with the "base evolution" of the Raikan no Shinka, or Lycan Evolution. They look more or less like this
Spoiler:
Raikan no bēsu shinka: With the base evolution being this one, every member of the clan starts off looking more or less like the above pic. The Lycans will have enhanced taijutsu, giving them a +1 to their taijutsu tier. Due to hatred towards the clan members long ago, they've started to teach their children ways of hiding their true appearance and thus all genin+ have attained the ability to transform into a human. They can not transform into other people though. If they transform into a human form, it will always be the same form they first chose as their human form, unless they use the Transformation jutsu taught at the academy.

Raikan no Arufa no Shinka: This is the Alpha Evolution, and only four people can evolve into this form of the Raikan no Shinka. The evolution can be achieved through an intense amount of training (and some ryo). Once someone has evolved into this Lycan they have an innate enhanced sense of smell, sight and hearing. Able to see, hear and smell the smallest of things within a 25 meter radius of them. Meaning they can hear a heartbeat if it is within the range of their hearing, see an ant clearly up to 25 meters away and smell a mouse if it is within the range of their smell. The Alpha has also attained the ability to use the Raikan no Iyashi Chi technique. [2500 WC Training and 2500 Ryo to evolve into an Alpha]

The taijutsu boosts can not exceed master.

The clan's blood has a very bad reaction to steel. Any weapon or item coming into contact with their blood will cause that general area to start boiling which will lead to 2nd degree burns on the area the blood is, as well as where the blood drips. Steel Release techniques also get a +1 in rank against a Lycan.

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Raikan Clan [Done] 73m2
Name: Raikan no Iyashi Chi | Lycan's Healing Blood
Rank: S
Type: Bloodline/Medical
Used For: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Own Blood
Duration: Until cancelled
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: This is one of the Raikan clan's most powerful jutsu, and is without a doubt their best medical jutsu. By sending chakra into their blood, their blood will react to the chakra in a way as to start healing the body of whoever the blood is within. It can be used to heal yourself always as your blood is always in your body, but you can also have someone drink some of your blood to get healed too. The blood will stay within their system for the duration of the topic. Only an Alpha can use this technique. The healing goes as follows:
Scratches, cuts, and first degree burns heal in the same post as they were dealt. Second degree burns, deep cuts, and minor broken bones (fingers ect) are healed after one post of being dealt. Organs, broken bones such as a broken arm and third degree burns are healed in 4 posts. Limbs can be regenerated after 6 posts.
Weakness: It doesn't heal fast enough for you to survive being decapitated. Needs medical mastery. It can not heal burns gained through the burns caused by steel touching their blood. Can't use any other medical ninjutsu whilst the technique is still in place. The technique has a cooldown of 10 posts before it can be used again. It takes an additional 15CP to upkeep every two turns. 20CP extra if healing others.

Clan History: The Raikan clan was once a clan who resided within the village of Otogakure. They were a group of Shinobi that were close with the village and fought alongside it's military forces in many battles. For years no one showed their true form to anyone except the daimyo. Until one day when the first Alpha evolved. He was a man who longed for peace, the battles he's endured alongside his clan has left them loosing loved ones and it showed him how torn this world really is. Full of pain and hatred. He then devised a plan to spread the balance of power through the villages. If everyone had the same power, then no one would win or loose right? However there was always someone stronger than someone else. He didn't care though, if he could at least shift the balance a little he'd be satisfied.

His plan was simple, he'd spread his clan out into the other villages. Within every village he sent the Lycans into, he had appointed a Pack Leader for each of them. And thus the system for the Lycans was created. The Alpha would maintain the balance between the packs as long as he could, at the same time being the pack leader of the Otogakure pack.

