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1Yoroyuza Clan  Empty Yoroyuza Clan Tue May 20, 2014 11:15 am

Bansho

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YOROYUZA CLAN

Clan Name: Yoroyuza Clan
Clan element/'s: Yoroyuza Clan  25q3j3nOil Release (脂遁) Yuton
Special characteristics/traits:

  • Clan members are known for their long black hair.
  • Clan members are known for their tannish skin and dark colored eyes.
  • Clan members are most often very tall, with even the women not commonly being under five foot eleven inches

Location: Iwagakure no Sato and surrounding minor countries.

Bloodline Name: Oil Release (脂遁) Yuton
Bloodline Ability: A kekkei genkai which combines the Doton and Katon Releases into a slick oil substance that can cover large areas and is very flammable through the users chakra.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Spoiler:

Clan History: The Yoroyuza clan's origins can be traced back to the Saisho Dansei the "First Men". The original Yoroyuza family members resided in the deserts, creating their kekkei genkai so that they could pull the oil from the ground to use as a currency with the other clans of the "First Men". With the discovery of chakra and the beginnings of civilizations, the clan started to migrate north into Earth Country, it was here that they discovered rich oil fields and settled. They continued to settle here for hundreds of years and with the founding of the Five Great Shinobi Nations they settled in the areas where the mighty village of Iwagakure no Sato was founded.

At first they tried to mine the oil fields nearby, but after a few decades of doing so they realized that the oil was a flammable substance. Children were being born capable of molding chakra and as such they trained them to use the oil in their Ninjutsu.

The Yoroyuza clan produced powerful shinobi capable of using their kekkei genkai in combination with a natural affinity to Katon to create very destructive jutsu. The Yoroyuza clan also became inventors in the village, specializing in technology that incorporated oil to run it. Several clan members have become very important figures in the village and as such the clan is sometimes referred to as "the Heroes Clan".  

The clan is broken into the Main House as well as the two branch houses, the Engineering Complex and the Warriors Complex. The Main House members were often the most capable of using the secret Oil Ninjutsu. The Engineering Complex housed the finest minds in the clan and the Warriors Complex bred the Yoroyuza clan members that had an aptitude for Kenjutsu and other weaponry based techniques.

Members: Open to Iwagakure Shinobi with a RP sample sent to me.



Last edited by Bansho on Tue May 20, 2014 1:02 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Yoroyuza Clan  Empty Re: Yoroyuza Clan Tue May 20, 2014 12:27 pm

Achilles Raiki

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Hello, Bansho, my name is Achilles and I'll be your reviewer today. Going by the template, I will be going top to bottom for your convenience.

I like the effort put into this. The clan name as well as the symbol looks well made.

Your clan Characteristics make sense, and are descriptive about the people in your clan. (Though personally I'd like a bit more information. If that's all you want to show then that's fine.)

I like the Bloodline. It's nothing I've ever seen before, and I like the possibility of what's possible!

Jutsu:

Name: Oil Release: Oil Bath Technique
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Oil
Range: Short Range
Duration: 1 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dog -> Tiger -> Snake -> Hare -> Bird
Description: After finishing the handseals, the user expels a large amount of oil out of their mouth and onto the ground or an opponent.
Weakness: The oil can be washed off with a C-Rank and above Water Release technique, also if the target dodges the initial spew of the oil, then they avoid all negative effects of that.


What exactly does this do?

Name: Oil Release: Bursting Oil Field Technique
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Oil
Range: Short Range
Duration: 1 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon -> Bird -> Hare -> Ox -> Bird -> Tiger -> Snake
Description: After finishing the handseals, the user slams his or her hands into the ground and then draws them up holding them out with palms extended. They then release a large amount of oil chakra over a large area in front of them, covering an area of about twenty-five feet in radius.
Weakness: The field can be washed away by a Water Release technique of B-Rank or higher. Also if the target avoids the initial oil attack then they remain unaffected.


Same Question, what's the purpose of the jutsu?

Name: Oil Release: Oil Wolf Fury Technique
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Oil
Range: Short Range
Duration: 1 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dog -> Monkey -> Horse -> Tiger -> Ram -> Bird -> Dragon
Description: After finishing the seals, the user expels a large amount of oil from the mouth, the oil then takes the form of a wolf about five feet tall and charges towards the opponent in an attempt to coat them with the oil.
Weakness: The wolf can be destroyed with a B-Rank or higher Water Release technique or a B-Rank or higher Shurikenjutsu.


You need to be more descriptive about what these jutsu do.

Other than the issues with your jutsu I liked everything I read. If you have any problems please let me know if you have any questions! :D Once you finish your edits. Post and I will read over once more, and we'll be finished!

3Yoroyuza Clan  Empty Re: Yoroyuza Clan Tue May 20, 2014 12:41 pm

Bansho

Bansho
Tsuchikage
Tsuchikage

Thank you for reviewing my clan, in response to your questions. The oil techniques are merely to get the oil on top of your opponent and to soak them in it, it's highly flammable and as such it leads into combos with the oil techniques and Katon jutsus. I will edit the jutsu to reflect this a bit better.

EDIT: I will also add a few more physical characteristics of the clan.

4Yoroyuza Clan  Empty Re: Yoroyuza Clan Wed May 21, 2014 12:25 am

Achilles Raiki

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Yoroyuza Clan  Kakashi_thumbs_up

Unless any other Admins or mods have an objection or something to add?

5Yoroyuza Clan  Empty Re: Yoroyuza Clan Thu Nov 13, 2014 4:51 pm

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