Eventually there grew a lust for the Alpha evolution, no one was able to evolve into an Alpha besides the first Alpha. One of the pack leaders wanted this true evolution. He was unable to get it, and asked the first Alpha how he evolved. However the Alpha knew if he evolved then it would shift the balance. So the pack leader decided to kill the Alpha if he didn't reveal how to do it. He rallied up his pack and told them of his plan, however they were all too loyal towards the first Alpha and none wanted anything to do with this plan. They exiled him, and spread the word to the Alpha of this ex-pack leader's plan. The Alpha would then appoint a new Pack Leader, and prepare to kill the rouge Lycan. The Rouge Lycan would go into hiding, and start to devise a plan to take out the Alpha. This Lycan wanted to get others involved and turn them into Lycans too as to create his own military force to take on the Alpha and Otogakure who would stand with the Alpha.

It was however impossible for him to make new Lycans out of other Shinobi through transplant methods. He started to research the Lycan genes and created a technique that would allow him to turn others into Lycans. It had a chance of the victim dying, but it was of no matter to him. He raised his military force of ronin transformed into Lycans. He started training them, but the Alpha was no stupid man and knew the exact ins and outs of the Raikan no Shinka.

The Alpha decided that it was necessary for him to kill the Rouge Pack Leader, and in order to do that he would have to train the other three pack leaders to evolve into an Alpha. It was ironic considering how this all started. The training begun whilst the Rogue Pack Leader was gathering his own Rogue Pack. Eventually the other three pack leaders evolved into Alphas, but so did the Rogue Pack Leader.

The first Alpha and other three as well as their packs would head towards the Rogue Pack. He confronted the Rogue Pack Leader and tried to convince him to turn back and save a lot of lives, but he was content on killing the first Alpha. As the battle begun the howls and growls could be heard miles away. The Pack Alliance vs The Rogue Pack was a brutal battle, many Lycans were killed and blood stained the ground of the battlefield. But the RPL was no match for the other four Alphas, and he was killed along with his crossbred pack of Ronin created by the Lycan's Bite. It was a sad day that day for the first Alpha, he had to kill someone who was once one of his strongest allies, as well as others who were turned through the Lycan's Bite.

Today the clan is still spread out over the villages of Konoha, Oto, Kumo and Kiri. However with the merging of the villages of Kumo, Suna and Iwa, there was another shift in the balance of power. Kumo was now the strongest considering their numbers when it comes to the Lycans. But with the birth of a direct descendant of the first Alpha being born about 17 years ago, who knows what will happen.
Members:
Alphas: 1/4
Pack Members: Unlimited.



Last edited by Shinsui on Thu Nov 13, 2014 7:32 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sat Sep 27, 2014 5:00 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

.. Bump..

3Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:09 am

Sato

Sato



  • Okay firstly, Body transformation is banned for custom clans due to it being similar to the Curse Mark but i will allow you to have it if you change the transformation Into a Jutsu however it will need a post limit.
  • Your picture is also broken so I can't see what they look like?
  • Lycan's Bite: Denied. This is like giving a curse mark out which is a no.
  • Lycan's Healing Blood: Needs a bigger drawback also will require Medical Ninjutsu Mastery.

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4Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:21 am

Shinsui

Shinsui

Changed picture. Removed Bite. Added requirement to tech and weaknesses. Also, they are not transforming or changing their body. They are a species on their own, they're always like that and there is no transforming except when they evolve into an Alpha which only 4 people can do. They can also not change form from alpha to normal and vice versa, if you evolve you stay like that.

5Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:45 am

Sato

Sato



  • Lycan's Healing Blood: Add a cooldown to the technique so you can't continuously spam the technique, something like 10 posts.

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6Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:49 am

Shinsui

Shinsui

Done ^^

7Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Mon Sep 29, 2014 3:08 am

Shinsui

Shinsui

Bump

8Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:53 pm

Sato

Sato

Raikan Clan [Done] Sato_a12
Unless stated otherwise

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9Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:05 pm

Siegfried

Siegfried

Clan Unlocked for Update at User's Request

10Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:14 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

Raikan Clan [Done] 1prj
Clan Name: Raikan
Clan element/'s: N/A
Special characteristics/traits: Every member of the clan has a great sense of respect towards an Alpha, they will almost never try to harm an Alpha and will have the instinct to protect him or her. The pack members' eyes will turn a glowing gold when emotional (Angry, sad, very happy ect) whilst an Alpha's turns a glowing red.
Location: Various packs amongst the villages.
Bloodline Name: Raikan no Shinka
Bloodline Ability: The Raikan no Shinka is what makes the Raikan clan who they are. They are a species more than anything else really. There is the base state of every Lycan (Raikan) which they are in from birth, and then there is a special evolution into which four members of the clan can evolve into. These four are the Alphas. Every member of the clan, no matter their pack, can sense an Alpha when he is within fifty meters of them if that Alpha allows this. Any member of the clan will have an instinct to protect an Alpha, and will rarely attack him or her. If they do fight with an Alpha, their natural instinct to protect that Alpha will kick in immediately and they will have a harder time fighting him or her. This leads to the clan member struggling to control their body, loosing a tier level in tai as long as they want to attack that Alpha. This is due to their instinct telling their body not to do this, so their mind and body struggle with each other and thus they can not fully use their skills. An Alpha is the leader of their village's pack and is highly respected by all members, regardless of their respective pack.

Every clan member starts with the "base evolution" of the Raikan no Shinka, or Lycan Evolution. They look more or less like this
Spoiler:
Raikan no bēsu shinka: With the base evolution being this one, every member of the clan starts off looking more or less like the above pic. The Lycans will have enhanced taijutsu, giving them a +1 to their taijutsu tier. Due to hatred towards the clan members long ago, they've started to teach their children ways of hiding their true appearance and thus all genin+ have attained the ability to transform into a human. They can not transform into other people though. If they transform into a human form, it will always be the same form they first chose as their human form, unless they use the Transformation jutsu taught at the academy.

Raikan no Arufa no Shinka: This is the Alpha Evolution, and only four people can evolve into this form of the Raikan no Shinka. The evolution can be achieved through an intense amount of training (and some ryo). Once someone has evolved into this Lycan they have an innate enhanced sense of smell, sight and hearing. Able to see, hear and smell the smallest of things within a 25 meter radius of them. Meaning they can hear a heartbeat if it is within the range of their hearing, see an ant clearly up to 25 meters away and smell a mouse if it is within the range of their smell. The Alpha has also attained the ability to use the Raikan no Iyashi Chi technique. [1000 WC Training and 1000 Ryo to evolve into an Alpha]

The taijutsu boosts can not exceed master.

The clan's blood has a very bad reaction to steel. Any weapon or item coming into contact with their blood will cause that general area to start boiling which will lead to 2nd degree burns on the area the blood is, as well as where the blood drips. Steel Release techniques also get a +1 in rank against a Lycan.

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Raikan Clan [Done] 73m2
Name: Raikan no Iyashi Chi | Lycan's Healing Blood
Rank: S
Type: Bloodline/Medical
Used For: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Own Blood
Duration: Until cancelled
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: This is one of the Raikan clan's most powerful jutsu, and is without a doubt their best medical jutsu. By sending chakra into their blood, their blood will react to the chakra in a way as to start healing the body of whoever the blood is within. It can be used to heal yourself always as your blood is always in your body, but you can also have someone drink some of your blood to get healed too. The blood will stay within their system for the duration of the topic. Only an Alpha can use this technique. The healing goes as follows:
Scratches, cuts, and first degree burns heal in the same post as they were dealt. Second degree burns, deep cuts, and minor broken bones (fingers ect) are healed after one post of being dealt. Organs, broken bones such as a broken arm and third degree burns are healed in 4 posts. Limbs can be regenerated after 6 posts.
Weakness: It doesn't heal fast enough for you to survive being decapitated. Needs medical mastery. It can not heal burns gained through the burns caused by steel touching their blood. Can't use any other medical ninjutsu whilst the technique is still in place. The technique has a cooldown of 10 posts before it can be used again.

Clan History: The Raikan clan was once a clan who resided within the village of Otogakure. They were a group of Shinobi that were close with the village and fought alongside it's military forces in many battles. For years no one showed their true form to anyone except the daimyo. Until one day when the first Alpha evolved. He was a man who longed for peace, the battles he's endured alongside his clan has left them loosing loved ones and it showed him how torn this world really is. Full of pain and hatred. He then devised a plan to spread the balance of power through the villages. If everyone had the same power, then no one would win or loose right? However there was always someone stronger than someone else. He didn't care though, if he could at least shift the balance a little he'd be satisfied.

His plan was simple, he'd spread his clan out into the other villages. Within every village he sent the Lycans into, he had appointed a Pack Leader for each of them. And thus the system for the Lycans was created. The Alpha would maintain the balance between the packs as long as he could, at the same time being the pack leader of the Otogakure pack.

Eventually there grew a lust for the Alpha evolution, no one was able to evolve into an Alpha besides the first Alpha. One of the pack leaders wanted this true evolution. He was unable to get it, and asked the first Alpha how he evolved. However the Alpha knew if he evolved then it would shift the balance. So the pack leader decided to kill the Alpha if he didn't reveal how to do it. He rallied up his pack and told them of his plan, however they were all too loyal towards the first Alpha and none wanted anything to do with this plan. They exiled him, and spread the word to the Alpha of this ex-pack leader's plan. The Alpha would then appoint a new Pack Leader, and prepare to kill the rouge Lycan. The Rouge Lycan would go into hiding, and start to devise a plan to take out the Alpha. This Lycan wanted to get others involved and turn them into Lycans too as to create his own military force to take on the Alpha and Otogakure who would stand with the Alpha.

It was however impossible for him to make new Lycans out of other Shinobi through transplant methods. He started to research the Lycan genes and created a technique that would allow him to turn others into Lycans. It had a chance of the victim dying, but it was of no matter to him. He raised his military force of ronin transformed into Lycans. He started training them, but the Alpha was no stupid man and knew the exact ins and outs of the Raikan no Shinka.

The Alpha decided that it was necessary for him to kill the Rouge Pack Leader, and in order to do that he would have to train the other three pack leaders to evolve into an Alpha. It was ironic considering how this all started. The training begun whilst the Rogue Pack Leader was gathering his own Rogue Pack. Eventually the other three pack leaders evolved into Alphas, but so did the Rogue Pack Leader.

The first Alpha and other three as well as their packs would head towards the Rogue Pack. He confronted the Rogue Pack Leader and tried to convince him to turn back and save a lot of lives, but he was content on killing the first Alpha. As the battle begun the howls and growls could be heard miles away. The Pack Alliance vs The Rogue Pack was a brutal battle, many Lycans were killed and blood stained the ground of the battlefield. But the RPL was no match for the other four Alphas, and he was killed along with his crossbred pack of Ronin created by the Lycan's Bite. It was a sad day that day for the first Alpha, he had to kill someone who was once one of his strongest allies, as well as others who were turned through the Lycan's Bite.

Today the clan is still spread out over the villages of Konoha, Oto, Kumo and Kiri. However with the merging of the villages of Kumo, Suna and Iwa, there was another shift in the balance of power. Kumo was now the strongest considering their numbers when it comes to the Lycans. But with the birth of a direct descendant of the first Alpha being born about 17 years ago, who knows what will happen.
Members:
Alphas: 1/4
Pack Members: Unlimited.



Last edited by Shinsui on Mon Oct 27, 2014 11:27 pm; edited 3 times in total

11Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:32 pm

Setōshi

Setōshi

+1 to sensory. They have an innate enhanced sense of smell, sight and hearing. Able to see, hear and smell the smallest of things within a 25 meter radius of them. Meaning they can hear a heartbeat if it is within the range of their hearing, see an ant clearly up to 25 meters away and smell a mouse if it is within the range of their smell.




Can you choose between the enhanced senses and the Chakra Sensory. From what you put above it appears that you are going for enhanced senses which are perfectly fine.

12Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Mon Oct 27, 2014 11:10 pm

Setōshi

Setōshi

Raikan no Iyashi Chi | Lycan's Healing Blood

"Scratches, cuts, poisons up to C rank and first degree burns heal in the same post as they were dealt. Second degree burns, deep cuts, and poisons up to A rank and minor broken bones (fingers ect) are healed after one post of being dealt. Organs, broken bones such as a broken arm, poisons of S rank and third degree burns are healed in 4 posts. Limbs can be regenerated after 6 posts"

If you have a system for C A and S rank then you need one for B rank, other wise you need to increase the post count to 2 after initial activation of this tech. In addition, can't allow for poisons. the cure will still need to be taken, thus remove that portion please. In addition, you will need to pay the upkeep cost, there is no getting around it.


13Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Mon Oct 27, 2014 11:24 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

Edited

14Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Fri Oct 31, 2014 2:21 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

La bumpeth

15Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Nov 02, 2014 6:51 am

Aerie Locke

Aerie Locke

Add your most recent post of the clan to the original one if you already haven't. Also your image of their appearance seems to be broken. Either edit it or remove it and add a word description.

16Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Nov 02, 2014 2:15 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

Edited. I dunno why the pic keeps breaking, but basically they're Underworld lycans in appearance

17Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:26 pm

Aerie Locke

Aerie Locke

The image is still broken... q.q
Once that's completed, you'll be approved.

18Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:41 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

Try now ;-;

19Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:46 pm

Aerie Locke

Aerie Locke

A P P R O V E D.

20Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Thu Nov 13, 2014 11:48 am

Setōshi

Setōshi

[1000 WC Training and 1000 Ryo to evolve into an Alpha]

This needs to increase to 2,500 WC and 2,500 Ryo.




"Second degree burns, deep cuts, and minor broken bones (fingers ect) are healed after one post of being dealt. Organs, broken bones such as a broken arm and third degree burns are healed in 4 posts. Limbs can be regenerated after 6 posts."

In addition to the 4 post effect add that it costs an additional 10 Chakra every 2 posts. For the 6 post effect add that it costs an additional 20 chakra every 3 posts.




When the changes have been made this will be approved. Those that have gained the Alpha state will need  to perform the difference in ryo and create a topic with the difference in wc.


#SatoLaw

21Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Thu Nov 13, 2014 3:05 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

I don't see why the stage needs an increase >.>
Sato approved it at 2k the first time, then it was revamped and alpha stage doesn't get much of a boost compared to before, so I halfed the price.
Why would I have to edit that tech? It requires upkeep, the site has upkeep standards of its own, so I'll be sticking to those >.>

22Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Thu Nov 13, 2014 7:13 pm

Setōshi

Setōshi

If you haven't heard, things are getting Re-Reviewed, thus the above edits do need to be made. Yes, the site does have Upkeep rules, this is an addition to those due to the severity of the tech. It has been discussed with an Admin, thus until further notice this clan is denied until the above changes have been made.

23Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Thu Nov 13, 2014 7:23 pm

Shinsui

Shinsui

Ok sure, though I'd like to discuss it first. You're open minded right?
Ok so the ryo, sure I can bump it back to 2k, but 2,5k is a little overboard I think. I mean, the only boost the alpha gets which makes them special is that 25 meter senses thing.
The tech: I'm not sure how that would work. There aren't different versions of it >.> Only one version. Having it active for those specific posts aren't versions, just times it takes to heal. I could make the upkeep go higher with 15cp, though I think upkeep is every 3 posts and not two, pretty sure yes. The fact that the technique doesn't remove poisons anymore already weakened it once, it only heals physical injuries now. Sure it can heal a limb, but that's after 6 turns, a lot can happen in 6 turns, so I think 20 cp would be a little too high, thus my reasoning for 15. That's 50 chakra upkeep every 3 posts, so 135 chakra (almost half my chakra) to recover a limb. Imagine lower ranked shinobi alphas using it.
Summary: 2k for alpha, 15cp upkeep for tech. That sound good for you?



Last edited by Shinsui on Thu Nov 13, 2014 7:27 pm; edited 1 time in total

24Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Thu Nov 13, 2014 7:26 pm

Setōshi

Setōshi

2.5 for Alpha. 15 additional upkeep like you said (upkeep works every 2 posts by site rules), and 20 additional for healing others.

25Raikan Clan [Done] Empty Re: Raikan Clan [Done] Sun Nov 16, 2014 1:26 am

Shinsui

Shinsui

Le bump

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